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     1.1 --- a/README	Sat Mar 24 22:53:31 2012 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/README	Mon Mar 26 14:58:17 2012 +0200
     1.3 @@ -2,29 +2,29 @@
     1.4  ================================================================================
     1.5  
     1.6  
     1.7 -The SliTaz Pizza provide tools and utils to build Live systems online.
     1.8 +The SliTaz Pizza provides tools and utils to build Live systems online.
     1.9  
    1.10  
    1.11 -	* Build ISO flavor online in a simple to use and modern interface
    1.12 -	* Use stable packages or cooking if next to a stable release
    1.13 -	* Build queue and one build at time to be less resources intensiv
    1.14 -	* Can be run localy as a frontend to Tazlito or from the cmdline
    1.15 +	* Build ISO flavors online in a simple to use and modern interface
    1.16 +	* Use stable packages or cooking if near to a stable release
    1.17 +	* Build queue and one build at a time to be less resources intensive
    1.18 +	* Can be run locally as a frontend to Tazlito or from the cmdline
    1.19  	* Produce standard and valid HTML code and wildly themable
    1.20  	* Provide a status page to follow build process for each flavor
    1.21  	* Create a tarball of the flavor receipt, list and addfiles
    1.22  	* Log activities, build process and provide useful statistics
    1.23 -	* Keep ISO images and files public a while, then archive them
    1.24 +	* Keep ISO images and files public for a while, then archive them
    1.25  	* Uniq ID strings for each flavor and mail notification
    1.26 -	* RSS feed for all new builded flavors and summary on web interface
    1.27 +	* RSS feed for all newly built flavors and summary on web interface
    1.28  
    1.29  
    1.30  Build process
    1.31  -------------
    1.32 -First you have to choose the distro name, provide a short description,
    1.33 -a valid email address so Pizza can notify you when ISO is built or in
    1.34 +First you have to choose the distro name, provide a short description, and
    1.35 +a valid email address so Pizza can notify you when ISOs are built or in
    1.36  case the build failed. You must also choose a skeleton to base your
    1.37  custom distro on. Then add some packages and follow the steps. When
    1.38 -validate the build, Pizza will create a tarball of your flavors a add
    1.39 +validating the build, Pizza will create a tarball of your flavors and add
    1.40  it to the build queue, so it can take some time before your ISO image
    1.41  is generated.
    1.42  
    1.43 @@ -34,24 +34,24 @@
    1.44  
    1.45  	* Is it long to build ?
    1.46      
    1.47 -	  By default Pizza build a distro each 20 min but skip a run if an
    1.48 -	  other distro is still building. After it depend on the build queue,
    1.49 +	  By default Pizza builds a distro every 20 min but skips a run if 
    1.50 +	  another distro is still building. After it depends on the build queue,
    1.51  	  and the size of your custom SliTaz distro.
    1.52  
    1.53  	* How long do you keep my ISO ?
    1.54  	
    1.55 -	  We can't garanty hosting for long time actually, we will keep your
    1.56 -	  product as long as wee can. But surely enough time to share it with
    1.57 +	  We can't guaranty hosting for a long time actually, we will keep your
    1.58 +	  product as long as we can. But surely enough time to share it with
    1.59  	  your friends or family.
    1.60  
    1.61  
    1.62  
    1.63  Installation and Administration
    1.64  -------------------------------
    1.65 -Pizza use a chroot to build ISO and a web interface to create the flavor
    1.66 -file. Pizza can be installed and setup in a few commands. The package provide
    1.67 -pizza host utility, pizza-bot build bot for chroot and pizza.cgi wich is
    1.68 -the web interface main script. So let's go throught the installation:
    1.69 +Pizza uses a chroot to build ISOs and a web interface to create the flavor
    1.70 +file. Pizza can be installed and setup in a few commands. The package provides
    1.71 +a pizza host utility, pizza-bot build bot for chroot and pizza.cgi which is
    1.72 +the web interface main script. So let's go through the installation:
    1.73  
    1.74  # tazpkg -gi slitaz-pizza
    1.75  
    1.76 @@ -60,27 +60,27 @@
    1.77  # hg clone http://hg.slitaz.org/slitaz-pizza
    1.78  # cd pizza && make install
    1.79  
    1.80 -You can display a list of command an a short usage with the usage command.
    1.81 +You can display a list of commands and a short usage with the usage command.
    1.82  Create the chroot and build environment. You may want to have a look
    1.83 -at Pizza configuration file before processing:
    1.84 +at the Pizza configuration file before processing:
    1.85  
    1.86  # pizza setup
    1.87  
    1.88 -Now you ready to start the build bot to build queued flavors one by one.
    1.89 +Now you are ready to start the build bot to build queued flavors one by one.
    1.90  You can also chroot in the environment to build manually or test.
    1.91  
    1.92  # pizza start
    1.93  
    1.94 -In time they may be quiet a lot of ISO and temporary files. To clean up the
    1.95 +In time there may be quite a lot of ISOs and temporary files. To clean up the
    1.96  temporary files and old flavors files:
    1.97  
    1.98  # pizza purge
    1.99  
   1.100 -The cron task is run in the chroot and check if any flavor have been submited,
   1.101 -by default it check all 20 minutes. The bot frenquency can be changed by
   1.102 +The cron task is run in the chroot and checks if any flavors have been submitted,
   1.103 +by default it checks every 20 minutes. The bot frequency can be changed by
   1.104  editing root crontabs in the build chroot.
   1.105  
   1.106 -To check build queue or chroot manually your can use:
   1.107 +To check build queue or chroot manually you can use:
   1.108  
   1.109  # pizza exec pizza-bot
   1.110  # pizza chroot
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   1.112  
   1.113  Developers and translators
   1.114  --------------------------
   1.115 -SHell script as you could expected. Keep speed in mind and security. Always
   1.116 -think to have a simple option and a advanced option, for example in rootfs
   1.117 -modification let users add custom wallpaper easely and advanced users can
   1.118 +SHell script as you would expect. Keep speed in mind and security. Always
   1.119 +think to have a simple option and an advanced option, for example in rootfs
   1.120 +modification let users add custom wallpaper easily and advanced users can
   1.121  upload a full roootfs.
   1.122  
   1.123  Pizza has been coded from the beginning with gettext support. Please forget