flavors rev 84

Tiny edits
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sat Mar 05 17:21:03 2011 +0000 (2011-03-05)
parents a7c4c12f57be
children 949aeec8d082
files core-xfce/rootcd/README core-xfce/rootcd/index.html
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     1.1 --- a/core-xfce/rootcd/README	Thu Feb 24 18:41:44 2011 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/core-xfce/rootcd/README	Sat Mar 05 17:21:03 2011 +0000
     1.3 @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
     1.4 -README SliTaz GNU/Linux CD                                          August 2007
     1.5 +README SliTaz GNU/Linux CD                                        December 2010
     1.6  ===============================================================================
     1.7  
     1.8  
     1.9 @@ -34,13 +34,12 @@
    1.10  -------
    1.11  SliTaz is a micro GNU/Linux distro using BusyBox, a Linux kernel, and GNU
    1.12  free software. SliTaz also use goodies from the Debian project. The goal of
    1.13 -SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working all in memory (RAM). SliTaz boot
    1.14 -with Syslinux, provide more than 200 Linux commands, LightTPD web serveur,
    1.15 -SSH server/client powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, X system, and much more
    1.16 -{...}.
    1.17 +SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working entirely in memory (RAM). SliTaz 
    1.18 +boots with Syslinux, provides more than 200 Linux commands, a SSH server/client 
    1.19 +powered by Dropbear, rescue tools, and much more {...}.
    1.20  
    1.21 -On the system you will find documentation in: /usr/share/doc, and the full
    1.22 -GPL license in: /usr/share/licenses.
    1.23 +On the system you will find documentation in /usr/share/doc, and the full
    1.24 +GPL license in /usr/share/licenses.
    1.25  
    1.26  
    1.27  LICENSE
     2.1 --- a/core-xfce/rootcd/index.html	Thu Feb 24 18:41:44 2011 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/core-xfce/rootcd/index.html	Sat Mar 05 17:21:03 2011 +0000
     2.3 @@ -32,10 +32,10 @@
     2.4  
     2.5  <h3><font color="#9c2424">English</font></h3>
     2.6  <p>
     2.7 -Welcome on a SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom, SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
     2.8 -but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom,
     2.9 +Welcome to the SliTaz GNU/Linux cdrom. SliTaz is mostly documented in French,
    2.10 +but the full system is available in English. To boot SliTaz from a cdrom
    2.11  just burn the ISO image onto a blank disc. Then reboot your computer with
    2.12 -the disc into your cdrom driver.
    2.13 +the disc in your cdrom drive.
    2.14  </p>
    2.15  <p>
    2.16  Have fun!<br />