slitaz-tools rev 397

Tidy up rootcd docs
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sun Oct 04 12:19:46 2009 +0000 (2009-10-04)
parents c127ff8c4f11
children 31c189734a0e
files lib/README rootcd/README rootcd/index.html rootfs/etc/slitaz/applications.conf
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     1.1 --- a/lib/README	Sun Oct 04 03:00:11 2009 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/lib/README	Sun Oct 04 12:19:46 2009 +0000
     1.3 @@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
     1.4 +README
     1.5 +===============================================================================
     1.6  
     1.7 -
     1.8 -SliTaz tools, tinyutils and GTKboxes libraries and functions. On the 
     1.9 -system, all libs goes in: /usr/lib/slitaz. Some libs have a usage and
    1.10 +SliTaz tools, tinyutils, GTKboxes, libraries and functions. On the 
    1.11 +system, all libs go in /usr/lib/slitaz. Some libs have a usage and
    1.12  can be called directly from the command line, example:
    1.13  
    1.14   # /usr/lib/slitaz/libmountbox usage
     2.1 --- a/rootcd/README	Sun Oct 04 03:00:11 2009 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/rootcd/README	Sun Oct 04 12:19:46 2009 +0000
     2.3 @@ -5,12 +5,12 @@
     2.4  Français
     2.5  --------
     2.6  Ce cdrom est un système autonome Live, il vous suffit de démarrer sur le CD
     2.7 -(booter) et SliTaz se lance en mémoire vive (RAM), sans toucher à votre système
     2.8 -actuel. SliTaz peut fonctionner des mois entiers sans redémarrer, le système
     2.9 -peut fonctionner dans 128 Mb de mémoire vive et sur des machines sans disque dur.
    2.10 -Mais SliTaz est aussi pleinement installable sur un disque dur et largement
    2.11 -extensible via le gestionnaire de paquets et la compilation de nouvelles
    2.12 -applications depuis les sources.
    2.13 +(booter) et SliTaz se lance en mémoire vive (RAM), sans toucher à votre 
    2.14 +système actuel. SliTaz peut fonctionner des mois entiers sans redémarrer, le 
    2.15 +système peut fonctionner dans 128 Mb de mémoire vive et sur des machines sans 
    2.16 +disque dur. Mais SliTaz est aussi pleinement installable sur un disque dur et 
    2.17 +largement extensible via le gestionnaire de paquets et la compilation de 
    2.18 +nouvelles applications depuis les sources.
    2.19  
    2.20  Une fois le système lancé, vous disposez d'un shell ash, et vous pouvez retirer
    2.21  le cdrom, car SliTaz utilise la mémoire vive (RAM) de la machine. Le système
    2.22 @@ -32,15 +32,15 @@
    2.23  
    2.24  English
    2.25  -------
    2.26 -SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU
    2.27 +SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel and GNU
    2.28  free software. SliTaz also uses goodies from the Debian project. The goal of
    2.29 -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boots
    2.30 -with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, LightTPD web server,
    2.31 -SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more
    2.32 -{...}.
    2.33 +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working fully in memory (RAM). SliTaz 
    2.34 +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a LightTPD web 
    2.35 +server, SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and 
    2.36 +much more {...}.
    2.37  
    2.38 -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full
    2.39 -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses.
    2.40 +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc and the full
    2.41 +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses.
    2.42  
    2.43  
    2.44  LICENSE
    2.45 @@ -49,9 +49,9 @@
    2.46  Copyright (c)  2007  SliTaz GNU/Linux
    2.47  
    2.48  SliTaz is free software; you can redistribute it and/or modify
    2.49 -it under the terms of the GNU General Public License as published by
    2.50 -the Free Software Foundation; either version 3 of the License, or
    2.51 -(at your option) any later version.
    2.52 +it under the terms of the GNU General Public License as published 
    2.53 +by the Free Software Foundation; either version 3 of the License, 
    2.54 +or (at your option) any later version.
    2.55  
    2.56  SliTaz is distributed in the hope that it will be useful,
    2.57  but WITHOUT ANY WARRANTY; without even the implied warranty of
     3.1 --- a/rootcd/index.html	Sun Oct 04 03:00:11 2009 +0200
     3.2 +++ b/rootcd/index.html	Sun Oct 04 12:19:46 2009 +0000
     3.3 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
     3.4  
     3.5  <h3><font color="#9c2424">English</font></h3>
     3.6  <p>
     3.7 -Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
     3.8 +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
     3.9  but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom,
    3.10  just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc and reboot your computer with
    3.11  the disc in your cdrom drive.
     4.1 --- a/rootfs/etc/slitaz/applications.conf	Sun Oct 04 03:00:11 2009 +0200
     4.2 +++ b/rootfs/etc/slitaz/applications.conf	Sun Oct 04 12:19:46 2009 +0000
     4.3 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
     4.4 -# SliTaz default applications configuration file. Thes apps can be
     4.5 -# started throught wrappers: browser, editor and terminal.
     4.6 +# SliTaz default applications configuration file. These apps can be
     4.7 +# started through wrappers: browser, editor and terminal.
     4.8  #
     4.9  
    4.10  # File manager.