SliTaz Repositories

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     1.4  <p>
     1.5  The SliTaz GNU/Linux association is a non-profit entity that maintains
     1.6  and manages the project. Its mission is to ensure the durability of
     1.7 -the project. It provides an infrastruture and professional services to
     1.8 -users, developers and business enterprises using the distribution. The
     1.9 +the project. It provides an infrastruture and delivers professional services 
    1.10 +to users, developers and business enterprises using the distribution. The
    1.11  overall goals and operations of the association are described in the
    1.12  statutes.
    1.13  </p>
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    1.15  <p>
    1.16  The SliTaz GNU/Linux is an international association based in
    1.17  Switzerland and respects the Swiss Civil Code. The association is 
    1.18 -comprised of a committee and members and it can have financial and 
    1.19 +comprised of a committee and members and provides financial and 
    1.20  staff remuneration. Members meet once a year at a general meeting and
    1.21  decide for example, the activities of the association or the membership
    1.22  fees. Each member has a right to vote on individual proposals and can
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    1.24  <p>
    1.25  The project takes on the scale and demands of the
    1.26  professional world more and more frequently and the creation of the
    1.27 -association is seen as a necessity. We chose an association economic 
    1.28 -model to meet the needs of the project and provide a solid and high
    1.29 +association is seen as something of a necessity. We chose an association 
    1.30 +economic model to meet the needs of the project and provide a solid and high
    1.31  quality service to our users and business partners who wish to sponser
    1.32  the project.
    1.33  </p>
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    1.35  <h3>Sponsors</h3>
    1.36  <p>
    1.37  The SliTaz association also aims to ensure and maintain a stable and 
    1.38 -reliable base system providing high quality services to allow public organisations
    1.39 -(schools, universities, ministries) and business companies to use the 
    1.40 - distribution in a professional context.
    1.41 +reliable base system that provides high quality services to allow public 
    1.42 +organisations (schools, universities, ministries) and business companies 
    1.43 +to use the distribution in a professional context.
    1.44  </p>
    1.45  <p>
    1.46 -If you offer solutions using SliTaz, you can become an offical sponsor-partner
    1.47 -of the association to support and ensure durability of the 
    1.48 -distribution and obtain professional services. We offer support 
    1.49 -services, counselling and staff development by employees of the 
    1.50 -association. For more information you can contact the Association 
    1.51 +If you offer solutions using SliTaz, you can become an offical 
    1.52 +sponsor-partner of the association to support and ensure durability of
    1.53 +the distribution and obtain professional services. We offer support 
    1.54 +services, counselling and staff development through employees of the 
    1.55 +association. For more information you can contact the association 
    1.56  via mail or email: assoc(at)slitaz.org
    1.57  </p>
    1.58  
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    1.60  There are various ways to financially support the association, become
    1.61  a member or sponsor, or make a one-off payment via PayPal online secure 
    1.62  services or by using a bank transfer. The project also has some
    1.63 -logistical needs, all donated goods in good working condition are
    1.64 -welcome.
    1.65 +logistical needs, any donated goods in good working condition are welcomed.
    1.66  </p>
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