website rev 481

en: Minor edits and typos
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sun May 17 14:06:24 2009 +0000 (2009-05-17)
parents e8ea942d66cf
children 55cb873de351
files en/doc/cookbook/build-host.html en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html index.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/build-host.html	Sun May 17 04:50:23 2009 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/build-host.html	Sun May 17 14:06:24 2009 +0000
     1.3 @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
     1.4  <p>
     1.5  Each script should have a tiny help file and description, if not, just open:
     1.6  </p>
     1.7 -<pre> $ cd /home/slitaz/script &amp;&amp; ls
     1.8 +<pre> $ cd /home/slitaz/scripts &amp;&amp; ls
     1.9   $ ./script.sh help
    1.10  </pre>
    1.11  
    1.12 @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
    1.13  </pre>
    1.14  <p>
    1.15  Cook all missing packages, one by one or with 'tazwok cmp --cook', note
    1.16 -that comparison (cmp) it not required, if you know which packages to
    1.17 +that comparison (cmp) it not required if you know which packages to
    1.18  cook:
    1.19  </p>
    1.20  <pre> /# tazwok cmp
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sun May 17 04:50:23 2009 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sun May 17 14:06:24 2009 +0000
     2.3 @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
     2.4  </p>
     2.5  <p>
     2.6  Tazlito is used by developers to generate the official LiveCD.
     2.7 -The only prerequisite is to have Tazlito installed, this is installed
     2.8 +The only prerequisite is to have Tazlito installed. This is installed
     2.9  by default on SliTaz, but you can generate from another 
    2.10  LiveCD distribution if they have the necessary packages on hand
    2.11  or they can be downloaded.
    2.12 @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
    2.13  the current directory and put additional files in the
    2.14  <code>/home/slitaz/distro/addfiles</code> directory. To store <em>flavors</em>,
    2.15  we suggest that you use a specific directory such as
    2.16 -<code>/home/slitaz/flavors</code>, you can create this yourself and proceed
    2.17 +<code>/home/slitaz/flavors</code>. You can create this yourself and proceed
    2.18  inside:
    2.19  </p>
    2.20  <pre>
    2.21 @@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
    2.22   # tazlito gen-distro
    2.23  </pre>
    2.24  <p>
    2.25 -Voil&agrave;, your first LiveCD ISO image is generated in <code>/home/slitaz/distro</code>,
    2.26 +Voil&agrave;; your first LiveCD ISO image is generated in <code>/home/slitaz/distro</code>,
    2.27  but without an account for the user hacker.
    2.28  </p>
    2.29  <h4>The user hacker</h4>
     3.1 --- a/index.html	Sun May 17 04:50:23 2009 +0200
     3.2 +++ b/index.html	Sun May 17 14:06:24 2009 +0000
     3.3 @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
     3.4  	<li><strong>20 March 2009 - SliTaz at Solutionslinux 2009 (Paris)</strong></li>
     3.5  	<li><strong>28 Feb 2009 - New Cooking 20090228</strong></li>
     3.6  	<li><strong>31 Dec 2008 - Cooking 20081231 - Wifi and NTFS support</strong></li>
     3.7 -	<li><strong>Read the last news :
     3.8 +	<li><strong>Read the latest news :
     3.9  	<a href="de/#news">de</a> |
    3.10  	<a href="en/#news">en</a> |
    3.11  	<a href="fr/#news">fr</a> |
    3.12 @@ -109,13 +109,13 @@
    3.13  <!-- End of news -->
    3.14  </div>
    3.15  
    3.16 -<h2><font color="#DF8F06">Internationalisation</font></h2>
    3.17 +<h2><font color="#DF8F06">Internationalization</font></h2>
    3.18  
    3.19  <p>
    3.20 -The SliTaz web site is available in several languages maintained by the 
    3.21 -<a href="i18n.html">internationalisation</a> team (i18n). Help is always
    3.22 -needed and you welcome to join if you want to see the web site translated
    3.23 -into you language.
    3.24 +The SliTaz web site is available in several languages and maintained by the 
    3.25 +<a href="i18n.html">internationalization</a> team (i18n). Help is always
    3.26 +needed and you're welcome to join us if you would like to see the website 
    3.27 +translated into your language.
    3.28  </p>
    3.29  
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