# HG changeset patch
# User Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
# Date 1239462181 0
# Node ID e8ceba26f899102b0bae316d7f3ea55486d9b2bb
# Parent  899738fd03f9b4494f87872fa2ac5a3fb3654908
en: Minor edits (Hdbk)

diff -r 899738fd03f9 -r e8ceba26f899 en/doc/handbook/development.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Fri Apr 10 20:01:55 2009 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Sat Apr 11 15:03:01 2009 +0000
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@
 </pre>
 <p>
 Now that you have a new executable file, you can edit it. You can continue to stay in the terminal 
-and use the Nano editor (ctrl + x to save &amp; exit) or IDE Geany to edit:
+and use the Nano editor (Ctrl + x to save &amp; exit) or IDE Geany to edit:
 </p>
 <pre>
  $ nano script.sh
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
 <a name="dialog"></a>
 <h3>Dialog</h3>
 <p>
-Dialog can create GUI-based consoles such as 'tazkmap'. The configuration files are /etc/dialogrc 
+Dialog can create GUI-based consoles such as the SliTaz 'installer'. The configuration files are /etc/dialogrc 
 and/or ~/dialogrc for each user. Here's a simple example of using dialog via a console or terminal:
 </p>
 <pre>
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@
 </pre>
 <p>
 Note when compiling the source code, the <code>./configure</code> script offers the option: 
-<code>-enable-the-force</code>... Which you can use if you ever feel the need to become a
-Jedi Knight!
+<code>-enable-the-force</code>... Which you can use if you ever feel the need to become 
+Luke Skywalker!
 </p>
 
 <a name="perl"></a>
@@ -153,8 +153,8 @@
 via the <code>perl</code> or <code>microperl</code> binary. Microperl is a streamlined version of perl - 
 compiled from official sources, Perl scripts running Microperl are compatible with the complete version of Perl. 
 One of Perl's strengths is its portability, it can be used on any system and it's an interpreted language, 
-which means that the code doesn't need to be compiled and can be used directly. On SliTaz Perl and Microperl 
-are not installed by default on the LiveCD; you can either rebuild your ISO or install through the package 
+which means that the code doesn't need to be compiled and can be used directly. On SliTaz, Perl and Microperl 
+are not installed by default on the LiveCD: you can either rebuild your ISO or install through the package 
 manager. Note: Microperl is only 1 MB and provides no modules:
 </p>
 <pre>
diff -r 899738fd03f9 -r e8ceba26f899 en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html
--- a/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Fri Apr 10 20:01:55 2009 +0000
+++ b/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Sat Apr 11 15:03:01 2009 +0000
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
 In LiveCD mode SliTaz automatically configures the sound card by launching a dialog. In most cases the sound 
 card is instantly recognized and you just press ENTER to continue to login and have your sound working. 
 However, sometimes your card is not recognized at startup or simply not supported. Before throwing in the 
-towel, you can try to manually configure your card by asking for help on the discussion list or on the 
+towel, you can try to manually configure your card by asking for help on the mailing list or on the 
 hardware support forum.
 </p>
 <h4>Soundconf</h4>
@@ -109,7 +109,7 @@
 <p>
 The audio player Alsaplayer is designed to be simple, clean and intuitive. Alsaplayer on SliTaz provides 
 support for ogg, mp3 (via libmad) and wav files, playlists and viewers to accompany sound and the ability 
-to adjust pitch and volume. Once launched from the menu just click the play button or load a playlist to 
+to adjust pitch and volume. Once launched from the menu, just click the play button or load a playlist to 
 start.
 </p>