# HG changeset patch
# User Pascal Bellard <pascal.bellard@slitaz.org>
# Date 1328952603 -3600
# Node ID 6f8ab456b9915aa1f835db44a88ce9e38f232c49
# Parent  03120d71a0d0616222508c0dd6786abade0f72a2
kids: kids.en.html fix from paul

diff -r 03120d71a0d0 -r 6f8ab456b991 kids/rootfs/usr/share/doc/slitaz/kids.en.html
--- a/kids/rootfs/usr/share/doc/slitaz/kids.en.html	Tue Feb 07 12:25:55 2012 +0100
+++ b/kids/rootfs/usr/share/doc/slitaz/kids.en.html	Sat Feb 11 10:30:03 2012 +0100
@@ -17,16 +17,16 @@
 <h2>SliTaz for kids :-)</h2>
 
 <p>
-	Welcome to the SliTaz Kids flavor. This version of SliTaz provide a
-	an easy to use an intuitive desktop for kids older than 5 years. This
-	is the first version, any feedback and wisheses can be done on the
+	Welcome to the SliTaz Kids flavor. This version of SliTaz provides 
+	an easy to use intuitive desktop for kids older than 5 years. This
+	is the first version, any feedback and requests can be done on the
 	<a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">SliTaz Forum</a>
 </p>
 <p>
-	It let the child play educational games, listen to music, write text
-	documents and view or create images. The desktop use Openbox window
+	It lets your child play educational games, listen to music, write text
+	documents and view or create images. The desktop uses the Openbox window
 	manager, wbar for the icons bar and Nitrogen to set background
-	images. The child can also manage is files with PCmanFM, wich is a
+	images. The child can also manage his/her files with PCmanFM, which is a
 	standard and simple file manager.
 </p>
 
@@ -44,42 +44,42 @@
 <p>
 	As on a standard SliTaz system you can install some more applications
 	with the packages manager Tazpkg. Allowed applications for the child
-	are on the icons bar and can also be in the Openbox menu, this let
-	the admin choose wich applications are avalaible or not.
+	are on the icons bar and can also be in the Openbox menu, this lets
+	the admin choose which applications are available or not.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Desktop</h2>
 
 <p>
-	The desktop introduce to a standard desktop (floating windows, 
-	tasks bar) with some large and accessible icons but no menu and
-	no files on the desktop). Any mouse click wil popup a small menu
+	The system boots to a standard desktop (floating windows, 
+	task bar) with some large and accessible icons but no menu and
+	no files on the desktop. Any mouse click will popup a small menu
 	with shortcuts to applications, an item to start a slideshow with
 	all images in ~/Images, an admin menu as well as a logout and
-	shutdow item.
+	shutdown item.
 </p>
 <p>
-	If you want a task bar with a clock and notifycation support, you
-	can start tint2 from command line to try it and add it to Openbox
+	If you want a task bar with a clock and notification support, you
+	can start tint2 from the command line to try it and add it to an Openbox
 	start script to get it run on each session.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Music</h2>
 
 <p>
-	The defaut icons bar have an icon to play music with alsaplayer,
-	when opened the child must click on the play button to start. The
+	The defaut icons bar has an icon to play music with alsaplayer,
+	which when opened the child must click on the play button to start. The
 	playlist is simply all the sound files found in ~/Music, so you
-	just have to drop songs in this folder to add some songs for childs.
+	just have to drop songs in to this folder to add some songs for a child.
 </p>
 
 <h2>Childsplay alphabet in your language</h2>
 
 <p>
 	Childsplay can use voices from Gcompris for the alphabet. We may 
-	have support for out-out-the-box for some languages in future
-	version. For now you must install the appropriate Gcompris voices
-	package and create a symlink, exemple for French localisation:
+	have support out-of-the-box for some languages in future
+	versions. For now you must install the appropriate Gcompris voices
+	package and create a symlink, example for French localisation:
 </p>
 <pre>
 # tazpkg -i gcompris-voices-fr
diff -r 03120d71a0d0 -r 6f8ab456b991 preinit/receipt
--- a/preinit/receipt	Tue Feb 07 12:25:55 2012 +0100
+++ b/preinit/receipt	Sat Feb 11 10:30:03 2012 +0100
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 FLAVOR="preinit"
 SHORT_DESC="Prepare the system to mount an unusual root filesystem"
 FRUGAL_RAM="32M"
-ROOTFS_SIZE="13.1M"
-INITRAMFS_SIZE="4.9M"
-ISO_SIZE="8.0M"
+ROOTFS_SIZE="15.5M"
+INITRAMFS_SIZE="5.3M"
+ISO_SIZE="9.0M"