SliTaz Repositories

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     1.4  <h2><font color="#DF8F06">Documentation (en)</font></h2>
     1.5  
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -The Cooking version doesn't provide Release Notes, any changes are announced
     1.8 +The Cooking version doesn't provide any Release Notes, major changes are announced
     1.9  on the web site and the <a href="http://labs.slitaz.org/">Labs</a> provide
    1.10  fresh news about the project's activity. Like the stable version, you will 
    1.11  find <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/">documentation</a> on the web 
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    1.13  <h2><font color="#DF8F06">Getting started</font></h2>
    1.14  
    1.15  <a name="network"></a>
    1.16 -<h3>Network connection</h3>
    1.17 +<h3>Network connections</h3>
    1.18  <p>
    1.19 -Click on the "Network Status Monitor" then "Configure" and the network 
    1.20 -manager (netbox) should come up. You can go to the "DHCP" tab and click
    1.21 -"Start", and Slitaz will send a DHCP request to the local router. You may
    1.22 -also setup static IP, PPPoE, PPP, VPN and more through their respective tabs.
    1.23 -To configure a wireless connection you can use SliTaz wifibox by clicking
    1.24 -"Wireless Manager" in the Network Manager or from the "System Tools" menu 
    1.25 -then "Wireless networks connections".
    1.26 +Click on the "Network Status Monitor" at the bottom right of the screen, 
    1.27 +"Configure" and then the network manager (netbox) should come up. You can 
    1.28 +go to the "DHCP" tab and click "Start", and Slitaz will send a DHCP request 
    1.29 +to the local router. You may also setup a static IP, PPPoE, PPP, VPN and 
    1.30 +more using their respective tabs. To configure a wireless connection you 
    1.31 +can use SliTaz wifibox by clicking "Wireless Manager" in the Network Manager 
    1.32 +or by using the "System Tools" menu entry -> "Wireless networks connections".
    1.33  </p>
    1.34  <p>
    1.35 -Detailed information can be find in the Handbook: 
    1.36 +More detailed information can be found in the Handbook: 
    1.37  <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html"
    1.38  	>Network configuration</a>
    1.39  </p>
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    1.41  <a name="apps"></a>
    1.42  <h3>Applications</h3>
    1.43  <p>
    1.44 -To have a list of graphical applications you can use the SliTaz menu button 
    1.45 +To have a list of all graphical applications you can use the SliTaz menu button 
    1.46  at the bottom left of the screen. To have a list of command line tools, you
    1.47 -can open a termnal an double press on the tabulation button. And to have
    1.48 +can open a terminal and double press on the tabulation button. And to have
    1.49  a list of all installed packages you can use the package manager user interface
    1.50 -from the panel icon or from the "System Tools" menu. To install some new packages
    1.51 -you must have a network connection, a DVD of packages or a USB storage device with
    1.52 -downloaded packages from an other machine.
    1.53 +using the panel icon or from the "System Tools" menu. To install any new packages
    1.54 +you must have a network connection, the DVD of packages or an USB 
    1.55 +storage device with downloaded packages from another machine.
    1.56  </p>
    1.57  
    1.58  <a name="office"></a>
    1.59  <h3>Office suite</h3>
    1.60  <p>
    1.61 -SliTaz packages database provide some light weight applications to make office
    1.62 -work, all these package are easily installable in a few click trought the packages
    1.63 -manager. SliTaz also provide a simple way to install the famous and powerfull
    1.64 -OpenOffice suite, just search OpenOffice in the package manager, double click
    1.65 -on: get-OpenOffice3 and install the script with the <code>Auto exec</code> option
    1.66 -enable. 
    1.67 +The SliTaz packages database provides some lightweight office applications.
    1.68 +All of these packages are easily installable in a few clicks through the packages
    1.69 +manager. SliTaz also provides a simple way to install the famous and powerful
    1.70 +OpenOffice suite: just search OpenOffice in the packages manager, double click
    1.71 +on "get-OpenOffice3" and install the script with the <code>Auto exec</code> option
    1.72 +enabled. 
    1.73  </p>
    1.74  <p>
    1.75 -To have a light office suite: Abiword as Word processor, Gnumeric as 
    1.76 +To have a lightwight office suite; use: Abiword as Word processor, Gnumeric as 
    1.77  Spreadsheet and Homebank for Bank Accounting.
    1.78  </p>
    1.79  
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    1.81  <h3>System information</h3>
    1.82  <p>
    1.83  You can get information on your system by clicking on "System information"
    1.84 -in the System Tools menu, then clicking "Summary". Clicking on the other 
    1.85 -options on the side brings you more information, and doing the benchmarks
    1.86 -give you an idea on how fast your computer is. To have a list an control
    1.87 -of all curent process you can use the "Task Manager".
    1.88 +in the System Tools menu, then "Summary". Clicking on the other 
    1.89 +options on the side brings you more information, and using the benchmarks
    1.90 +gives you an idea on how fast your computer is. To have a list and control
    1.91 +of all your current processes you can use the "Task Manager".
    1.92  </p>
    1.93  
    1.94  <a name="root"></a>
    1.95  <h3>Becoming Root</h3>
    1.96  <p>
    1.97 -By default, Slitaz doesn't have its desktop running as root administrator,
    1.98 -and it asks for a root password (default <code>root</code>) for any dangerous work.
    1.99 +By default, Slitaz doesn't have its desktop running as root administrator:
   1.100 +it asks for a root password (default <code>root</code>) for any dangerous work.
   1.101  Therefore, it is safer and more secure. To become root in an xterm, simply 
   1.102  type <code>su</code>, and enter the root password.
   1.103  </p>
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   1.105  <a name="root"></a>
   1.106  <h3>Installation</h3>
   1.107  <p>
   1.108 -SliTaz can be installed to hard disk or on a USN mass storage device using the
   1.109 -"SliTaz Installer" from "System Tools" menu, the installer make a full HD install.
   1.110 -SliTaz dont work in memory (RAM) anymore like in Live or Frugal mode and 
   1.111 +SliTaz can be installed to a hard disk or on an USB mass storage device using the
   1.112 +"SliTaz Installer" from the "System Tools" menu. The installer makes a full HD install.
   1.113 +SliTaz wont work in memory (RAM) anymore like in Live or Frugal mode and 
   1.114  everything is persistant.
   1.115  </p>
   1.116  <p>
   1.117 -To generate a LiveUSB system you can use "Tazusb LiveUSB Tool" from "System Tools"
   1.118 -or <code>tazusb</code> from the command line. More information can be found on SliTaz
   1.119 -Handbook: <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html"
   1.120 -	>LiveUSB media</a>
   1.121 +To generate a LiveUSB system you can use "Tazusb LiveUSB Tool" from the "System Tools"
   1.122 +menu or <code>tazusb</code> from the command line. More information can be found in the SliTaz
   1.123 +Handbook: <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html">LiveUSB media</a>
   1.124  </p>
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