# HG changeset patch # User Paul Issott # Date 1398976751 -3600 # Node ID a0cc5234d53743a19ad7babb58d109c04fa12ec7 # Parent 17d70cbe5f1b8ac61cf74618857feb9d957a8695 arm: edit codex diff -r 17d70cbe5f1b -r a0cc5234d537 arm/codex/index.html --- a/arm/codex/index.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 +++ b/arm/codex/index.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 @@ -42,8 +42,8 @@

SliTaz Raspberry Pi book

- Pibook - A PocketBook dedicated to SliTaz - and the Raspberry Pi: + Pibook - A Pocket Book dedicated to SliTaz + and the Raspberry Pi

diff -r 17d70cbe5f1b -r a0cc5234d537 arm/codex/setup.html --- a/arm/codex/setup.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 +++ b/arm/codex/setup.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 @@ -58,8 +58,8 @@

- You can reach you server with the IP address of the machine or from - the machine itself via the localhost URL (link below). And you you + You can reach your server with the IP address of the machine or from + the machine itself via the localhost URL (link below). And you can have some stats and the server status by adding 'server-status' to the server URL, example with the loopback IP address:

@@ -73,10 +73,10 @@

This setup guide will use the small Busybox ftpd applet and inetd - daemon to run the FTP server only when needed. The setup use very - small system resources and the server can handle undread of files. + daemon to run the FTP server only when needed. The setup uses very + little system resources and the server can handle hundreds of files. The root directory is where the FTP files are or will be stored. - Open inetd.conf with a textt editor: + Open inetd.conf with a text editor: 

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@

- We choosed to store FTP files in /home/share/ftp, but you are + We chose to store FTP files in /home/share/ftp, but you are free to use the folder you want. Now restart the inetd daemon to include your new settings:

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@

- Finaly use a web browser to test the services. As usual, you must + Finally use a web browser to test the services. As usual, you must use the local IP address of the server or connect from localhost: 

diff -r 17d70cbe5f1b -r a0cc5234d537 arm/codex/system.html
--- a/arm/codex/system.html	Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100
+++ b/arm/codex/system.html	Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
 

 	To use the interface, you must find the IP address of your device
 	and connect with the root user and password via the correct local IP.
-	You can use ipinfo on on device to get the IP address:
+	You can use ipinfo on the device to get the IP address:
 

 
 $ ipinfo
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
 

 

 	The service is started by default to help new users. If you want to
-	stop/start the web server manually from cmdline you can use the
+	stop/start the web server manually from a cmdline you can use the
 	following commands and if you want to disable the service at boot
 	you must edit: /etc/rcS.conf. Start or stop the web server:
 

@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 # startd httpd

- If you wich to run the service on an othe port, you can edit the web + If you wish to run the service on another port, you can edit the web server configuration file: /etc/httpd.conf

diff -r 17d70cbe5f1b -r a0cc5234d537 arm/rpi/index.html --- a/arm/rpi/index.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 +++ b/arm/rpi/index.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ Official SliTaz GNU/Linux Raspberry Pi distribution, a small operating system for a small computer! The goal is to provide a fast, minimal footprint and optimized distro for the Raspberry Pi. You can setup a - wide range of system type, from servers to desktop and learning platform. + wide range of system types, from servers to desktops and learning platforms. Check out our PiBook to get started with your Raspberry Pi and SliTaz.

@@ -90,11 +90,11 @@

For now the only installation option is to have 3 partitions on the SD card then run the install.sh script from a Linux system. In time we - will try to provide disk image for MS Windows and OSX users. + will try to provide a disk image for MS Windows and OSX users.

- Read out PiBook: + Read our PiBook: Installation instructions
@@ -108,8 +108,8 @@

- Finally, you can also control a SliTaz Pi desktop graphicaly with a - VNC viewer. Check out: + Finally, you can also control a SliTaz Pi desktop graphically with a + VNC viewer. Check out the: PiBook Remote control section for more information.

@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@

TazBerry

- TazBerry is a Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box. + TazBerry is an Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box. It provides a simple menu and lets you edit files with your favorite text editor. TazBerry can be started from the window manger menu or from the cmdline with: @@ -138,8 +138,8 @@

- PiBook - Read out SliTaz - Raspberry Pi PocketBook for suggested usage and setup guides. + PiBook - Read our SliTaz + Raspberry Pi Pocket Book for suggested usage and setup guides.

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