# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1288895290 0
# Node ID 0eadc3894de44d0981f9d44d42dc1154e689c6da
# Parent  8c0a1f53561de79b46fc9cd690d2290848b37ef6
Edits (We need a copy editor)

diff -r 8c0a1f53561d -r 0eadc3894de4 slitaz/index.en.html
--- a/slitaz/index.en.html	Thu Nov 04 15:58:18 2010 +0000
+++ b/slitaz/index.en.html	Thu Nov 04 18:28:10 2010 +0000
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 <p>
 The Cooking version doesn't provide any Release Notes, major changes are
 announced on the web site and the <a href="http://labs.slitaz.org/">Labs</a>
-provide fresh news about the project's activity. Like the stable version you
+provide fresh news about the project's activity. Like the stable version, you
 will find <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/">documentation</a> on the wiki site
 and support on the community <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">forum</a>.
 </p>
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
 manuals and <a href="relnotes.en.html">Release Notes</a> installed on
 the system. Manuals and this page are accessible through the standard menu.
 Please check the <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/">project page</a> for
-general information about SliTaz. To start to use and configure the system 
+general information about SliTaz. To start to use and configure the system, 
 you can read the <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:handbook:start">Handbook</a>.
 Support can be found on the SliTaz mailing list or the community 
 <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">Forum</a>. 
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
 go to the "DHCP" tab and click "Start", and Slitaz will send a DHCP request 
 to the local router. You may also setup a static IP, PPPoE, PPP, VPN and 
 other networking options by using their respective tabs. To configure a wireless 
-connection you can use SliTaz wifibox by clicking "Wireless Manager" in the 
+connection, you can use SliTaz wifibox by clicking "Wireless Manager" in the 
 Network Manager or by using the "System Tools" menu entry -> "Wireless networks 
 connections".
 </p>
@@ -90,11 +90,11 @@
 <a name="apps"></a>
 <h3>Applications</h3>
 <p>
-To have a list of all graphical applications you can use the SliTaz menu button 
-at the bottom left of the screen. To have a list of command line tools you
+To have a list of all graphical applications, you can use the SliTaz menu button 
+at the bottom left of the screen. To have a list of command line tools, you
 can open a terminal and double press on the tabulation button. And to have
-a list of all installed packages you can launch the package manager user interface
-from the Lxpanel icon or by using the "System Tools" menu entry. To install any new packages
+a list of all installed packages, you can launch the package manager user interface
+from the Lxpanel icon or by using the "System Tools" menu entry. To install any new packages,
 you must have a network connection, the DVD of packages or an USB storage device 
 containing any downloaded packages. Naturally any package management
 can also be done from the command line and <code>tazpkg</code>.
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
 in the System Tools menu, then "Summary". Clicking on the other 
 buttons offers you more information, and using the benchmarks can
 give you an idea on how fast your computer is. To have a list and control
-of all your current processes you can use the "Task Manager".
+of all your current processes, you can use the "Task Manager".
 </p>
 
 <a name="root"></a>
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
 everything is persistent.
 </p>
 <p>
-To generate a LiveUSB system you can use the "Tazusb LiveUSB Tool" from the "System Tools"
+To generate a LiveUSB system, you can use the "Tazusb LiveUSB Tool" from the "System Tools"
 menu or <code>tazusb</code> from the command line. More information can be found in the SliTaz
 Handbook: <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:handbook:liveusb">LiveUSB media</a>
 </p>