slitaz-pizza rev 57

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author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Thu Jun 28 19:56:24 2012 +0100 (2012-06-28)
parents a56361bbb30e
children aec3092fcb8e
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     1.1 --- a/README	Sat May 19 17:56:19 2012 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/README	Thu Jun 28 19:56:24 2012 +0100
     1.3 @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
     1.4  # pizza setup
     1.5  
     1.6  Now you are ready to start the build bot to build queued flavors one by one.
     1.7 -You can also chroot in the environment to build manually or test.
     1.8 +You can also chroot in the environment to build manually or test:
     1.9  
    1.10  # pizza start
    1.11  
    1.12 @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
    1.13  by default it checks every 20 minutes. The bot frequency can be changed by
    1.14  editing root crontabs in the build chroot.
    1.15  
    1.16 -To check build queue or chroot manually you can use:
    1.17 +To check the build queue or chroot manually you can use:
    1.18  
    1.19  # pizza exec pizza-bot
    1.20  # pizza chroot
     2.1 --- a/doc/faq.en.html	Sat May 19 17:56:19 2012 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/doc/faq.en.html	Thu Jun 28 19:56:24 2012 +0100
     2.3 @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
     2.4  
     2.5  <h3>FAQ</h3>
     2.6  <ul>
     2.7 -	<li>Is it long to build ?
     2.8 -		<p>By default Pizza builds a distro every 15 min but skips a run if 
     2.9 -		another distro is still building. After it depends on the build queue,
    2.10 +	<li>How long does it take to build ?
    2.11 +		<p>By default Pizza builds a distro every 15 mins but skips a run if 
    2.12 +		another distro is still building. Then it all depends on the build queue
    2.13  		and the size of your custom SliTaz distro.</p>
    2.14  	</li>
    2.15  	
    2.16 -	<li>How long do you keep my ISO ?
    2.17 -		<p>We can't guarantee hosting for a long time actually, we will keep
    2.18 -		your product as long as we can. But surely enough time to share it
    2.19 +	<li>How long will you keep my ISO ?
    2.20 +		<p>We can't guarantee hosting it for a long time, but we will keep
    2.21 +		your product for as long as we can. But with enough time for you to share it
    2.22  		with your friends or family.</p>
    2.23  	</li>
    2.24  	
     3.1 --- a/doc/help.en.html	Sat May 19 17:56:19 2012 +0200
     3.2 +++ b/doc/help.en.html	Thu Jun 28 19:56:24 2012 +0100
     3.3 @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
     3.4  	in case the build failed. You must also choose a skeleton to base your
     3.5  	custom distro on. Then add some packages and follow the steps. When
     3.6  	validating the build, Pizza will create a tarball of your flavors and add
     3.7 -	it to the build queue, the tarball file can be directly downloaded. When
     3.8 -	your flavor is built you will get a mail, it will be displayed on the 
     3.9 +	it to the build queue so that the tarball file can be directly downloaded. 
    3.10 +	When your flavor is built you will get a mail, it will be displayed on the 
    3.11  	Pizza main page and on the RSS feed.
    3.12  </p>