# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1230380959 0
# Node ID 1fb71a0b7347ced70d7be48189a5772c332f70b6
# Parent  3291e51abf30b57934dd1764bff5cb40cf5dc942
en: Edits and typos

diff -r 3291e51abf30 -r 1fb71a0b7347 en/doc/cookbook/index.html
--- a/en/doc/cookbook/index.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/cookbook/index.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
@@ -51,8 +51,8 @@
 At the base of the Cookbook is the <a href="../scratchbook/">Scratchbook</a>, 
 this contains instructions to create your own LiveCD by describing the creation of the 
 first ever public version of SliTaz in March 2007. 
-The Cookbook is modified by the SliTaz community and steadily improved, it provides technical 
-instructions about the distribution useful to developers and advanced users.
+The Cookbook is modified by the SliTaz community and steadily improved, it provides technical
+instructions useful to developers and advanced users.
 </p>
 
 
diff -r 3291e51abf30 -r 1fb71a0b7347 en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
 <h4>Install Tazlito on another distribution</h4>
 <p>
 Tazlito does not generate dependencies for the LiveCD, but
-it depends of Cdrkit to burn the image and Tazpkg to 
+it depends on Cdrkit to burn the image and Tazpkg to 
 regenerate SliTaz packages you want installed. To retrieve 
 and install Tazlito, follow the instructions in the README
 file in <a href="http://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/sources/tazlito/"
diff -r 3291e51abf30 -r 1fb71a0b7347 en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html
--- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
 <a name="about"></a>
 <h3><font color="#6c0023">About</font></h3>
 <p>
-This chaper describes the facilities libraries and basic text mode applications supplied with
+This chaper describes the facilities libraries and basic console applications supplied with
 SliTaz.
 </p>
 <h4>Assign an environment variable ($fs)</h4>
@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
 <p>
 The user configuration files authorized_keys and known_hosts are in ~/.ssh. This directory and the 
 file known_hosts are created automatically the first time the user launches dbclient. The system 
-configuration files for the Dropbear server are in /etc/Dropbear:
+configuration files for the Dropbear server are in /etc/dropbear:
  </p>
 <pre> # mkdir $fs/etc/dropbear
 </pre>
diff -r 3291e51abf30 -r 1fb71a0b7347 en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html
--- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
@@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
 <h4>locale</h4>
 <p>
 About the language, you can copy the .mo files created when installing nano from
-/usr/share/locale/(fr,en,de,es,etc)/LC_MESSAGES to the rootfs. Example for the the French language:
+/usr/share/locale/(fr,en,de,es,etc)/LC_MESSAGES to the rootfs. Example for the French language:
 </p>
 <pre> # cp -a _pkg/usr/share/locale/fr/LC_MESSAGES $fs/usr/share/locale/fr
 </pre>
diff -r 3291e51abf30 -r 1fb71a0b7347 en/doc/scratchbook/base-system.html
--- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-system.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-system.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
@@ -531,7 +531,7 @@
 <pre> # find . -print | cpio -o -H newc | gzip -9 &gt; ../rootfs.gz
 </pre>
 <p>
-You should have a file rootfs.gz about 1 to 2MB in the working directory SliTaz.
+You should have a file rootfs.gz about 1 to 2MB in the working directory SliTaz/.
 </p>
 <p>
 For a new image, when making changes in rootfs, simply copy the new rootfs.gz archive to rootcd/boot 
diff -r 3291e51abf30 -r 1fb71a0b7347 en/doc/scratchbook/gtk-apps.html
--- a/en/doc/scratchbook/gtk-apps.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/gtk-apps.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
@@ -168,8 +168,9 @@
 <a name="emelfm2"></a>
 <h3><font color="#6c0023">emelfm2-0.3.5 - File Manager</font></h3>
 <p>
-The emelFM2 application is a file manager providing lots of useful functions, such as mounting 
-devices, a text viewer, opening a terminal in the current directory and so on.
+The emelFM2 application is a file manager providing lots of useful functions, 
+such as the mounting of devices, a text viewer, opening a terminal in the current 
+directory and so on.
 </p>
 <p>
 Website: <a href="http://emelfm2.net/">http://emelfm2.net/</a>