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author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Mon Apr 13 19:51:43 2009 +0000 (2009-04-13) |
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1.1 --- a/en/about/index.html Mon Apr 13 01:14:54 2009 +0200 1.2 +++ b/en/about/index.html Mon Apr 13 19:51:43 2009 +0000 1.3 @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ 1.4 <li>Database engine with SQLite.</li> 1.5 <li>Generate a LiveUSB device.</li> 1.6 <li>Tools to create, edit or burn CD or DVD images.</li> 1.7 - <li>Elegent desktop with JWM running on the top of Xvesa (X server).</li> 1.8 + <li>Elegent desktop with Openbox running on the top of Xvesa (X server).</li> 1.9 <li>Homemade graphical boxes to command line utilities.</li> 1.10 <li>1400 packages easily installable from the mirror.</li> 1.11 <li>Active and friendly community.</li> 1.12 @@ -121,8 +121,8 @@ 1.13 <p> 1.14 SliTaz's Web site is also available in several languages and is 1.15 part of the <a href="../../i18n.html">internationalization project</a>. 1.16 -The web site is there to let you <a href="../get/">download</a> SliTaz 1.17 -LiveCD and help developping the project. You can check the 1.18 +The web site allows you to <a href="../get/">download</a> the SliTaz 1.19 +LiveCD and lend a hand developing the project. You can check the 1.20 <a href="../doc/">documentation</a> area to learn how to use the SliTaz 1.21 LiveCD and configure the system. 1.22 </p> 1.23 @@ -130,8 +130,8 @@ 1.24 <a name="reviews"></a> 1.25 <h3>Reviews</h3> 1.26 <p> 1.27 -SliTaz GNU/Linux 1.0 has been reviewed on several web site of reference 1.28 -in the GNU/Linux world. Thanks to everyone for support. 1.29 +SliTaz GNU/Linux 1.0 has been reviewed on several web sites. Thanks to 1.30 +everyone for support. 1.31 </p> 1.32 <ul> 1.33 <li><a href="http://distrowatch.com/weekly.php?issue=20080331"