website rev 164

en: Edit manuals and docs
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Fri Sep 12 19:18:03 2008 +0000 (2008-09-12)
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     1.4  	package management, network or system administration
     1.5  	and specific instructions. This book is a community effort to provide
     1.6  	high quality documentation for SliTaz users. It will help you get started
     1.7 -	with SliTaz GNU/Linux and show you how to configure the system to your
     1.8 +	with SliTaz GNU/Linux and show you how to configure the system to your own
     1.9  	needs and preferences.</li>
    1.10  	<li><a href="cookbook/">Cookbook</a> - SliTaz Cookbook. Information regarding the 
    1.11  	management, operation and development of the distribution. Instructions on how 
    1.12 -	to use the wok and package receipts, tools, descriptions of boot scripts and rootcd files.</li>
    1.13 +	to use the wok and package receipts, descriptions of boot scripts and rootcd files,
    1.14 +	and various tools.</li>
    1.15  </ul>
    1.16  	
    1.17  <h2><font color="#df8f06">Manuals</font></h2>	
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     2.3 @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     2.4  Tazlito can also generate a distribution from a list of packages 
     2.5  previously downloaded. To run, Tazlito uses the configuration file 
     2.6  /etc/slitaz-tools/tazlito.conf or a tazlito.conf found in the 
     2.7 -current directory that can be easily generated 
     2.8 +current directory that can be generated 
     2.9  by Tazlito. It specifies the name of the ISO, volume, maintainer and 
    2.10  the paths of the packages to distribute and the generated ISO. 
    2.11  Tazlito can also set up a directory containing additional files, 
    2.12 @@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
    2.13  <p>
    2.14  The 'gen-config' command allows you to generate a configuration
    2.15  file ready to be edited. By default the file is created in
    2.16 -the current directory, but can also be in another directory
    2.17 -if specified via the command line:
    2.18 +the current directory, but can be in another directory
    2.19 +if specified on the command line:
    2.20  </p>
    2.21  <pre>
    2.22   # tazlito gen-config
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     3.3 @@ -224,8 +224,8 @@
     3.4  of installable packages on the mirror and before starting 
     3.5  will save the old list. Once the list is updated
     3.6  you can then use the 'list' and 'search' commands. To view
     3.7 -and list the differences, you can use 'list-mirror --diff' and to view 
     3.8 -and update packages, you can 'upgrade'. To recharge the
     3.9 +and list the differences, you can use 'list-mirror --diff', and to view 
    3.10 +and update packages, you can simply 'upgrade'. To recharge the
    3.11  latest list of packages:
    3.12  </p>
    3.13  <pre>
    3.14 @@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
    3.15  The 'block' and 'unblock' commands permit you to block
    3.16  installed package versions so that they are not maintained
    3.17  by an 'upgrade'. The list of packages on hold are contained
    3.18 -in the /var/lib/tazpkg/blocked-packages.list, this file can also
    3.19 +in the /var/lib/tazpkg/blocked-packages.list. This file can also
    3.20  be edited by hand. To block or unblock a package such as
    3.21  Grub:
    3.22  </p>
    3.23 @@ -303,7 +303,7 @@
    3.24  <h3><font color="#6c0023">setup-mirror</font></h3>
    3.25  <p>
    3.26  Setup the URL for the mirror. The 'setup-mirror' command
    3.27 -will ask for the URL for the new mirror. You can specify
    3.28 +will ask for the URL of the new mirror. You can specify
    3.29  multiple URLs separated by spaces. Note that you can also
    3.30  modify the main /var/lib/tazpkg/mirror file. The URL must
    3.31  point to the directory containing the 'packages.list' and