SliTaz Repositories

     1.1 --- a/en/devel/index.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/devel/index.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -162,7 +162,7 @@
     1.4  Note that the current packages are not immutable, if you find an alternative 
     1.5  that is lighter, with more features or more <em>sexy</em> for a few extra KB, 
     1.6  you can suggest it on the Mailing List. Particular attention is given to 
     1.7 -packages for the LiveCD; these should be stripped, removing unnecesary 
     1.8 +packages for the LiveCD, these should be stripped, removing unnecesary 
     1.9  dependancies and compiler options. In general candidate packages for the core 
    1.10  LiveCD are discussed on the Mailing List.
    1.11  </p>

     2.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/rootcd.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/rootcd.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     2.4  <h3>Syslinux/isolinux</h3>
     2.5  <p>
     2.6  Syslinux and main bootloader of SliTaz - we use the isolinux version to start 
     2.7 -the system contained on the CD-ROM. Simple effective and configurable, it
     2.8 +the system contained on the CD-ROM. Simple effective and configurable, isolinux
     2.9  was installed during the creation of the base system.
    2.10  The binary is named isolinux.bin and its configuration file isolinux.cfg.
    2.11  Here's an example of isolinux.cfg using isolinux.msg to post the splash
    2.12 @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
    2.13  directly use by copying to the root of the CD-ROM. SliTaz 
    2.14  provides a logo (rootcd/boot/isolinux/splash.lss) which you can locate in 
    2.15  <a href="slitaz-tools.html">SliTaz tools</a>.
    2.16 -To display a splash image when booting; it's necessary that the 'display' option calls 
    2.17 +To display a splash image when booting, it's necessary that the 'display' option calls 
    2.18  the isolinux.msg file which loads the *.lss format image. Note that the isolinux.msg file 
    2.19  uses 24 ASCII characters. Example using 'echo' and an isolinux.msg file incorporating a .lss 
    2.20  splash image:

     3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/desktop.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/desktop.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
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     3.4  <ul>
     3.5  	<li><code>Background</code> manages the wallpaper. This tag supports the
     3.6  	<code>solid</code>, <code>gradient</code>, <code>image</code> or <code>tile</code>
     3.7 -	attributes, to respectively; use a solid color, create a gradient, 
     3.8 +	attributes, to respectively:- use a solid color, create a gradient, 
     3.9  	display a resized image or tile an image.</li>
    3.10  
    3.11  	<li><code>BorderStyle</code> controls the windows border.</li>

     4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     4.3 @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
     4.4  Before starting a new SHell script, you must pay attention to the interpreter used. Most SHell 
     4.5  scripts use <code>/bin/sh</code>, because it's more portable, but there are scripts that rely on 
     4.6  <code>/bin/bash</code> and this must be installed on the system. For a SHell script to function, it 
     4.7 -must be made executable by the current user by changing permissions on the command line 
     4.8 +must be made executable by changing permissions on the command line 
     4.9  using the <code>chmod</code> tool. To create a <code>script.sh</code> and make it executable:
    4.10  </p>
    4.11  <pre>
    4.12 @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
    4.13  compiled from official sources, Perl scripts running Microperl are compatible with the complete version of Perl. 
    4.14  One of Perl's strengths is its portability, it can be used on any system and it's an interpreted language, 
    4.15  which means that the code doesn't need to be compiled and can be used directly. On SliTaz Perl and Microperl 
    4.16 -are not installed by default on LiveCD; you can either rebuild your ISO or install through the package 
    4.17 +are not installed by default on the LiveCD; you can either rebuild your ISO or install through the package 
    4.18  manager. Note: Microperl is only 1 MB and provides no modules:
    4.19  </p>
    4.20  <pre>
    4.21 @@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
    4.22  The Python programming language is available as an installable package. Once installed, you can create your 
    4.23  own scripts/programs and use CGI applications with the LightTPD web server, taking care to 
    4.24  <a href="web-server.html#cgi-python">configure the server</a> properly. The official SliTaz Mercurial 
    4.25 -repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a combination trusted to a product that's
    4.26 +repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a solution best trusted to a product that's
    4.27  reliable and robust. To install the <code>python</code> package with tazpkg:
    4.28  </p>
    4.29  <pre>

     5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
     5.4  The path to the files used is specified in the configuration
     5.5  file <code>tazlito.conf</code> - by default the files are 
     5.6  located in <code>/home/slitaz/distro/addfiles</code>. The additional files
     5.7 -the core flavor provides are for example the window manager
     5.8 +the core flavor provides are for example, the window manager
     5.9  JWM and some wallpapers. It is easy enough to modify, add
    5.10  or delete files in the root filesystem (<code>rootfs</code>) or the root
    5.11  of the CD (<code>rootcd</code>) and regenerate the distribution. 

     6.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     6.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     6.3 @@ -177,7 +177,7 @@
     6.4  <p>
     6.5  Still using the command line, simply type <code>pppoe-start</code> to start 
     6.6  the connection. A few seconds later the system tells you that it is connected.
     6.7 -If it gives you a message like TIMED OUT you may have poorly configured or 
     6.8 +If it gives you a message like TIMED OUT, you may have poorly configured or 
     6.9  the connection is defective. Please check the wiring and repeat the installation
    6.10  from the beginning. To start the connection:
    6.11  </p>

     7.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     7.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     7.3 @@ -161,8 +161,8 @@
     7.4  </pre>
     7.5  <h4>Rdate</h4>
     7.6  <p>
     7.7 -To syncronize the system clock with a network time server, you can as the 
     7.8 -<code>root</code> administrator use the <code>rdate -s</code> command:
     7.9 +To syncronize the system clock with a network time server, you can as
    7.10 +<code>root</code> use the <code>rdate -s</code> command:
    7.11  </p>
    7.12  <pre>
    7.13   # rdate -s tick.greyware.com

     8.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     8.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
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     8.4  <p>
     8.5  Htop is a system process viewer that displays cpu load, memory state (RAM) and swap used. It can also 
     8.6  display the number of tasks, uptime and PIDs of active processes. Htop can be used with the keyboard in 
     8.7 -console mode, the mouse with a X terminal (xterm) and provides configuration options (F2). Htop can also 
     8.8 +console mode, the mouse with a X terminal (xterm), and provides configuration options (F2). Htop can also 
     8.9  kill processes and you can select items with the up/down arrows or a mouse click. Note htop also functions 
    8.10  via SSH and can be used to monitor a remote server:
    8.11  </p>

     9.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/x-window.html	Tue Sep 09 18:38:28 2008 +0000
     9.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/x-window.html	Wed Sep 10 17:52:18 2008 +0000
     9.3 @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
     9.4  <p>To configure the Xorg server you have two options: <code>Xorg -configure</code> 
     9.5  or the script <code>xorgconfig</code>. It is recommended that you start by using Xorg with 
     9.6  the <code>-configure</code> option. The automatic configuration of Xorg must be done in console
     9.7 -mode without an X-server running; this is achieved by closing all applications and windows and hitting
     9.8 +mode without an X-server running, this is achieved by closing all applications and windows and hitting
     9.9  the <code>alt-ctrl-del</code> buttons. You should now be in console mode. Now you need to run Xorg with the
    9.10  <code>-configure</code> option and copy the newly generated file to <code>/etc/X11</code>: 
    9.11  </p>