website rev 129

en: Typos and edits
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 (2008-07-29)
parents d43b14063442
children 26faab439beb
files en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html en/doc/handbook/network-config.html en/doc/handbook/security.html en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html en/get/flavors.html en/rss.xml
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -178,7 +178,9 @@
     1.4  <p>
     1.5  Tazlito also provides several possibilities, such as burning the 
     1.6  ISO or copying additional files in the system or directly
     1.7 -on to the cdrom.
     1.8 +on to the cdrom. The Tazlito <a href="../manuals/tazlito.en.html">Manual</a>
     1.9 +provides more information.
    1.10 +
    1.11  </p>
    1.12  
    1.13  <a name="gen-flavor"></a>
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@
     2.4  Tazusb is a tool that can create bootable usb media with a few simple commands.
     2.5  It can also compress and backup the entire current filesystem to the media, 
     2.6  thus preserving all modifications for future use. Type <code>tazusb usage</code>
     2.7 -for a full list of commands or read 
     2.8 +for a full list of commands or read the
     2.9  <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html">TazUSB manual</a>.
    2.10  </p>
    2.11  <h4>Generate your own LiveUSB media</h4>
     3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@
     3.4  <pre> # pppoe-start
     3.5  </pre>
     3.6  <p>
     3.7 -To stop the connection, you can use
     3.8 +To stop the connection, you can type
     3.9  <code>pppoe-stop</code>.
    3.10  </p>
    3.11  
     4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/security.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/security.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     4.3 @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     4.4  <p>
     4.5  SliTaz has given a lot of consideration to system security. Applications are tested for many months before being
     4.6  included in the distribution. At boot time, a minimum of services are launched by the rc scripts. For a complete
     4.7 -lists of daemons enabled, you can look in the <code>RUN_DAEMONS</code> variable in the <code>/etc/rcS.conf</code> configuration
     4.8 +lists of daemons enabled, you can look at the <code>RUN_DAEMONS</code> variable in the <code>/etc/rcS.conf</code> configuration
     4.9  file:
    4.10  </p>
    4.11  <pre> $ cat /etc/rcS.conf | grep RUN_DAEMONS
     5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
     5.4  <h4>Support FAT and NTFS filesystems</h4>
     5.5  <p>
     5.6  To have the support of FAT16 or Windows FAT32 filesystems, you must install the package 
     5.7 -<code>dosfstools</code>. To support NTFS partitions you need to install: <code>fuse</code>, 
     5.8 +<code>dosfstools</code>. To enable read/write support for NTFS partitions, you need to install: <code>fuse</code>, 
     5.9  <code>ntfs-3g</code> and <code>ntfprogs</code>.
    5.10  </p>
    5.11  
     6.1 --- a/en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     6.2 +++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     6.3 @@ -159,9 +159,9 @@
     6.4  </pre>
     6.5  <h3><font color="#6c0023">gen-clean-wok and clean-wok</font></h3>
     6.6  <p>
     6.7 -The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or to use a copy
     6.8 +The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or create a copy
     6.9  to test with another. Running 'clean-wok' will clean all packages in the current wok and delete any generated
    6.10 -files. To create a clean wok or clean the current wok:
    6.11 +files. To generate a clean wok or clean the current wok:
    6.12  </p>
    6.13  <pre> # tazwok gen-clean-wok path/to/new-wok
    6.14   # tazwok clean-wok
     7.1 --- a/en/get/flavors.html	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     7.2 +++ b/en/get/flavors.html	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     7.3 @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@
     7.4  
     7.5  <h3>Getting and generating a flavor</h3>
     7.6  <p>
     7.7 -A Flavor is a (.flavor) file to generate a special flavor.
     7.8 +A <em>flavor</em> is a (.flavor) file to generate a special flavor.
     7.9  The graphical tool Tazlitobox can create a flavor in a few 
    7.10  mouse clicks. The Tazlito <a href="../doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html">manual</a> 
    7.11  and <a href="../doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html">documentation</a> provide
     8.1 --- a/en/rss.xml	Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000
     8.2 +++ b/en/rss.xml	Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000
     8.3 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     8.4  	<link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/rss.xml</link>
     8.5  	<language>en</language>
     8.6  	<description>
     8.7 -		SliTaz GNU/Linux News.
     8.8 +		SliTaz GNU/Linux News
     8.9  	</description>
    8.10  	<copyright>Copyright © www.slitaz.org - GNU gpl</copyright>
    8.11  	<lastBuildDate>Wed, 16 Jul 2008 22:50:00 GMT</lastBuildDate>
    8.12 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
    8.13  	</item>
    8.14  	
    8.15  	<item>
    8.16 -		<title>Cooking 20080626 with new Kernel</title>
    8.17 +		<title>Cooking 20080626 - New Kernel</title>
    8.18  		<link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/</link>
    8.19  		<guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/</guid>
    8.20  		<pubDate>Sun, 28 Jun 2008 10:50:00 GMT</pubDate>
    8.21 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
    8.22  	</item>
    8.23  	
    8.24      <item>
    8.25 -		<title>Cooking 20080518 and LinuxDays.ch</title>
    8.26 +		<title>Cooking 20080518 - LinuxDays.ch</title>
    8.27  		<link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/</link>
    8.28  		<guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/</guid>
    8.29  		<pubDate>Sun, 18 May 2008 23:50:00 GMT</pubDate>
    8.30 @@ -80,8 +80,8 @@
    8.31  
    8.32  	<item>
    8.33  		<title>March 2008 - SliTaz GNU/Linux 1.0 release</title>
    8.34 -		<link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/</link>
    8.35 -		<guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/#stable</guid>
    8.36 +		<link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/#stable</link>
    8.37 +		<guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/</guid>
    8.38  		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Mar 2008 21:00:00 GMT</pubDate>
    8.39  		<description>
    8.40  	The SliTaz contributors team are proud to announce the publication of SliTaz