slitaz-forge rev 488

Edit /rpi/index.html
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sat Mar 29 18:42:40 2014 +0000 (2014-03-29)
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     1.4  <h2>Downloads</h2>
     1.5  
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -	SliTaz Raspberry Pi provide actually a text mode base system and a
     1.8 +	SliTaz Raspberry Pi actually provides a text mode base system and a
     1.9  	light desktop flavor powered by JWM and the FOX toolkit. Download 
    1.10 -	the tarball, extract, install and boot your Rapberry Pi!
    1.11 +	the tarball, extract, install and boot your Raspberry Pi!
    1.12  </p>
    1.13  
    1.14  <div class="box-dl">
    1.15 @@ -109,15 +109,15 @@
    1.16  <h2>Remote control</h2>
    1.17  
    1.18  <p>
    1.19 -	SliTaz Raspberry Pi provide a CGI SHell remote control environment
    1.20 -	with plugins support and HTTP authentification. You can rebooot/halt
    1.21 +	SliTaz Raspberry Pi provides a CGI SHell remote control environment
    1.22 +	with plugins support and HTTP authentication. You can rebooot/halt
    1.23  	the system, edit any system file and set boot options. Creating new
    1.24 -	plugings is a nice way to learn CGI/SHell scripts and Linux commands.
    1.25 +	plugins is a nice way to learn CGI/SHell scripts and Linux commands.
    1.26  </p>
    1.27  
    1.28  <p>
    1.29 -	You must first start the web server then check the IP adress of your
    1.30 -	device and connect with root user and password via the IP:
    1.31 +	You must first start the web server then check the IP address of your
    1.32 +	device and connect with the root user and password via the IP:
    1.33  </p>
    1.34  
    1.35  <pre>
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    1.37  
    1.38  <p>
    1.39  	TazBerry is a Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box.
    1.40 -	It provide a simple menu and let you edit files with your favorite
    1.41 +	It provides a simple menu and lets you edit files with your favorite
    1.42  	text editor. TazBerry can be started from the window manger menu or
    1.43 -	from the cmdline with: 'tazbery'
    1.44 +	from the cmdline with: 'tazberry'
    1.45  </p>
    1.46  
    1.47  <h2>Sat-rpi builder</h2>