SliTaz Repositories

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     1.4  
     1.5  <p>
     1.6  SliTaz is an open source and community driven distribution. Everyone is welcome 
     1.7 -to join and contribute, from  users, to hackers and developers there is always
     1.8 +to join and contribute, from  users, to hackers and developers, there is always
     1.9  something to do, ie. Proofreading or writing documentation, sending bugs or 
    1.10  patches to the Mailing list, gaining access to the wok and pushing some new 
    1.11  packages or simply to help others on the Mailing list or forum. SliTaz has got
    1.12 @@ -98,14 +98,14 @@
    1.13  <p>
    1.14  SliTaz Mercurial or Hg repos can be browsed or cloned by anyone using the URL:
    1.15  <a href="http://hg.slitaz.org/">http://hg.slitaz.org/</a>. People with write
    1.16 -access can directly use <code>repos.slitaz.org</code> which needs authentication.
    1.17 +access can directly use <code>repos.slitaz.org</code> which requires authentication.
    1.18  Mercurial uses Python and is installable with: 
    1.19  <code>tazpkg get-install mercurial</code>
    1.20  </p>
    1.21  <h4>~/.hgrc</h4>
    1.22  <p>
    1.23 -Before you push your first commit onto the server, be sure you have a correct
    1.24 -Hg configuration file with your name and email address and remember to check 
    1.25 +Before you push your first commit onto the server, be sure that you have a correct
    1.26 +Hg configuration file with your name and email address, and remember to check 
    1.27  that you are not root. Personal ~/.hgrc file example:
    1.28  </p>
    1.29  <pre class="script">
    1.30 @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
    1.31  </pre>
    1.32  <p>
    1.33  Note that you can use the command <code>rollback</code> to roll back to the last 
    1.34 -transaction. Before pushing changes to the server it is safe to pull once:
    1.35 +transaction. Before pushing changes to the server, it is safe to pull once:
    1.36  </p>
    1.37  <pre>
    1.38   $ hg pull
    1.39 @@ -187,8 +187,8 @@
    1.40  </p>
    1.41  <p>
    1.42  You can syncronize the site and books graphically using Grsync or via the 
    1.43 -command line. To download the site for the first time or syncronize the pages 
    1.44 -in the directory <code>/home/hacker/Public/slitaz/website</code>, 
    1.45 +command line. To download the site for the first time or syncronize pages 
    1.46 +in the directory <code>/home/hacker/Public/slitaz/website</code>; 
    1.47  use the module <code>rsync://slitaz.org/website</code>:
    1.48  </p>
    1.49  <pre>
    1.50 @@ -199,7 +199,7 @@
    1.51  <h4>Diff and patch</h4>
    1.52  <p>
    1.53  The utilities <code>diff</code> and <code>patch</code> are command-line tools 
    1.54 -for creating and implementing the differences between two files. This technique
    1.55 +for creating and implementing differences between two files. This technique
    1.56  is often used for collaboration and the changes made to the original file can 
    1.57  be clearly extracted. To create a <code>diff</code> file readable by humans in
    1.58  a simple text editor, you must supply the <code>-u</code> option:

     2.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
     2.4  <h3>Compile and generate packages</h3>
     2.5  <p>
     2.6  Configure, compile, strip.., The way SliTaz generates a package can be put into a single command.
     2.7 -To avoid frustration, it is advisable to begin to build your package without changing its receipt or seeking
     2.8 +To avoid frustration, it is advisable to build your package without changing its receipt or seeking
     2.9  dependancies. M4 is an ideal candidate for your first <code>cook</code>:
    2.10  </p>
    2.11  <pre> # tazwok cook m4

     3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
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     3.3 @@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
     3.4  <h3><font color="#6c0023">Help and list available commands</font></h3>
     3.5  <p>
     3.6  Most GNU/Linux system commands have an option for providing information on
     3.7 -their use. For support on the use of a command it is necessary to type the
     3.8 +their use. For support on the use of a command, it is necessary to type the
     3.9  command followed by the <code>--help</code> option. Example using the 
    3.10  <code>cp</code> command to copy files:
    3.11  </p>
    3.12 @@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
    3.13  <a name="cd"></a>
    3.14  <h3><font color="#6c0023">Moving around directories</font></h3>
    3.15  <p>
    3.16 -To browse to the files you can use the <code>cd</code> command:
    3.17 +To browse to the files, you can use the <code>cd</code> command:
    3.18  </p>
    3.19  <pre>
    3.20   $ cd /usr/share/doc

     4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/development.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
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     4.3 @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
     4.4  <h4>Hello world!</h4>
     4.5  <p>
     4.6  The purpose of this script is to display <em>Hello World</em>. You can start
     4.7 -by creating the file and then making it executable on the command line and then editing with IDE Geany. 
     4.8 +by creating the file and making it executable on the command line and then editing with IDE Geany. 
     4.9  Note the script is called <code>hello.pl</code>, but you can name it as you see
    4.10  fit, with or without the <code>.pl</code> extension:
    4.11  </p>
    4.12 @@ -225,7 +225,7 @@
    4.13  The Python programming language is available as an installable package. Once installed, you can create your 
    4.14  own scripts/programs and use CGI applications with the LightTPD web server, taking care to 
    4.15  <a href="web-server.html#cgi-python">configure the server</a> properly. The official SliTaz Mercurial 
    4.16 -repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a solution best trusted to a product that's
    4.17 +repositories are provided by a CGI/Python web interface - a solution suited to a product that's
    4.18  reliable and robust. To install the <code>python</code> package with tazpkg:
    4.19  </p>
    4.20  <pre>

     5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
     5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
     5.4  The files containing flavors usually have additional files
     5.5  copied directly into the filesystem or the root of the cdrom.
     5.6  The path to the files used is specified in the configuration
     5.7 -file <code>tazlito.conf</code> - by default the files are 
     5.8 +file <code>tazlito.conf</code> - by default, the files are 
     5.9  located in <code>/home/slitaz/distro/addfiles</code>. The additional files
    5.10  the core flavor provides are for example, the window manager
    5.11  JWM and some wallpapers. It is easy enough to modify, add

     6.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
     6.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
     6.3 @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     6.4  <a name="gcolor2"></a>
     6.5  <h3>Gcolor2 - Select and manage colors</h3>
     6.6  <p>
     6.7 -Gcolor2 is a tool to select and retain palette colors. It can be useful for the creation of SliTaz themes 
     6.8 +Gcolor2 is a tool to select and retain palette colors. It can be useful for the creation of SliTaz themes, 
     6.9  for example. It can be found in the Graphics category or run from the command line:
    6.10  </p>
    6.11  <pre> $ gcolor2 &amp;
    6.12 @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
    6.13  <h3>Gimp - Manipulate and create images</h3>
    6.14  <p>
    6.15  The GIMP (GNU Image Manipulation) is software that can manipulate images to a very high quality level.
    6.16 -It allows you to do what you would expect from an application that processes images, ie layers, filters, 
    6.17 +It allows you to do what you would expect from an application that processes images, ie. layers, filters, 
    6.18  support scripts adding functionality, etc. GIMP supports a large number of image formats such as:
    6.19  PNG, JPEG, XPM, PPM, TIFF, PostScript, PSD, it also offers its own XCF format. To install GIMP:
    6.20  </p>

     7.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/install.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
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     7.3 @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@
     7.4  <h4>Target partition</h4>
     7.5  <p>
     7.6  Second step is the partition configuration. If you already have a free partition
     7.7 -you can directly use it, if not you will have to create one graphically with 
     7.8 +you can directly use it, if not you will have to create one graphically using 
     7.9  Gparted or from the command line with fdisk. For example if you want to install
    7.10  SliTaz on the first partition of the first disk recognized as <code>hda</code>: 
    7.11  </p>

     8.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
     8.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
     8.3 @@ -93,7 +93,11 @@
     8.4  <a name="netbox"></a>
     8.5  <h3>Netbox - Configure network</h3>
     8.6  <p>
     8.7 -Netbox is a small GTK+ application to configure a network interface using <em>DCHP</em> or a fixed (<em>static</em>) IP address. The tabs can be used to  start/stop the connections and automatically change the values in the system files. Netbox also provides a <em>system wide</em> tab from which you can directly edit network configuration files. You can start netbox from the system tools menu or via a terminal:
     8.8 +Netbox is a small GTK+ application to configure a network interface using <em>DCHP</em> or a 
     8.9 +fixed (<em>static</em>) IP address. The tabs can be used to start/stop the connections and 
    8.10 +automatically change the values in the system files. Netbox also provides a <em>system wide</em> tab 
    8.11 +from which you can directly edit network configuration files. You can start netbox from the 
    8.12 +system tools menu or via a terminal:
    8.13  </p>
    8.14  <pre>
    8.15   # netbox 

     9.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
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     9.3 @@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
     9.4  
     9.5  <a name="transmission"></a>
     9.6  <h3>Transmission - Lightweight BitTorrent client</h3>
     9.7 -<p>Transmission is a GTK+ BitTorrent client that is very fast, light and easy
     9.8 +<p>Transmission is a GTK+ BitTorrent client that is fast, light and easy
     9.9  to use. It offers a 'Preferences' option which allows you to limit the
    9.10  rate of uploads/downloads, specify port, download folders, etc. You will
    9.11  find Transmission via the menu --&gt; Internet --&gt; Transmission.
    9.12 @@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
    9.13  The gFTP application is a fast, ergonomic client for FTP transfers. It
    9.14  can resume interrupted transfers, manage bookmarks (favorites) and FTP
    9.15  or HTTP proxies. In addition
    9.16 -gFTP supports the use of drag and drop between windows, can make
    9.17 +gFTP supports the use of drag and drop, can make
    9.18  several transfers at the same time, compares windows, remembers
    9.19  passwords and can even define external applications for viewing or editing
    9.20  files. On SliTaz, you will find gFTP via the menu --&gt; Internet

    10.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
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    10.3 @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
    10.4  All SliTaz packages are built with a tool named Tazwok and a receipt found
    10.5  in the wok. The receipt provides all the necessary information to build a suitable
    10.6  package for Tazpkg including variables to give us the package name, source tarball format, 
    10.7 -download URL, etc. Given a receipt the <code>compile_rules</code> function has all of
    10.8 +download URL, etc. Given a receipt, the <code>compile_rules</code> function has all of
    10.9  the necessary commands to configure, make, and install the package in a specific directory.
   10.10  After compilation, Tazwok will execute the function <code>genpkg_rules</code>
   10.11  to pick up only the needed/wanted files and generate a pkg.tazpkg (cpio archive).

    11.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
    11.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
    11.3 @@ -86,7 +86,7 @@
    11.4  <p>
    11.5  To add or remove a group you must use <code>addgroup</code> or 
    11.6  <code>delgroup</code>. To change the current user password or change the
    11.7 -password of a specific user, you must use the command <code>passwd</code>:
    11.8 +password of a specific user, you must use the <code>passwd</code> command:
    11.9  </p>
   11.10  <pre>
   11.11   $ passwd

    12.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
    12.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-tools.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
    12.3 @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
    12.4  <h3>emelFM2 - File Manager</h3>
    12.5  <p>
    12.6  EmelFM2 is a file manager providing many useful functions for daily tasks such as managing devices, opening 
    12.7 -a terminal in the current directory, drag and drop, creating directories, key bindings or managing file 
    12.8 +terminals in the current directory, drag and drop, creating directories, key bindings or managing file 
    12.9  permissions. It contains bookmarks to allow you to browse faster, a text editor/viewer and much more.
   12.10  EmelFM2 can be launched with some command line options - you can specify the dustbin directory or set the 
   12.11  start directory to display. For a full list of options:
   12.12 @@ -85,10 +85,10 @@
   12.13  <p>
   12.14  Mountbox is a small GTK+ application to quickly mount media
   12.15  such as a USB drive, hard drive or cdrom. Mountbox can be launched from a terminal or via the Tools menu 
   12.16 -(System Tools). Simply specify the peripheral (Device) and the mount point, ie the directory where you want 
   12.17 +(System Tools). Simply specify the peripheral (Device) and the mount point, ie. the directory where you want 
   12.18  to access the media in question. Typically a CD is mounted on /media/cdrom, a USB key on /media/flash and 
   12.19  disk drives on the local machine on /mnt. Note the <a href="system-admin.html#devices">handbook</a> also 
   12.20 -contains some information.
   12.21 +contains more information.
   12.22  </p>
   12.23  
   12.24  <a name="gparted"></a>
   12.25 @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
   12.26  <h4>Support FAT and NTFS filesystems</h4>
   12.27  <p>
   12.28  To have the support of FAT16 or Windows FAT32 filesystems, you must install the package 
   12.29 -<code>dosfstools</code>. To enable read/write support for NTFS partitions, you need: <code>fuse</code>, 
   12.30 +<code>dosfstools</code>. To enable read/write support for NTFS partitions: <code>fuse</code>, 
   12.31  <code>ntfs-3g</code> and <code>ntfsprogs</code>.
   12.32  </p>
   12.33  

    13.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
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    13.3 @@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
    13.4  </p>
    13.5  <p>
    13.6  On SliTaz the server is automatically launched at system startup and is preconfigured with PHP. The root
    13.7 -of the documents served by default are in <code>/var/www</code>, this contains the default page <code>index.html</code>,
    13.8 +documents served by default are in <code>/var/www</code>, this contains the default page <code>index.html</code>,
    13.9  images are stored in the <code>images/</code> directory.
   13.10  LightTPD website: <a href="http://www.lighttpd.net/">http://www.lighttpd.net/</a>
   13.11  </p>

    14.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/x-window.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
    14.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/x-window.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
    14.3 @@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
    14.4  <p>
    14.5  Logout your current X session, type <code>F1</code> at Slim login and choose
    14.6  <code>openbox</code> to start Openbox. To make Openbox your default Window
    14.7 -Manager just type: <code>tazx openbox</code>.
    14.8 +Manager, just type: <code>tazx openbox</code>.
    14.9  </p>
   14.10  <p>
   14.11  Note: you can also use the configuration file <code>menu.xml</code> found 

    15.1 --- a/en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html	Sat Sep 13 00:04:02 2008 -0300
    15.2 +++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazwok.en.html	Sat Sep 13 14:13:30 2008 +0000
    15.3 @@ -42,9 +42,9 @@
    15.4  <p>
    15.5  Tazwok is a command line tool to configure and compile a package from source. Tazwok can also create packages
    15.6  ready to be used by Tazpkg, the SliTaz package manager. To work, Tazwok uses a directory containing
    15.7 -the receipt and the necessary information for the construction of the package. This receipt is also used by
    15.8 +the receipt and the necessary information (stuff) for the construction of the package. This receipt is also used by
    15.9  Tazpkg and consists of different variables and functions. Tazwok uses a configuration file (/etc/tazwok.conf)
   15.10 -to find the path to the wok, the package sources, and generated .tazpkg packages. Tazwok can also generate
   15.11 +to find the path to the wok, the package sources, and any generated .tazpkg packages. Tazwok can also generate
   15.12  a list of packages with their md5, create packages interactively, search for packages in the wok, clean generated files and even 
   15.13  cook several packages at once (See available commands).
   15.14  </p>
   15.15 @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
   15.16  <p>
   15.17  The 'new-tree' command can create a new package in the wok and can be used interactively. It
   15.18  will create a directory of the package and a receipt that can then be edited with your favorite
   15.19 -text editor and can be configured using the '--interactive' option. For help you can look at existing 
   15.20 +text editor. The receipt can also be configured using the '--interactive' option. For help you can look at existing 
   15.21  receipts or read the documentation in the Cookbook. Example: 
   15.22  </p>
   15.23  <pre> # tazwok new-tree package
   15.24 @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
   15.25  <h3><font color="#6c0023">gen-list</font></h3>
   15.26  <p>
   15.27  The 'gen-list' command can generate a list of packages (packages.list), their md5 (packages.md5) and a list
   15.28 -of package options containing information (packages.txt). The lists are created on the basis of packages
   15.29 +of options containing information (packages.txt). The lists are created on the basis of packages
   15.30  contained in a directory. The list in text format is built using a receipt contained in a wok. The default
   15.31  packages directory is the one specified in the configuration file, you can also specify the directory on the
   15.32  command line. Examples: 
   15.33 @@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
   15.34  </pre>
   15.35  <h3><font color="#6c0023">gen-clean-wok and clean-wok</font></h3>
   15.36  <p>
   15.37 -The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or create a copy
   15.38 +The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or create a new wok
   15.39  to test with another. Running 'clean-wok' will clean all packages in the current wok and delete any generated
   15.40  files. To generate a clean wok or clean the current wok:
   15.41  </p>
   15.42 @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@
   15.43  </pre>
   15.44  <h3><font color="#6c0023">remove</font></h3>
   15.45  <p>
   15.46 -Remove the package specified in the wok, including the receipt, stuff, all files, etc:
   15.47 +Removes the package specified from the wok, including the receipt, stuff, all files, etc:
   15.48  </p>
   15.49  <pre> # tazwok remove package
   15.50  </pre>