# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1469127035 -3600
# Node ID af73cc7ea672f4d464418299179514a075fc0dcd
# Parent  080c97de1a5dca91c4c8deb39d38eb31e6055e94
Tiny edits

diff -r 080c97de1a5d -r af73cc7ea672 index.php
--- a/index.php	Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200
+++ b/index.php	Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 <h3>Tiny SliTaz goals</h3>
 
 <p>Useful software, expansible, easy to configure, runs fully in RAM, simple,
-light and fast for minimum hardware resources: ie fits on one floppy disk (IDE
+light and fast for minimum hardware resources, i.e. fits on one floppy disk (IDE
 disk optional), runs on a 386SX processor and needs as little memory as possible
 (currently 4MB with a 2.6.14 Kernel).
 <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:guides:pxe#why-use-pxe-the-vnc-example">Example</a>
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
 
 <p>Tiny SliTaz uses a Linux Kernel with an <a href="dist/rootfs.cpio"
 title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">embedded filesystem</a>. An extra initramfs
-can also be loaded with the configuration and extra packages.</p>
+can also be loaded with the configuration files and extra packages.</p>
 
 <p>The initramfs is based on <a href="http://uclibc.org/"
 title="Instead of glibc">uClibc</a> and busybox with its <a
diff -r 080c97de1a5d -r af73cc7ea672 step1.php
--- a/step1.php	Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200
+++ b/step1.php	Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
 
 <p>The file <tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> in the initramfs holds all information
 to rebuild your Tiny SliTaz system. You should upload your
-<tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> first if you want to upgrade your system only.</p>
+<tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> first if you only want to upgrade your system.</p>
 
 <form method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data" action="<?php echo $_SERVER["PHP_SELF"]; ?>">
 	Packages configuration:
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
 
 <p id="kernel">You can upload a custom Kernel or use an official one. Your
 Kernel should have an embedded initramfs with busybox like <a
-href="dist/rootfs.cpio" title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">this one</a>.</p>
+href="dist/rootfs.cpio" title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">this</a>.</p>
 
 <div>
 	<form method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data" action="<?php echo $_SERVER["PHP_SELF"]; ?>">
diff -r 080c97de1a5d -r af73cc7ea672 step5.php
--- a/step5.php	Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200
+++ b/step5.php	Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100
@@ -22,10 +22,10 @@
 	<tr><td class="first">Bootable images:</td><td>
 
 <?php
-      $title="Neither Windows nor emm386 support. Need a real mode DOS";
+      $title="Neither Windows nor emm386 supported. Needs a real mode DOS";
       if ((filesize($_POST['tmp_dir']."rootfs.gz") + 
 	   filesize($_POST['tmp_dir']."fs/boot/bzImage")) <= 18*80*1024) {
-	   $title .= ". Tip: can be splitted in several boot floppies too";
+	   $title .= ". Tip: can be split in several boot floppies too";
 	    ?>
 		<input name="download" value="Floppy image" type="submit"
 		       title="You can use dd or rawrite to create the 1.44M floppy disk" />
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
 		<input name="download" value="DOS/EXE" type="submit"
 		       title="<?php echo $title; ?>" />
 <?php if (file_exists("/boot/isolinux/isolinux.bin")) {
-	  $title="Can be burn on a CD-ROM or written on a USB Key / memory card";
+	  $title="Can be burnt on to a CD-ROM or written on to a USB Key / memory card";
 	  if (file_exists("/usr/bin/iso2exe"))
 	  	$title .= ", or renamed with the .exe suffix and run with DOS or Windows";
 	   ?>
@@ -87,8 +87,8 @@
 The kernel can be <a href="http://elinux.org/Linux_Tiny">tuned/patched</a> or
 you can use an earlier version.</p>
 
-<p>You can test Tiny SliTaz without pre-historic hardware using qemu (need the
-<tt>ne</tt> module):</p>
+<p>You can test Tiny SliTaz without pre-historic hardware using qemu (needs the
+<tt>net</tt> module):</p>
 
 <pre>
 qemu -cpu 486 -m 4 -net nic,model=ne2k_isa -net tap -fda slitaz.img