# HG changeset patch # User Paul Issott # Date 1288882663 0 # Node ID 6a5c1f37c05ab7f7769739ced0b920d5b50f035f # Parent c1999eb1a667fd37028c060f9d9f3898f5ddad28 en: tidy up README, index.html diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a base/rootcd/README --- a/base/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/base/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -33,12 +33,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot -with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered -by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a base/rootcd/index.html --- a/base/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/base/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a core/rootcd/README --- a/core/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/core/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot -with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered -by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a core/rootcd/index.html --- a/core/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/core/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a firefox/rootcd/README --- a/firefox/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/firefox/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot -with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered -by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a firefox/rootcd/index.html --- a/firefox/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/firefox/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a justx/rootcd/README --- a/justx/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/justx/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot -with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered -by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a justx/rootcd/index.html --- a/justx/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/justx/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram-cdrom-sqfs/rootcd/README --- a/loram-cdrom-sqfs/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram-cdrom-sqfs/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -34,13 +34,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM) with 144 MB and -more. It needs the CD-ROM with 24 MB only. SliTaz boot with Syslinux, provide -more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue -tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram-cdrom-sqfs/rootcd/index.html --- a/loram-cdrom-sqfs/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram-cdrom-sqfs/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram-cdrom/rootcd/README --- a/loram-cdrom/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram-cdrom/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -34,13 +34,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM) with 144 MB and -more. It needs the CD-ROM with 24 MB only. SliTaz boot with Syslinux, provide -more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue -tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram-cdrom/rootcd/index.html --- a/loram-cdrom/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram-cdrom/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram-http/rootcd/README --- a/loram-http/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram-http/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -33,13 +33,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM) with 144 MB and -more. It needs the CD-ROM with 24 MB only. SliTaz boot with Syslinux, provide -more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue -tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram-http/rootcd/index.html --- a/loram-http/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram-http/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!
diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram/rootcd/README --- a/loram/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram/rootcd/README Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ ------- SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot -with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, SSH server/client powered -by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more {...}. +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}. -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses. +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses. LICENSE diff -r c1999eb1a667 -r 6a5c1f37c05a loram/rootcd/index.html --- a/loram/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 12:20:15 2010 +0100 +++ b/loram/rootcd/index.html Thu Nov 04 14:57:43 2010 +0000 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@

English

-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French, -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom, +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French, +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with -the disc into your cdrom driver. +the disc in your cdrom drive.

Have fun!