# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1400523318 -3600
# Node ID e217f087f3bfe3e66235957557e060d2b5252402
# Parent  4a97c9aefc4e8b1a4432c4b5bbc265dc225fcefa
en/about: tiny edits

diff -r 4a97c9aefc4e -r e217f087f3bf en/about/index.php
--- a/en/about/index.php	Mon May 19 10:42:43 2014 +0200
+++ b/en/about/index.php	Mon May 19 19:15:18 2014 +0100
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
 using the list or directly by mail: &lt;devel at slitaz.org&gt;
 </p>
 
-<h2 id="spec">SliTaz Spec</h2>
+<h2 id="spec">SliTaz Specifications</h2>
 
 <p>
 The default ISO image provides 4 flavors: base, just-x, gtk-only and the
@@ -61,37 +61,37 @@
 powerful servers and small ARM devices such as the Raspberry Pi.
 </p>
 <p>
-SliTaz is easy to use for Linux beginners: we provide a full featured 
-and modern desktop following the Freedektop standards with home made 
-tools that let users configure graphicaly the entire system. The full 
-system can even be controled remotly with our web based configuration 
+SliTaz is easy to use for Linux beginners: we provide a fully featured 
+and modern desktop following the Freedesktop standards with home made 
+tools that lets users graphically configure the entire system. The full 
+system can even be controlled remotely with our web based configuration 
 panel.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-We provides a base system and a stripped down X system from which you can 
-build your own custimozed distro. The custom system can them be used 
+We provide a base system and a stripped down X system from where you can 
+build your own customized distro. The custom system can then be used 
 from a cdrom, usb stick, sdcard, installed to HD or booted from the web.
 </p>
 <p>
-Follow UNIX philosophy: everything is text file. Our packages manager
+Follow UNIX philosophy: ie. everything is a text file. Our packages manager
 and all system settings are stored in simple text files for easy 
-customization and human readable configurations. Use SHell scripting
-for most tools, again for easy customization and developement.
+customization and human readable configurations. SHell scripting is 
+used for most tools, again for easy customization and development.
 </p>
 <p>
-Radicaly simple way to boot using 4 scripts to configure the entire
+Radically simple way to boot using 4 scripts to configure the entire
 system, handle boot options, manage networking and run local commands.
-SliTaz loads the minimal and let users control everything else.
+SliTaz loads the minimal resources and lets users control everything else.
 </p>
 <p>
-Be able to run completly in RAM memory from a LiveCD, an usb stick or
-frugal HD install. This mod allows  you to save documents on a mounted
-partition while the system stays super fast and response.
+Be able to run completely in RAM memory from a LiveCD, a usb stick or
+frugal HD install. This mod allows you to save documents on a mounted
+partition while the system stays super fast and responsive.
 </p>
 <p>
-Structured network with deep SliTaz integration for easy navigations
-between all sites. Structured developement: with Mercurial and cuctom
+Structured network with deep SliTaz integration for easy navigation
+between all sites. Structured development with Mercurial and custom
 tools such as the bug tracker and the cookutils.
 </p>