# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1299511249 0
# Node ID f1d05bd96d7f4c8d3640356fc39a5924521da941
# Parent  f6c402b4d86bdc98e12abf773afb3e5627a80d1d
Tiny edits

diff -r f6c402b4d86b -r f1d05bd96d7f lib/libtazpkgbox
--- a/lib/libtazpkgbox	Fri Mar 04 16:00:21 2011 +0100
+++ b/lib/libtazpkgbox	Mon Mar 07 15:20:49 2011 +0000
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@
 				fi
 			fi	
 		else
-			# Input contain package name, don't refer to Package word as
+			# Input contains package name, don't refer to Package word as
 			# tazpkg can use other languages.
 			PACKAGE=$(echo $input | sed 's/^.* \(.*\) :.*$/\1/')
 			ICON=tazpkg
diff -r f6c402b4d86b -r f1d05bd96d7f tazpkg
--- a/tazpkg	Fri Mar 04 16:00:21 2011 +0100
+++ b/tazpkg	Mon Mar 07 15:20:49 2011 +0000
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 #!/bin/sh
 # Tazpkg - Tiny autonomous zone packages manager.
 #
-# This is a lightwight packages manager for *.tazpkg files, all written in
+# This is a lightwight packages manager for *.tazpkg files written in
 # SHell script. It works well with Busybox ash shell and bash. Tazpkg lets you
 # list, install, remove, download or get information about a package. You can
 # use 'tazpkg usage' to get a list of commands with short descriptions. Tazpkg
 # also resolves dependencies and can upgrade packages from a mirror. I18n is
-# done with gettext and eval_gettext, ex:
+# done using gettext and eval_gettext, ex:
 # 	gettext "displayed text"; echo
 # 	eval_gettext "display \$VARIABLE"; echo
 # 	echo -e "BOLD `gettext \"i18n message\"`"
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
   recharge         `gettext \"Recharge your packages.list from the mirror.\"`
   repack           `gettext \"Create a package archive from an installed package.\"`
   repack-config    `gettext \"Create a package archive with configuration files.\"`
-  recompress       `gettext \"Rebuild a package with the better compression ratio.\"`
+  recompress       `gettext \"Rebuild a package with a better compression ratio.\"`
   upgrade          `gettext \"Upgrade one or all installed/listed package(s) on the mirror.\"`
   upgradeable      `gettext \"Build upgradeable packages list quickly.\"`
   block|unblock    `gettext \"Block an installed package version or unblock it for upgrade.\"`
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
 	fi
 }
 
-# Check if the package (*.tazpkg) exist before installing or extracting.
+# Check if the package (*.tazpkg) exists before installing or extracting.
 check_for_package_file()
 {
 	if [ ! -f "$PACKAGE_FILE" ]; then
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@
 		if grep -q ^pre_depends $TMP_DIR/receipt; then
 			pre_depends $ROOT
 		fi
-		# keep modifers and file list on upgrade
+		# Keep modifers and file list on upgrade
 		cp $ROOT$INSTALLED/$PACKAGE/modifiers \
 		   $ROOT$INSTALLED/$PACKAGE/files.list $TMP_DIR 2> /dev/null
 		rm -rf $ROOT$INSTALLED/$PACKAGE 2> /dev/null
@@ -731,7 +731,7 @@
 	else
 		echo ""
 		eval_gettext \
-"Leaving dependencies for \$PACKAGE unsolved. The package is installed but
+"Leaving dependencies for \$PACKAGE unresolved. The package is installed but
 will probably not work."; echo
 		echo ""
 	fi
@@ -929,7 +929,7 @@
 			tazpkg remove $PACKAGE
 		done
 	else
-		eval_gettext "Can't find flavor \$FLAVOR. Aborting."; echo
+		eval_gettext "Can't find flavor \$FLAVOR. Abort."; echo
 	fi
 	cd $TOP_DIR
 	rm -rf $TMP_DIR
@@ -1306,7 +1306,7 @@
 BEGIN {
 	goturl=0;
 	printf "# Taz package receipt.\n";
-	printf "# generated by tazpkg from rpm package %s\n",pkg;
+	printf "# Generated by tazpkg from rpm package %s\n",pkg;
 }
 {
 	if (/^Name/) { name=$3; printf "PACKAGE=\"%s\"\n",$3; }
@@ -1400,9 +1400,9 @@
 		`gettext "meta"`) echo "meta" ;;
 		`gettext "non-free"`) echo "non-free" ;;
 		
-		# If gategory isn't one of thoses traduced in native language,
-		# keep it untranslated. This allow both native and english
-		# language support. This also support custom categories.
+		# If category is not one of those translated in native language,
+		# keep it untranslated. This allows both native and english
+		# language support. This also supports custom categories.
 		*) echo "$1" ;;
 		
 	esac
@@ -1687,7 +1687,7 @@
 
 		else
 
-		# Check all pkg files.list in search match with specify the package
+		# Check all pkg files.list in search match which specify the package
 		# name and the full path to the file(s).
 		for pkg in $INSTALLED/*
 		do
@@ -2415,7 +2415,7 @@
 		# What to do if major or minor version is smaller.
 		if [ "$FIXE" == "yes" ]; then
 			gettext \
-"WARNING ---> Installed package seems more recent than the mirrored
+"WARNING ---> Installed package(s) seem(s) more recent than the mirrored
 one. You can block packages using the command : 'tazpkg block package'.
 Or upgrade packages at your own risk."
 			echo ""
@@ -2846,7 +2846,7 @@
 			cat <<EOT
 usage:   tazpkg link package_name slitaz_root
 example: 'tazpkg link openoffice /mnt' will use less than 100k in
-         your ram running system.
+         your running system ram.
 EOT
 			exit 1
 		fi
@@ -2874,7 +2874,7 @@
 				done
 			else
 				echo ""
-				eval_gettext "Leaving dependencies for \$PACKAGE unsolved."; echo
+				eval_gettext "Leaving dependencies for \$PACKAGE unresolved."; echo
 				gettext "The package is installed but will probably not work."; echo
 				echo ""
 			fi
diff -r f6c402b4d86b -r f1d05bd96d7f tazpkgbox-install
--- a/tazpkgbox-install	Fri Mar 04 16:00:21 2011 +0100
+++ b/tazpkgbox-install	Mon Mar 07 15:20:49 2011 +0000
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 #!/bin/sh
 #
-# GTKdialog interface to SliTaz Packages Manager aka Tazpkg. Notes:
-# Notebook tab are vbox, tabs are used to indent and functions are
+# GTKdialog interface to SliTaz Packages Manager aka Tazpkg. Note:
+# Notebook tabs are vbox, tabs are used to indent and functions are
 # split and found in $LIB.
 #
 # (C) GNU gpl v3 - SliTaz GNU/Linux 2010.