# HG changeset patch # User Paul Issott # Date 1217282736 0 # Node ID d43b14063442b62ca9137f970f60dda619785819 # Parent 819df175f9502e994c1a0f0ff2e01b35f674c260 en: Edits and typos diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/development.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/development.html Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/development.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 @@ -64,9 +64,9 @@

Before starting a new SHell script, you must pay attention to the interpreter used. Most SHell scripts use /bin/sh, because it's more portable, but there are scripts that rely on -/bin/bash and this must be installed on the system. For a SHell script to function it -must be made executable by the current user; changing permissions on the command line can be -made by using the chmod tool. To create a script.sh and make it executable: +/bin/bash and this must be installed on the system. For a SHell script to function, it +must be made executable by the current user by changing permissions on the command line +using the chmod tool. To create a script.sh and make it executable: 

  $ touch script.sh
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@

Note: when compiling the source code, the ./configure script offers the option: --enable-the-force... Which you can use if you ever feel the need to become Luke -Skywalker! +-enable-the-force... Which you can use if you ever feel the need to become a +Jedi Knight!

@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ The Python programming language is available as an installable package. Once installed, you can create your own scripts/programs and use CGI applications with the LightTPD web server, taking care to configure the server properly. The official SliTaz Mercurial -repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a solution best suited to a product that's +repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - something best suited to a product that's reliable and robust. To install the python package with tazpkg: 

diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/graphics.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
 
GQview - Image manager

 

 GQview is very light and quick and allows you to navigate rapidly between images by selecting files
-in your directory tree with a single mouse click. It supports slideshows, image rotation, adding
+in a directory tree with a single mouse click. It supports slideshows, image rotation, adding
 keywords and tags, drag and drop and can display EXIF data. It also allows you to edit images
 in the software of your choice (Mtpaint, GIMP for example). To install GQview:
 

@@ -91,8 +91,8 @@
 

 mtPaint is an application for the creation and retouching of PNG, TIFF, 
 XPM and BMP images. It offers many simple, lightweight, fast functions like
-capture screen (screenshot) which you can access via the menu --> Graphics --> 
-Grab screenshot, or by typing in a terminal:
+capture screen (screenshot) which you can access from the menu --> Graphics --> 
+Grab screenshot, or via a terminal:
 

 
 $ mtpaint -s
 

diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/install.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/install.html	Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/install.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 This document gives information and necessary instructions on how to 
 install SliTaz on a hard disk. This should take about 10 minutes, SliTaz core
 LiveCD expands to 80 Mb, so we suggest a minimum of 120 Mb of free space. 
-That way you will be able to install a few more packages. If you can
+This way you will be able to install a few more packages. If you can
 use the LiveCD, you should be able to install SliTaz.
 

 
diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
@@ -83,7 +83,7 @@

To restore the configuration, you can use the alsactl restore command or to restore your -preferences at each startup you can edit /etc/init.d/local.sh with your favorite text editor or simply +preferences at each system startup you can edit /etc/init.d/local.sh with your favorite text editor or simply 'echo' the changes: 

diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/network-config.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@

To stop the connection, you can use -pppoe-stop, using the command line. +pppoe-stop.

diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/network.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/network.html Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 @@ -130,11 +130,11 @@

gFTP - FTP client

The gFTP application is a fast, ergonomic client for FTP transfers. It -can resume interrupted transfers, manage bookmarks (favorites), FTP -and HTTP proxies. In addition +can resume interrupted transfers, manage bookmarks (favorites) and FTP +or HTTP proxies. In addition gFTP supports the use of drag and drop between windows, can make several transfers at the same time, compares windows, remembers -passwords and can define external applications for viewing or editing +passwords and can even define external applications for viewing or editing files. On SliTaz, you will find gFTP via the menu --> Internet --> gFTP. diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/office.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/office.html Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/office.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 @@ -72,8 +72,8 @@

ePDFView - Lightweight PDF viewer

To view PDF documents, SliTaz uses the epdfview package. This provides a fast, simple, easy to use -PDF viewer. ePDFview uses GTK + and the rendering library poppler, this enables you to view, move from page to -page, search or navigate the index. +PDF viewer. ePDFview uses GTK+ and the rendering library poppler, this enables you to view, move from page to +page and search or navigate the index.

diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ If you need read/write access to Windows ntfs filesystems you must install a few additional packages from the mirror. The ntfs-3g driver provides stable access to ntfs partitions and ntfsprogs provides -manipulation tools dependent on Fuse. Note that you can format, move or resize +manipulation tools dependent on fuse. Note that you can format, move or resize ntfs partitions graphically with Gparted.

diff -r 819df175f950 -r d43b14063442 en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html Mon Jul 28 20:42:24 2008 +0000 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 @@ -55,9 +55,9 @@

emelFM2 - File Manager

EmelFM2 is a file manager providing many useful functions for daily tasks such as managing devices, opening -a terminal in the current directory, drag and drop, create/rename directories, key bindings or managing file +a terminal in the current directory, drag and drop, creating directories, key bindings or managing file permissions. It contains bookmarks to allow you to browse faster, a text editor/viewer and much more. -EmelFM2 can be launched with some command line options - you can specify the dustbin directory or set the +EmelFM2 can be launched with some command line options - you can specify the dustbin directory or set the start directory to display. For a full list of options: $ emelfm2 --help.

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@

Support FAT and NTFS filesystems

To have the support of FAT16 or Windows FAT32 filesystems, you must install the package -dosfstools. To support NTFS read/write you need to install: fuse, +dosfstools. To support NTFS partitions you need to install: fuse, ntfs-3g and ntfprogs.