slitaz-tools rev 317

Edits/typos (more to be done)
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000 (2009-03-10)
parents bf3569f6ba14
children d310a3288496
files lib/README rootcd/index.html rootfs/etc/firewall.conf rootfs/usr/share/examples/README rootfs/usr/share/examples/etc/network.conf tinyutils/bootfloppybox tinyutils/burnbox tinyutils/desktopbox tinyutils/mktazdevs.sh tinyutils/netbox tinyutils/tazctrlbox tinyutils/tazfile tinyutils/tazhw tinyutils/tazkeymap tinyutils/tazlocale tinyutils/tazx tinyutils/wifibox
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     1.1 --- a/lib/README	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/lib/README	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     1.3 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
     1.4  
     1.5  SliTaz tools, tinyutils and GTKboxes libraries and functions. On the 
     1.6  system, all libs goes in: /usr/lib/slitaz. Some libs have a usage and
     1.7 -can be called diretly from the command line, example:
     1.8 +can be called directly from the command line, example:
     1.9  
    1.10   # /usr/lib/slitaz/libmountbox usage
    1.11   
     2.1 --- a/rootcd/index.html	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/rootcd/index.html	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     2.3 @@ -32,9 +32,9 @@
     2.4  
     2.5  <h3><font color="#9c2424">English</font></h3>
     2.6  <p>
     2.7 -Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
     2.8 +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
     2.9  but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom,
    2.10 -just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with
    2.11 +just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc and reboot your computer with
    2.12  the disc in your cdrom drive.
    2.13  </p>
    2.14  <p>
     3.1 --- a/rootfs/etc/firewall.conf	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     3.2 +++ b/rootfs/etc/firewall.conf	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     3.3 @@ -8,11 +8,11 @@
     3.4  # Enable/disable kernel security.
     3.5  KERNEL_SECURITY="yes"
     3.6  
     3.7 -# Enable/disable iptables rules (iptable package must be installed). 
     3.8 +# Enable/disable iptables rules (iptables package must be installed). 
     3.9  IPTABLES_RULES="no"
    3.10  
    3.11  # Netfilter/iptables rules.
    3.12 -# This shell function is include by /etc/init.d/firewall.sh
    3.13 +# This shell function is included in /etc/init.d/firewall.sh
    3.14  # to start iptables rules.
    3.15  #
    3.16  iptables_rules()
     4.1 --- a/rootfs/usr/share/examples/README	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     4.2 +++ b/rootfs/usr/share/examples/README	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     4.3 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
     4.4  README - /usr/share/examples
     4.5  ===============================================================================
     4.6  
     4.7 -Like documentation, SliTaz provides some examples to help learn how to use
     4.8 -applications, configure the system or code you own programms.
     4.9 +Like documentation, SliTaz provides some examples to help you learn how to use
    4.10 +applications, configure the system or code you own programs.
    4.11  
    4.12  Local alias URL : http://localhost/examples/
     5.1 --- a/rootfs/usr/share/examples/etc/network.conf	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     5.2 +++ b/rootfs/usr/share/examples/etc/network.conf	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     5.3 @@ -20,6 +20,6 @@
     5.4  # Set route gateway for a static IP.
     5.5  GATEWAY="192.168.0.1"
     5.6  
     5.7 -# Set DNS server. for a static IP.
     5.8 +# Set DNS server for a static IP.
     5.9  DNS_SERVER="192.168.0.1"
    5.10  
     6.1 --- a/tinyutils/bootfloppybox	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     6.2 +++ b/tinyutils/bootfloppybox	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     6.3 @@ -340,7 +340,7 @@
     6.4  		--yes-label "Install" \
     6.5  		--no-label "Quit" \
     6.6  		--colors --radiolist "
     6.7 -Create a floppy or a cdrom to boot a LiveCD, in a PXE network...
     6.8 +Create a floppy or a cdrom to boot a LiveCD in a PXE network...
     6.9  May need a floppy disk in drive. Erase the whole floppy disk.
    6.10  		" 18 70 50\
    6.11  		SmartBtmgr	"Boot any partition or ATAPI CD-ROM." on \
    6.12 @@ -401,12 +401,12 @@
    6.13        <label>
    6.14  "Without parameters (i.e. with an empty Boot URL) gPXE will perform a normal PXE boot: IP configuration with DHCP and download DHCP bootfile with TFTP.
    6.15  
    6.16 -You can override the DHCP bootfile with an Boot URL such as <i>tftp://192.168.0.1/pxe/pxeloader</i>, <i>http://mirror.slitaz.org/pxe/pxelinux.0</i>, or <i>x-tftm://192.168.0.201//lts/vmlinuz.ltsp</i>.
    6.17 +You can override the DHCP bootfile with a Boot URL such as <i>tftp://192.168.0.1/pxe/pxeloader</i>, <i>http://mirror.slitaz.org/pxe/pxelinux.0</i>, or <i>x-tftm://192.168.0.201//lts/vmlinuz.ltsp</i>.
    6.18  
    6.19 -You can override IP  configuration too (usefull without DHCP server), example: 
    6.20 +You can override IP  configuration too (useful without DHCP server), example: 
    6.21  <i>ip=192.168.0.10/24 gw=192.168.0.1 dns=192.168.0.1 nodhcp url=http://mirror.slitaz.org/pxe/pxelinux.0</i>
    6.22  
    6.23 -The <i>nodhcp</i> keyword avoids dhcp timeouts and the <i>url=</i> keyword is optionnal when the url is the only one argument.
    6.24 +The <i>nodhcp</i> keyword avoids dhcp timeouts and the <i>url=</i> keyword is optional when the url is the only one argument.
    6.25  "
    6.26        </label>
    6.27      </text>
    6.28 @@ -430,7 +430,7 @@
    6.29      <text wrap="false" width-chars="44" use-markup="true">
    6.30        <label>
    6.31  "
    6.32 -Create a floppy or a cdrom to boot a LiveCD, in a PXE network or WEB...
    6.33 +Create a floppy or a cdrom to boot a LiveCD in a PXE network or WEB...
    6.34  May need a floppy disk in drive. Erase the whole floppy disk.
    6.35  "
    6.36        </label>
    6.37 @@ -561,7 +561,7 @@
    6.38    BOOT_DIALOG="$BOOT_DIALOG$tmp"
    6.39  done <<EOT
    6.40  SmartBtmgr /usr/share/boot/btmgr btmgr This OS independent Smart Boot Manager can boot any          partition or ATAPI CD-ROM.
    6.41 -Plop /usr/share/boot/plop.gz plop This non free Boot Manager can boot floppy, hardisk, USB or CD/DVD. Hit Ctrl-ESC for text mode.
    6.42 +Plop /usr/share/boot/plop.gz plop This non free Boot Manager can boot a floppy disk, hardisk, USB or CD/DVD. Hit Ctrl-ESC for text mode.
    6.43  Etherboot /usr/share/boot/etherboot etherboot This network bootloader provides a replacement for proprietary PXE or NBI ROMs.
    6.44  gPXE /boot/gpxe gpxe PXE / iSCSI / AoE network bootloader.
    6.45  Memtest86+ /usr/share/boot/memtest.lzma memtest Memory failures detection tool.
     7.1 --- a/tinyutils/burnbox	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     7.2 +++ b/tinyutils/burnbox	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     7.3 @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
     7.4  				<label>
     7.5  "Burn CD or DVD using Wodim from cdrkit. Before burning,
     7.6  please verify device writer settings or add options if needed.
     7.7 -Audio CD use uncompressed WAV (OGG are decoded)."
     7.8 +Audio CD uses uncompressed WAV (OGG are decoded)."
     7.9  				</label>
    7.10  			</text>
    7.11  		</frame>
     8.1 --- a/tinyutils/desktopbox	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     8.2 +++ b/tinyutils/desktopbox	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     8.3 @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
     8.4  \033[1mCommands: \033[0m\n
     8.5    new-folder   Create a new folder on the desktop with mkdir.
     8.6    new-file     Create a new empty file or SHell script on the desktop.
     8.7 -  add-icons    Add a system icon on the desktop.
     8.8 +  add-icons    Add a system icon to the desktop.
     8.9    calendar     Display a calendar under mouse pointer.
    8.10    notify       Display a notification message (center/no decoration).
    8.11                 Ex: `basename $0` notify \"Message to display\" 4
     9.1 --- a/tinyutils/mktazdevs.sh	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
     9.2 +++ b/tinyutils/mktazdevs.sh	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
     9.3 @@ -218,6 +218,6 @@
     9.4  status
     9.5  
     9.6  # Script end.
     9.7 -echo -n "All devices are build..."
     9.8 +echo -n "All devices are built..."
     9.9  status
    9.10  
    10.1 --- a/tinyutils/netbox	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    10.2 +++ b/tinyutils/netbox	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    10.3 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
    10.4  #!/bin/sh
    10.5  #
    10.6 -# Gtkdialog box to manage network connection and server.
    10.7 +# Gtkdialog box to manage network connections and servers.
    10.8  # Please use tab to indent.
    10.9  #
   10.10  # (c) - SliTaz GNU/Linux 2009.
   10.11 @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
   10.12  	echo "$INTERFACE_LIST"
   10.13  }
   10.14  
   10.15 -# Netbox can be call with args.
   10.16 +# Netbox can be called with args.
   10.17  case "$1" in
   10.18  	detect_interfaces|interfaces_List_actions)
   10.19  		$1
   10.20 @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@
   10.21  </window>
   10.22  '
   10.23  
   10.24 -# Interafce status with ifconfig without arguments to show all
   10.25 +# Interface status with ifconfig without arguments to show all
   10.26  # active connections.
   10.27  #
   10.28  export IFCONFIG='
    11.1 --- a/tinyutils/tazctrlbox	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    11.2 +++ b/tinyutils/tazctrlbox	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    11.3 @@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
    11.4  		</pixmap>
    11.5  	</hbox>
    11.6  
    11.7 -	<notebook labels="Time|Boot loader|Initialisation|Login manager|Users">
    11.8 +	<notebook labels="Time|Boot loader|Initialization|Login manager|Users">
    11.9  	
   11.10  	<vbox>
   11.11  		<frame Date and time>
    12.1 --- a/tinyutils/tazfile	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    12.2 +++ b/tinyutils/tazfile	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    12.3 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
    12.4  #!/bin/sh
    12.5  # Tazfile - Tiny autonomus zone files locator.
    12.6  #
    12.7 -# This is a lightwight files locator for *.tazpkg files, all written in
    12.8 +# This is a lightweight files locator for *.tazpkg files, all written in
    12.9  # SHell script. It works well with Busybox ash shell and bash. Tazfile let you
   12.10  # create and explore a files list database.
   12.11  #
   12.12 @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@
   12.13  		echo -e "
   12.14  Unable to find the list : $FILES_LIST\n
   12.15  You must probably run 'tazfile recharge' as root to get the last list of 
   12.16 -files avalaible on the mirror.\n"
   12.17 +files available on the mirror.\n"
   12.18  		exit 0
   12.19  	fi
   12.20  }
   12.21 @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
   12.22  		done
   12.23  		;;
   12.24  	usage|*)
   12.25 -		# Print a short help or give usage for an unknow or empty command.
   12.26 +		# Print a short help or give usage for an unknown or empty command.
   12.27  		#
   12.28  		usage
   12.29  		;;
    13.1 --- a/tinyutils/tazhw	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    13.2 +++ b/tinyutils/tazhw	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    13.3 @@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
    13.4  #!/bin/sh
    13.5  #
    13.6  # SliTaz Hardware configuration tool. Auto-detect and configure in a
    13.7 -# simple way all PCI, PCMCIA and USB devices. Some Wireless Adapaters 
    13.8 -# need non-free firmware not installed by default, users must use the
    13.9 -# option --get-firmware to force installation. GUI use GTKdialog, is
   13.10 -# called by arg such as all box functions.
   13.11 +# simple way all PCI, PCMCIA and USB devices. Some Wireless Adapters 
   13.12 +# need non-free firmware not installed by default. Users must use the
   13.13 +# option --get-firmware to force installation. GUI uses GTKdialog, and is
   13.14 +# called by args such as all box functions.
   13.15  #
   13.16  # (c) 2009 SliTaz GNU/Linux - GNU gpl v3
   13.17  #
    14.1 --- a/tinyutils/tazkeymap	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    14.2 +++ b/tinyutils/tazkeymap	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    14.3 @@ -95,8 +95,8 @@
    14.4  # If it's a reconfiguration give an info message.
    14.5  if [ -s /etc/keymap.conf ]; then
    14.6  	$DIALOG --clear \
    14.7 -		--title " Keyboard mapping information " \
    14.8 -		--msgbox "\n
    14.9 +		--title " Keyboard mapping information\n" \
   14.10 +		--msgbox "
   14.11  Please logout of your current session and login again to use $value
   14.12  keyboard.\n" 16 70
   14.13  fi
    15.1 --- a/tinyutils/tazlocale	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    15.2 +++ b/tinyutils/tazlocale	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    15.3 @@ -76,8 +76,8 @@
    15.4  # If it's a reconfiguration give an info message.
    15.5  if [ -s /etc/locale.conf ]; then
    15.6  	$DIALOG --clear \
    15.7 -		--title " Locale setting information " \
    15.8 -		--msgbox "\n
    15.9 +		--title " Locale setting information\n " \
   15.10 +		--msgbox "
   15.11  Please logout of your current session and login again to use $value
   15.12  locale.\n" 16 70
   15.13  fi
    16.1 --- a/tinyutils/tazx	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    16.2 +++ b/tinyutils/tazx	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    16.3 @@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
    16.4  slim_config()
    16.5  {
    16.6  	if test $(id -u) = 0; then
    16.7 -		# /etc/X11/screen.conf exist for Live mode, if this file dos not
    16.8 +		# /etc/X11/screen.conf exists for Live mode, if this file does not
    16.9  		# exist tazx is executed at boot time.
   16.10  		mkdir -p /etc/X11
   16.11  		echo "SCREEN=$NEW_SCREEN" > /etc/X11/screen.conf
   16.12 @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
   16.13  {
   16.14  	cat >  $FILE << "EOF"
   16.15  # ~/.xinitrc: Executed by slim login manager to startx X session.
   16.16 -# You can use F1 with Slim or 'tazx' to configure permanantly
   16.17 +# You can use F1 with Slim or 'tazx' to configure permanently
   16.18  # your default WM: tazx e17
   16.19  #
   16.20  WM=openbox-session
    17.1 --- a/tinyutils/wifibox	Sun Mar 08 00:21:40 2009 +0100
    17.2 +++ b/tinyutils/wifibox	Tue Mar 10 20:19:52 2009 +0000
    17.3 @@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
    17.4  #!/bin/sh
    17.5  #
    17.6 -# GTKdialog interface to manage wireless connection in a simple way.
    17.7 +# GTKdialog interface to manage wireless connections in a simple way.
    17.8  # Use tabs to indent, split commands from the GUI and use functions.
    17.9 -# Favotites networks are also supported
   17.10 +# Favorite networks are also supported
   17.11  #
   17.12  # (c) 2009 SliTaz GNU/Linux - GNU gpl v3
   17.13  #
   17.14  VERSION=20090222
   17.15  
   17.16 -# Export script path and other if needed so we can use them in 'quote'.
   17.17 +# Export script path and others if needed so we can use them in 'quote'.
   17.18  export BIN=$0
   17.19  export FAVORITES_WIFI=/etc/wireless
   17.20  . /etc/network.conf
   17.21 @@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
   17.22  [ -d $FAVORITES_WIFI ] || mkdir -p $FAVORITES_WIFI
   17.23  rm -f $FAVORITES_WIFI/any.conf
   17.24  
   17.25 -# Catch ESSIDs and format output for GTK tree. We get the list off 
   17.26 -# network by Cell and without space.
   17.27 +# Catch ESSIDs and format output for GTK tree. We get the list of
   17.28 +# networks by Cell and without spaces.
   17.29  detect_wifi_networks()
   17.30  {
   17.31  	desktopbox notify "Scanning Wireless interface: $WIFI_INTERFACE" &
   17.32 @@ -69,10 +69,10 @@
   17.33  	done
   17.34  }
   17.35  
   17.36 -# Configure /etc/network.conf and restart connexion with init script.
   17.37 +# Configure /etc/network.conf and restart connection with init script.
   17.38  start_wifi_connection()
   17.39  {
   17.40 -	# Get tmp config created by connect_to_essid() if exist and set 
   17.41 +	# Get tmp config created by connect_to_essid() if exists and set 
   17.42  	# empty value to clean config file.
   17.43  	if [ -f /tmp/wifi.conf ]; then
   17.44  		. /tmp/wifi.conf
   17.45 @@ -101,11 +101,11 @@
   17.46  	set_rfswitch 1 
   17.47  	iwconfig $WIFI_INTERFACE txpower auto	
   17.48  	/etc/init.d/network.sh restart
   17.49 -	# Remove tmp file (could be use to have wireless profiles)
   17.50 +	# Remove tmp file (could be used to have wireless profiles)
   17.51  	rm -f /tmp/wifi.conf
   17.52  }
   17.53  
   17.54 -# We must spleep 4 sec to refresh networks list.
   17.55 +# We must sleep 4 sec to refresh networks list.
   17.56  stop_wifi_connexion()
   17.57  {
   17.58  	sed -i s/`grep ^WIFI= /etc/network.conf`/WIFI=\"no\"/ \
   17.59 @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@
   17.60  	sleep 4
   17.61  }
   17.62  
   17.63 -# Favorites wireless networks use only 3 values: essid. key and type of
   17.64 +# Favorite wireless networks use only 3 values: essid. key and type of
   17.65  # key
   17.66  FAVORITES_WIFI_list()
   17.67  {
   17.68 @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
   17.69  \"
   17.70  		</label>
   17.71  	</text>"
   17.72 -	# We mybe need a key to connect
   17.73 +	# We maybe need a key to connect
   17.74  	if [ "$ENCRYPTION" = "on" ] && [ "$ESSID_LIST" != "any" ]; then
   17.75  		# WPA
   17.76  		if echo "$SCAN" | grep -q WPA; then
   17.77 @@ -380,7 +380,7 @@
   17.78  		</hbox>
   17.79  	</vbox>"
   17.80  	
   17.81 -	# Favorites networks
   17.82 +	# Favorite networks
   17.83  	WIFI_DIALOG=${WIFI_DIALOG}"	
   17.84  	<vbox>
   17.85  		<tree icon=\"network-wireless\">