SliTaz Repositories

     1.1 --- a/kids/rootfs/usr/share/doc/slitaz/kids.en.html	Tue Feb 07 12:25:55 2012 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/kids/rootfs/usr/share/doc/slitaz/kids.en.html	Sat Feb 11 10:30:03 2012 +0100
     1.3 @@ -17,16 +17,16 @@
     1.4  <h2>SliTaz for kids :-)</h2>
     1.5  
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -	Welcome to the SliTaz Kids flavor. This version of SliTaz provide a
     1.8 -	an easy to use an intuitive desktop for kids older than 5 years. This
     1.9 -	is the first version, any feedback and wisheses can be done on the
    1.10 +	Welcome to the SliTaz Kids flavor. This version of SliTaz provides 
    1.11 +	an easy to use intuitive desktop for kids older than 5 years. This
    1.12 +	is the first version, any feedback and requests can be done on the
    1.13  	<a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">SliTaz Forum</a>
    1.14  </p>
    1.15  <p>
    1.16 -	It let the child play educational games, listen to music, write text
    1.17 -	documents and view or create images. The desktop use Openbox window
    1.18 +	It lets your child play educational games, listen to music, write text
    1.19 +	documents and view or create images. The desktop uses the Openbox window
    1.20  	manager, wbar for the icons bar and Nitrogen to set background
    1.21 -	images. The child can also manage is files with PCmanFM, wich is a
    1.22 +	images. The child can also manage his/her files with PCmanFM, which is a
    1.23  	standard and simple file manager.
    1.24  </p>
    1.25  
    1.26 @@ -44,42 +44,42 @@
    1.27  <p>
    1.28  	As on a standard SliTaz system you can install some more applications
    1.29  	with the packages manager Tazpkg. Allowed applications for the child
    1.30 -	are on the icons bar and can also be in the Openbox menu, this let
    1.31 -	the admin choose wich applications are avalaible or not.
    1.32 +	are on the icons bar and can also be in the Openbox menu, this lets
    1.33 +	the admin choose which applications are available or not.
    1.34  </p>
    1.35  
    1.36  <h2>Desktop</h2>
    1.37  
    1.38  <p>
    1.39 -	The desktop introduce to a standard desktop (floating windows, 
    1.40 -	tasks bar) with some large and accessible icons but no menu and
    1.41 -	no files on the desktop). Any mouse click wil popup a small menu
    1.42 +	The system boots to a standard desktop (floating windows, 
    1.43 +	task bar) with some large and accessible icons but no menu and
    1.44 +	no files on the desktop. Any mouse click will popup a small menu
    1.45  	with shortcuts to applications, an item to start a slideshow with
    1.46  	all images in ~/Images, an admin menu as well as a logout and
    1.47 -	shutdow item.
    1.48 +	shutdown item.
    1.49  </p>
    1.50  <p>
    1.51 -	If you want a task bar with a clock and notifycation support, you
    1.52 -	can start tint2 from command line to try it and add it to Openbox
    1.53 +	If you want a task bar with a clock and notification support, you
    1.54 +	can start tint2 from the command line to try it and add it to an Openbox
    1.55  	start script to get it run on each session.
    1.56  </p>
    1.57  
    1.58  <h2>Music</h2>
    1.59  
    1.60  <p>
    1.61 -	The defaut icons bar have an icon to play music with alsaplayer,
    1.62 -	when opened the child must click on the play button to start. The
    1.63 +	The defaut icons bar has an icon to play music with alsaplayer,
    1.64 +	which when opened the child must click on the play button to start. The
    1.65  	playlist is simply all the sound files found in ~/Music, so you
    1.66 -	just have to drop songs in this folder to add some songs for childs.
    1.67 +	just have to drop songs in to this folder to add some songs for a child.
    1.68  </p>
    1.69  
    1.70  <h2>Childsplay alphabet in your language</h2>
    1.71  
    1.72  <p>
    1.73  	Childsplay can use voices from Gcompris for the alphabet. We may 
    1.74 -	have support for out-out-the-box for some languages in future
    1.75 -	version. For now you must install the appropriate Gcompris voices
    1.76 -	package and create a symlink, exemple for French localisation:
    1.77 +	have support out-of-the-box for some languages in future
    1.78 +	versions. For now you must install the appropriate Gcompris voices
    1.79 +	package and create a symlink, example for French localisation:
    1.80  </p>
    1.81  <pre>
    1.82  # tazpkg -i gcompris-voices-fr

     2.1 --- a/preinit/receipt	Tue Feb 07 12:25:55 2012 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/preinit/receipt	Sat Feb 11 10:30:03 2012 +0100
     2.3 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
     2.4  FLAVOR="preinit"
     2.5  SHORT_DESC="Prepare the system to mount an unusual root filesystem"
     2.6  FRUGAL_RAM="32M"
     2.7 -ROOTFS_SIZE="13.1M"
     2.8 -INITRAMFS_SIZE="4.9M"
     2.9 -ISO_SIZE="8.0M"
    2.10 +ROOTFS_SIZE="15.5M"
    2.11 +INITRAMFS_SIZE="5.3M"
    2.12 +ISO_SIZE="9.0M"
    2.13