SliTaz Repositories

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     1.4  using the list or directly by mail: <devel at slitaz.org>
     1.5  </p>
     1.6  
     1.7 -<h2 id="spec">SliTaz Spec</h2>
     1.8 +<h2 id="spec">SliTaz Specifications</h2>
     1.9  
    1.10  <p>
    1.11  The default ISO image provides 4 flavors: base, just-x, gtk-only and the
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    1.13  powerful servers and small ARM devices such as the Raspberry Pi.
    1.14  </p>
    1.15  <p>
    1.16 -SliTaz is easy to use for Linux beginners: we provide a full featured 
    1.17 -and modern desktop following the Freedektop standards with home made 
    1.18 -tools that let users configure graphicaly the entire system. The full 
    1.19 -system can even be controled remotly with our web based configuration 
    1.20 +SliTaz is easy to use for Linux beginners: we provide a fully featured 
    1.21 +and modern desktop following the Freedesktop standards with home made 
    1.22 +tools that lets users graphically configure the entire system. The full 
    1.23 +system can even be controlled remotely with our web based configuration 
    1.24  panel.
    1.25  </p>
    1.26  
    1.27  <p>
    1.28 -We provides a base system and a stripped down X system from which you can 
    1.29 -build your own custimozed distro. The custom system can them be used 
    1.30 +We provide a base system and a stripped down X system from where you can 
    1.31 +build your own customized distro. The custom system can then be used 
    1.32  from a cdrom, usb stick, sdcard, installed to HD or booted from the web.
    1.33  </p>
    1.34  <p>
    1.35 -Follow UNIX philosophy: everything is text file. Our packages manager
    1.36 +Follow UNIX philosophy: ie. everything is a text file. Our packages manager
    1.37  and all system settings are stored in simple text files for easy 
    1.38 -customization and human readable configurations. Use SHell scripting
    1.39 -for most tools, again for easy customization and developement.
    1.40 +customization and human readable configurations. SHell scripting is 
    1.41 +used for most tools, again for easy customization and development.
    1.42  </p>
    1.43  <p>
    1.44 -Radicaly simple way to boot using 4 scripts to configure the entire
    1.45 +Radically simple way to boot using 4 scripts to configure the entire
    1.46  system, handle boot options, manage networking and run local commands.
    1.47 -SliTaz loads the minimal and let users control everything else.
    1.48 +SliTaz loads the minimal resources and lets users control everything else.
    1.49  </p>
    1.50  <p>
    1.51 -Be able to run completly in RAM memory from a LiveCD, an usb stick or
    1.52 -frugal HD install. This mod allows  you to save documents on a mounted
    1.53 -partition while the system stays super fast and response.
    1.54 +Be able to run completely in RAM memory from a LiveCD, a usb stick or
    1.55 +frugal HD install. This mod allows you to save documents on a mounted
    1.56 +partition while the system stays super fast and responsive.
    1.57  </p>
    1.58  <p>
    1.59 -Structured network with deep SliTaz integration for easy navigations
    1.60 -between all sites. Structured developement: with Mercurial and cuctom
    1.61 +Structured network with deep SliTaz integration for easy navigation
    1.62 +between all sites. Structured development with Mercurial and custom
    1.63  tools such as the bug tracker and the cookutils.
    1.64  </p>
    1.65