# HG changeset patch # User Paul Issott # Date 1222029856 0 # Node ID 4fc4af3cd0ccbb5fd1c8ac2c29e79ee945d78422 # Parent 1e755b8125f065d6b49c239cb8234c4d4df81acd en: Updates and edits diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000 @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@

The addition of various files and directories to the ISO image simply consists of copying data to the root of the cdrom (rootcd/) and generating a new image. The data may be classified -in one or two directories created in the root of the CD. Once the ISO image is burned to a CD-R/CD-RW +in one or two directories created in the root of the CD. Once the ISO image is burned to a CD-R/CD-RW, you can use SliTaz as before, mounted on /media/cdrom and navigate through your data using emelFM2, Clex or the command line. Your data will also be legible from all GNU/Linux systems, BSD or even ... Windows. @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ started by default after the (timeout) waiting time. Timeout is the number of seconds to wait before booting the system, you can make it 0 to start booting immediately or choose a waiting time as long as 80s. Finally the prompt can be -deactivated using the value 0, F1, F2, F3 display help files and F4 displays a text file: +deactivated using the value 0. F1, F2, F3 display help files and F4 displays a text file: 

display isolinux.msg
 default slitaz
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
 

 To keep things simple and to help you understand the principle, we are going to change a script file in
 order to execute some commands to be carried out automatically when the CD starts up. The target is
-etc/init.d/local.sh, just open with your favorite text editor such as Geany:
+etc/init.d/local.sh - just open with your favorite text editor such as Geany:
 

 
 # geany etc/init.d/local.sh &
 

@@ -307,7 +307,7 @@
 

 If you wish to test out a lot of new possibilities and generate a lot of ISO images, you may want to
 semi-automate the process via a simple SHell script. This tiny script can be created on the command line
-or edited graphically, but don't forget to make it executable. You can create the script with cat,
+or edited graphically, but don't forget to make it executable. You can create the script with cat;
 note that EOF signifies End Of File. To create the script gen_hacked_iso.sh
 using two variables to change the name of the ISO image and the path to the root directory of the cdrom:
 

diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/handbook/packages.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -146,7 +146,7 @@
 

 When a new package tree and receipt has been created in the wok, you can edit the
 receipt with your favorite editor (Geany provides nicely colored code), modify
-the rules functions, add dependencies to the DEPENDS variable 
+the rules, functions, add dependencies to the DEPENDS variable 
 if needed and try a first cook:
 

 
diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
 

 

 Note that the server supports the passing of various options when launched. To change the default values,
-simple modify the daemons configuration file /etc/daemons.conf.
+simply modify the daemons configuration file /etc/daemons.conf.
 

 
 
diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
 

 To mount a cdrom or an USB media you should use mount points located in 
 /media. Note that for a cdrom, you just have to specify
-the device path and for a flash key the mount point already exists:
+the device path and for a flash key, the mount point already exists:
 

 
  # mount /dev/cdrom
diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/handbook/utilities.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/utilities.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/utilities.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -161,8 +161,9 @@
 

 Xpad is a small application that can take quick notes via a 'sticky note' displayed on the desktop. Each
 consists of a note pad that you can hide and customise via a right click on the window in question.
-Once launched you can close Xpad via the dock located on the window manager taskbar. The notes are stored in your directory
-and are available at each session (if you use USB media with the LiveCD or on an installed system).
+Once launched you can close Xpad via the dock located on the window manager taskbar. The notes are stored in 
+your local directory and are available at each session (if you use USB media with the LiveCD or on an 
+installed system).
 

 
 
diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/index.html
--- a/en/doc/index.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/index.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -77,10 +77,11 @@
 
    
 	
  • Handbook - SliTaz Handbook. LiveCD usage,
 	package management, network or system administration
-	and specific instructions. This book is a community effort to provide
+	and specific instructions. This Handbook is a community effort to provide
 	high quality documentation for SliTaz users. It will help you get started
 	with SliTaz GNU/Linux and show you how to configure the system to your own
-	needs and preferences.
    • 
+	needs and preferences. This is the documentation that we advise you to read, 
+	learn and consult first.
 	
  • Cookbook - SliTaz Cookbook. Information regarding the 
 	management, operation and development of the distribution. Instructions on how 
 	to use the wok and package receipts, descriptions of boot scripts and rootcd files,
diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html
--- a/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
 

 
repack

 

-The 'repack' command allows us to recreate a package from
+The 'repack' command allows you to recreate a package from
 the files on a system where it was previously installed.
 To repack a package:
 

diff -r 1e755b8125f0 -r 4fc4af3cd0cc en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html
--- a/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
+++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
@@ -123,6 +123,11 @@
 
 # tazusb clean
 

 
+
MAINTAINER

+

+Eric Joseph-Alexandre <erjo at slitaz.org>
+

+