slitaz-tools rev 1014

/sdt: tiny edits
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sun Feb 12 09:20:08 2017 +0000 (2017-02-12)
parents b62b418ee6e7
children 86fbc888a1f6
files sdt/README sdt/sdt
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     1.1 --- a/sdt/README	Sun Feb 12 00:04:41 2017 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/sdt/README	Sun Feb 12 09:20:08 2017 +0000
     1.3 @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
     1.4  SDT
     1.5  ================================================================================
     1.6  
     1.7 -SDT stand for SliTaz Distro Tracker. A small set of tools to track and 
     1.8 -build a DB of SliTaz live and insall systems.
     1.9 +SDT stands for SliTaz Distro Tracker. A small set of tools to track and 
    1.10 +build a DB of SliTaz live and install systems.
    1.11  
    1.12  sdt: is the cmdline client
    1.13  Web interface is on scn.slitaz.org/?sdt
    1.14  
    1.15 -The CGI web interface work as a TinyCM plugin, code can be found in 
    1.16 +The CGI web interface works as a TinyCM plugin, code can be found in
    1.17  slitaz-forge/scn HG repository.
     2.1 --- a/sdt/sdt	Sun Feb 12 00:04:41 2017 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/sdt/sdt	Sun Feb 12 09:20:08 2017 +0000
     2.3 @@ -13,7 +13,7 @@
     2.4  
     2.5  get_geoloc() {
     2.6  	# freegeoip.net/{format}/{ip_or_hostname}
     2.7 -	# Exemple: wget freegeoip.net/csv/${ip} -O /tmp/geoloc
     2.8 +	# Example: wget freegeoip.net/csv/${ip} -O /tmp/geoloc
     2.9  	wget -q "${url}?sdt=geoloc" -O ${tmp}
    2.10  	ip=$(cat ${tmp}) && rm ${tmp}
    2.11  	wget -q freegeoip.net/csv/${ip} -O /tmp/geoloc
    2.12 @@ -36,16 +36,16 @@
    2.13  		boldify "SDT Stats"
    2.14  		separator
    2.15  		if wget -q -T 5 --spider ${url}; then
    2.16 -			echo "Tracker in online..."
    2.17 +			echo "Tracker is online..."
    2.18  			wget -q "${url}?sdt=raw" -O ${tmp} && cat ${tmp} && rm ${tmp}
    2.19  		else
    2.20 -			echo "Tracker in unreachable..."
    2.21 +			echo "Tracker is unreachable..."
    2.22  		fi
    2.23  		separator && newline ;;
    2.24  	send)
    2.25  		# Send stats to online DB
    2.26  		if [ -f "${HOME}/.cache/slitaz/sdt.log" ]; then
    2.27 -			echo "It look like you alrady sended this distro to the DB"
    2.28 +			echo "It looks like you already sent this distro to the DB"
    2.29  			exit 0
    2.30  		fi
    2.31  		user="$2"
    2.32 @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
    2.33  		mode=$(get_mode)
    2.34  		cat << EOT
    2.35  
    2.36 -$(boldify "Informations sent to SliTaz Distro Tracker")
    2.37 +$(boldify "Information sent to the SliTaz Distro Tracker")
    2.38  $(separator)
    2.39  User         : ${user}
    2.40  Country      : ${country}
    2.41 @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
    2.42  Running	     : ${mode}
    2.43  EOT
    2.44  		separator && newline
    2.45 -		echo "Send these data to SliTaz Distro Tracker ? "
    2.46 +		echo "Send this data to SliTaz Distro Tracker ? "
    2.47  		echo -n "Press 'c' then ENTER to continue or any other key to quit: "
    2.48  		read anser && newline
    2.49  		if [ "$anser" != "c" ]; then