# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1299345663 0
# Node ID b330cf97eb418cfaa321d84d66dd6a63f2ef1002
# Parent  a7c4c12f57be247b443c8b86ca871a8b22444f67
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diff -r a7c4c12f57be -r b330cf97eb41 core-xfce/rootcd/README
--- a/core-xfce/rootcd/README	Thu Feb 24 18:41:44 2011 +0100
+++ b/core-xfce/rootcd/README	Sat Mar 05 17:21:03 2011 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-README SliTaz GNU/Linux CD                                          August 2007
+README SliTaz GNU/Linux CD                                        December 2010
 ===============================================================================
 
 
@@ -34,13 +34,12 @@
 -------
 SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU
 free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of
-SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot
-with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, LightTPD web serveur,
-SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more
-{...}.
+SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz 
+boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client 
+powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}.
 
-On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full
-GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses.
+On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full
+GPL license in /usr/share/licenses.
 
 
 LICENSE
diff -r a7c4c12f57be -r b330cf97eb41 core-xfce/rootcd/index.html
--- a/core-xfce/rootcd/index.html	Thu Feb 24 18:41:44 2011 +0100
+++ b/core-xfce/rootcd/index.html	Sat Mar 05 17:21:03 2011 +0000
@@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
 
 <h3><font color="#9c2424">English</font></h3>
 <p>
-Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
-but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom,
+Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
+but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom
 just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with
-the disc into your cdrom driver.
+the disc in your cdrom drive.
 </p>
 <p>
 Have fun!<br />