slitaz-forge rev 488
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author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Sat Mar 29 18:42:40 2014 +0000 (2014-03-29) |
parents | 762b4433c38f |
children | 8a70dbd2b619 |
files | arm/rpi/index.html |
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1.1 --- a/arm/rpi/index.html Sat Mar 29 18:43:42 2014 +0100 1.2 +++ b/arm/rpi/index.html Sat Mar 29 18:42:40 2014 +0000 1.3 @@ -77,9 +77,9 @@ 1.4 <h2>Downloads</h2> 1.5 1.6 <p> 1.7 - SliTaz Raspberry Pi provide actually a text mode base system and a 1.8 + SliTaz Raspberry Pi actually provides a text mode base system and a 1.9 light desktop flavor powered by JWM and the FOX toolkit. Download 1.10 - the tarball, extract, install and boot your Rapberry Pi! 1.11 + the tarball, extract, install and boot your Raspberry Pi! 1.12 </p> 1.13 1.14 <div class="box-dl"> 1.15 @@ -109,15 +109,15 @@ 1.16 <h2>Remote control</h2> 1.17 1.18 <p> 1.19 - SliTaz Raspberry Pi provide a CGI SHell remote control environment 1.20 - with plugins support and HTTP authentification. You can rebooot/halt 1.21 + SliTaz Raspberry Pi provides a CGI SHell remote control environment 1.22 + with plugins support and HTTP authentication. You can rebooot/halt 1.23 the system, edit any system file and set boot options. Creating new 1.24 - plugings is a nice way to learn CGI/SHell scripts and Linux commands. 1.25 + plugins is a nice way to learn CGI/SHell scripts and Linux commands. 1.26 </p> 1.27 1.28 <p> 1.29 - You must first start the web server then check the IP adress of your 1.30 - device and connect with root user and password via the IP: 1.31 + You must first start the web server then check the IP address of your 1.32 + device and connect with the root user and password via the IP: 1.33 </p> 1.34 1.35 <pre> 1.36 @@ -133,9 +133,9 @@ 1.37 1.38 <p> 1.39 TazBerry is a Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box. 1.40 - It provide a simple menu and let you edit files with your favorite 1.41 + It provides a simple menu and lets you edit files with your favorite 1.42 text editor. TazBerry can be started from the window manger menu or 1.43 - from the cmdline with: 'tazbery' 1.44 + from the cmdline with: 'tazberry' 1.45 </p> 1.46 1.47 <h2>Sat-rpi builder</h2>