SliTaz Repositories

     1.1 --- a/pro/en/index.php	Tue Mar 13 16:25:57 2012 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/pro/en/index.php	Tue Mar 13 22:59:06 2012 +0000
     1.3 @@ -28,12 +28,12 @@
     1.4  		<p>
     1.5  			Welcome to the <a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/">SliTaz GNU/Linux</a>
     1.6  			professional platform. SliTaz is a fast, robust and professional
     1.7 -			operating system build with open source technology.
     1.8 +			operating system built with open source technology.
     1.9  		</p>
    1.10  		<p>
    1.11 -			We are a group of developer and partner who can provide custom
    1.12 -			development and support, consulting, LiveCD flavor creation and more
    1.13 -			to customers.
    1.14 +			We are a group of developers and partners who can provide custom
    1.15 +			development and support, consulting services, LiveCD flavor creation 
    1.16 +			and more to customers.
    1.17  		</p>
    1.18  	</div>
    1.19  </div>
    1.20 @@ -54,16 +54,16 @@
    1.21  
    1.22  <p>
    1.23  	SliTaz is free and open source system with a large and growing
    1.24 -	community, our business model is software as a service, partnership
    1.25 +	community. Our business model is software as a service, partnership
    1.26  	and sponsoring. We can provide services all over the world
    1.27 -	and in many languages such English, French and Portuguese.
    1.28 +	and in languages such English, French and Portuguese.
    1.29  </p>
    1.30  <p>
    1.31  	This professional platform allows you to have contact with the SliTaz
    1.32 -	team who will process your request and do the mediate among you 
    1.33 -	and one of our official developer or sponsor. Our goal is to monitor
    1.34 +	team who will process your request and do the mediating among yourselves
    1.35 +	and one of our official developers or sponsors. Our goal is to monitor
    1.36  	and verify the quality of service to ensure our customers a high 
    1.37 -	level work.
    1.38 +	level of work.
    1.39  </p>
    1.40  
    1.41  <h2>Services</h2>
    1.42 @@ -79,20 +79,20 @@
    1.43  <h2>SliTaz developer</h2>
    1.44  
    1.45  <p>
    1.46 -	The SliTaz association is a non profit base entity who can provide
    1.47 -	payed services. We can employ a freelance Slitaz developer to work
    1.48 -	for you. We can also help School, ONG and social project with a
    1.49 -	small budget. Please contact us for more information on this service.
    1.50 +	The SliTaz association is a non profit base entity which can provide
    1.51 +	paid services. We can employ a freelance Slitaz developer to work
    1.52 +	for you. We can also help Schools, ONG and social projects with a
    1.53 +	small budget. Please contact us for more information about this service.
    1.54  </p>
    1.55  
    1.56  <h2>Partner</h2>
    1.57  
    1.58  <p>
    1.59 -	The SliTaz association will do the mediate between customer and one of
    1.60 -	our partner. Official partners collaborated with the official SliTaz
    1.61 +	The SliTaz association will do the mediating between customers and one of
    1.62 +	our partners. Official partners collaborate with the official SliTaz
    1.63  	developers and monetary support the project. Making business with our
    1.64 -	official partners let you help the SliTaz project and get customized
    1.65 -	services such as VOIP deployment, all in one server, Wifi Hot Spot,
    1.66 +	official partners lets you help the SliTaz project and get customized
    1.67 +	services such as VOIP deployment, all in one servers, Wifi Hot Spots,
    1.68  	closed development, and more.
    1.69  </p>
    1.70  
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    1.72  </p>
    1.73  
    1.74  <p>
    1.75 -	If you use Slitaz for business purpose, in University or if you just
    1.76 +	If you use Slitaz for business purposes, in University or if you just
    1.77  	want to sponsor and get a logo-link-description on our main website,
    1.78 -	please contact us. You can start sponsoring SliTaz from 40$ by mouth.
    1.79 -	A sponsorship convention is signed for one year, the visibility of your
    1.80 -	logo depend on the amount of donation received each mouth.
    1.81 +	please contact us. You can start sponsoring SliTaz from $40 a month.
    1.82 +	A sponsorship contract is signed for one year, the visibility of your
    1.83 +	logo depends on the amount of donation received each month.
    1.84  </p>
    1.85  
    1.86  <p>
    1.87  	More information about sponsoring SliTaz and a list of our current
    1.88 -	sponsors can be found on SliTaz website:
    1.89 +	sponsors can be found on the SliTaz website:
    1.90  	<a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/sponsor/">Sponsor page</a>
    1.91  </p>
    1.92  
    1.93  <h2>Contact</h2>
    1.94  
    1.95  <p>
    1.96 -	Want to get in touch or get more and detailled information ? Dont
    1.97 +	Want to get in touch or get more detailed information? Don't
    1.98  	hesitate to contact us by mail or post.
    1.99  </p>
   1.100  

     2.1 --- a/pro/index.cgi	Tue Mar 13 16:25:57 2012 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/pro/index.cgi	Tue Mar 13 22:59:06 2012 +0000
     2.3 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
     2.4  #!/bin/sh
     2.5 -# Content negociation for SliTaz Network
     2.6 +# Content negotiation for SliTaz Network
     2.7  #
     2.8  
     2.9  IFS=","