website rev 129
en: Typos and edits
author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 (2008-07-29) |
parents | d43b14063442 |
children | 26faab439beb |
files | en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html en/doc/handbook/network-config.html en/doc/handbook/security.html en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html en/get/flavors.html en/rss.xml |
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1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 1.3 @@ -178,7 +178,9 @@ 1.4 <p> 1.5 Tazlito also provides several possibilities, such as burning the 1.6 ISO or copying additional files in the system or directly 1.7 -on to the cdrom. 1.8 +on to the cdrom. The Tazlito <a href="../manuals/tazlito.en.html">Manual</a> 1.9 +provides more information. 1.10 + 1.11 </p> 1.12 1.13 <a name="gen-flavor"></a>
2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 2.3 @@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ 2.4 Tazusb is a tool that can create bootable usb media with a few simple commands. 2.5 It can also compress and backup the entire current filesystem to the media, 2.6 thus preserving all modifications for future use. Type <code>tazusb usage</code> 2.7 -for a full list of commands or read 2.8 +for a full list of commands or read the 2.9 <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html">TazUSB manual</a>. 2.10 </p> 2.11 <h4>Generate your own LiveUSB media</h4>
3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 3.3 @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ 3.4 <pre> # pppoe-start 3.5 </pre> 3.6 <p> 3.7 -To stop the connection, you can use 3.8 +To stop the connection, you can type 3.9 <code>pppoe-stop</code>. 3.10 </p> 3.11
4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/security.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/security.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 4.3 @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ 4.4 <p> 4.5 SliTaz has given a lot of consideration to system security. Applications are tested for many months before being 4.6 included in the distribution. At boot time, a minimum of services are launched by the rc scripts. For a complete 4.7 -lists of daemons enabled, you can look in the <code>RUN_DAEMONS</code> variable in the <code>/etc/rcS.conf</code> configuration 4.8 +lists of daemons enabled, you can look at the <code>RUN_DAEMONS</code> variable in the <code>/etc/rcS.conf</code> configuration 4.9 file: 4.10 </p> 4.11 <pre> $ cat /etc/rcS.conf | grep RUN_DAEMONS
5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 5.3 @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ 5.4 <h4>Support FAT and NTFS filesystems</h4> 5.5 <p> 5.6 To have the support of FAT16 or Windows FAT32 filesystems, you must install the package 5.7 -<code>dosfstools</code>. To support NTFS partitions you need to install: <code>fuse</code>, 5.8 +<code>dosfstools</code>. To enable read/write support for NTFS partitions, you need to install: <code>fuse</code>, 5.9 <code>ntfs-3g</code> and <code>ntfprogs</code>. 5.10 </p> 5.11
6.1 --- a/en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 6.2 +++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 6.3 @@ -159,9 +159,9 @@ 6.4 </pre> 6.5 <h3><font color="#6c0023">gen-clean-wok and clean-wok</font></h3> 6.6 <p> 6.7 -The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or to use a copy 6.8 +The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or create a copy 6.9 to test with another. Running 'clean-wok' will clean all packages in the current wok and delete any generated 6.10 -files. To create a clean wok or clean the current wok: 6.11 +files. To generate a clean wok or clean the current wok: 6.12 </p> 6.13 <pre> # tazwok gen-clean-wok path/to/new-wok 6.14 # tazwok clean-wok
7.1 --- a/en/get/flavors.html Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 7.2 +++ b/en/get/flavors.html Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 7.3 @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ 7.4 7.5 <h3>Getting and generating a flavor</h3> 7.6 <p> 7.7 -A Flavor is a (.flavor) file to generate a special flavor. 7.8 +A <em>flavor</em> is a (.flavor) file to generate a special flavor. 7.9 The graphical tool Tazlitobox can create a flavor in a few 7.10 mouse clicks. The Tazlito <a href="../doc/manuals/tazlito.en.html">manual</a> 7.11 and <a href="../doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html">documentation</a> provide
8.1 --- a/en/rss.xml Mon Jul 28 22:05:36 2008 +0000 8.2 +++ b/en/rss.xml Tue Jul 29 21:35:31 2008 +0000 8.3 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ 8.4 <link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/rss.xml</link> 8.5 <language>en</language> 8.6 <description> 8.7 - SliTaz GNU/Linux News. 8.8 + SliTaz GNU/Linux News 8.9 </description> 8.10 <copyright>Copyright © www.slitaz.org - GNU gpl</copyright> 8.11 <lastBuildDate>Wed, 16 Jul 2008 22:50:00 GMT</lastBuildDate> 8.12 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ 8.13 </item> 8.14 8.15 <item> 8.16 - <title>Cooking 20080626 with new Kernel</title> 8.17 + <title>Cooking 20080626 - New Kernel</title> 8.18 <link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/</link> 8.19 <guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/</guid> 8.20 <pubDate>Sun, 28 Jun 2008 10:50:00 GMT</pubDate> 8.21 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ 8.22 </item> 8.23 8.24 <item> 8.25 - <title>Cooking 20080518 and LinuxDays.ch</title> 8.26 + <title>Cooking 20080518 - LinuxDays.ch</title> 8.27 <link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/</link> 8.28 <guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/</guid> 8.29 <pubDate>Sun, 18 May 2008 23:50:00 GMT</pubDate> 8.30 @@ -80,8 +80,8 @@ 8.31 8.32 <item> 8.33 <title>March 2008 - SliTaz GNU/Linux 1.0 release</title> 8.34 - <link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/</link> 8.35 - <guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/#stable</guid> 8.36 + <link>http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/#stable</link> 8.37 + <guid isPermaLink="true">http://www.slitaz.org/en/get/</guid> 8.38 <pubDate>Sat, 22 Mar 2008 21:00:00 GMT</pubDate> 8.39 <description> 8.40 The SliTaz contributors team are proud to announce the publication of SliTaz