# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1287778902 0
# Node ID 58a00e1181f024eec288a9a635c48cee6bbaef02
# Parent  716add01e9d939f5d06c49a412e34e3814078c0f
edit index.en.html

diff -r 716add01e9d9 -r 58a00e1181f0 slitaz/index.en.html
--- a/slitaz/index.en.html	Sun Oct 17 21:58:19 2010 +0200
+++ b/slitaz/index.en.html	Fri Oct 22 20:21:42 2010 +0000
@@ -76,9 +76,10 @@
 "Configure" and the network manager (netbox) will come up. You can then
 go to the "DHCP" tab and click "Start", and Slitaz will send a DHCP request 
 to the local router. You may also setup a static IP, PPPoE, PPP, VPN and 
-more options using their respective tabs. To configure a wireless connection you 
-can use SliTaz wifibox by clicking "Wireless Manager" in the Network Manager 
-or by using the "System Tools" menu entry -> "Wireless networks connections".
+more networking options by using their respective tabs. To configure a wireless 
+connection you can use SliTaz wifibox by clicking "Wireless Manager" in the 
+Network Manager or by using the "System Tools" menu entry -> "Wireless networks 
+connections".
 </p>
 <p>
 More detailed information can be found in the Handbook: 
@@ -122,7 +123,7 @@
 card is autodetected at boot time and audio support works out-of-the-box
 on many systems. If you manually add a new user and can't listen to audio, please
 check that the user belongs to the <code>audio</code> group. For any other trouble please
-look into the full documentation and/or use the forum.
+check the full documentation and/or use the forum.
 </p>
 <p>
 Videos can be watched by installing one single package or using a dedicated
@@ -135,8 +136,8 @@
 <p>
 You can get information on your system by clicking on "System information"
 in the System Tools menu, then "Summary". Clicking on the other 
-buttons brings you more information, and using the benchmarks
-gives you an idea on how fast your computer is. To have a list and control
+buttons brings you more information, and using the benchmarks can
+give you an idea on how fast your computer is. To have a list and control
 of all your current processes you can use the "Task Manager".
 </p>