SliTaz Repositories

     1.1 --- a/doc/tazlito.en.html	Fri Mar 26 17:33:07 2010 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/doc/tazlito.en.html	Fri Mar 26 19:45:29 2010 +0000
     1.3 @@ -340,8 +340,8 @@
     1.4  <a name="build-loram"></a>
     1.5  <h3><font color="#6c0023">build-loram</font></h3>
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -Creates a ISO image flavor for low ram system from a SliTaz ISO image.
     1.8 -You can build a flavor with / always in ram or where / may stay on cdrom.
     1.9 +Creates an ISO image flavor for low ram systems from a SliTaz ISO image.
    1.10 +You can build a flavor with / always in ram or where / resides on the cdrom:
    1.11  </p>
    1.12  <pre>
    1.13   # tazlito build-loram slitaz.iso loram.iso

     2.1 --- a/tazlito	Fri Mar 26 17:33:07 2010 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/tazlito	Fri Mar 26 19:45:29 2010 +0000
     2.3 @@ -684,7 +684,7 @@
     2.4  		done
     2.5  		cd - > /dev/null
     2.6  		echo "Default urls for /iso/$(cat $TMP_DIR/initfs/etc/slitaz-release)/flavors/slitaz-loram-cdrom.iso: $urliso"
     2.7 -		echo -n "list of urls to insert: "
     2.8 +		echo -n "List of urls to insert: "
     2.9  		read -t 30 urliso2
    2.10  		urliso="$urliso2 $urliso"
    2.11  	fi
    2.12 @@ -884,7 +884,7 @@
    2.13  }
    2.14  
    2.15  # Move meta boot configuration files to basic configuration files
    2.16 -# because meta loram flavor is useless when rootfs is not load in ram
    2.17 +# because meta loram flavor is useless when rootfs is not loaded in ram
    2.18  unmeta_boot()
    2.19  {
    2.20  	if [ -f $TMP_DIR/loramiso/boot/isolinux/noram.cfg ]; then
    2.21 @@ -898,8 +898,8 @@
    2.22  	fi
    2.23  }
    2.24  
    2.25 -# Move rootfs to squashfs filesystem(s) in the cdrom writeable with aufs.
    2.26 -# These squashfs may be load in ram a boot time.
    2.27 +# Move rootfs to squashfs filesystem(s) to the cdrom writeable with aufs.
    2.28 +# These squashfs may be loaded in ram a boot time.
    2.29  # Rootfs are also copied to cdrom for tiny ramsize systems.
    2.30  # Meta flavors are converted to normal flavors.
    2.31  build_loram_cdrom()
    2.32 @@ -921,7 +921,7 @@
    2.33  	create_iso $OUTPUT $TMP_DIR/loramiso
    2.34  }
    2.35  
    2.36 -# Create http bootstrap to load a remove loram_cdrom
    2.37 +# Create http bootstrap to load and remove loram_cdrom
    2.38  # Meta flavors are converted to normal flavors.
    2.39  build_loram_http()
    2.40  {

     3.1 --- a/tazlitobox	Fri Mar 26 17:33:07 2010 +0100
     3.2 +++ b/tazlitobox	Fri Mar 26 19:45:29 2010 +0000
     3.3 @@ -468,7 +468,7 @@
     3.4  				</hbox>
     3.5  				<hbox>
     3.6  					<text use-markup="true">
     3.7 -						<label>"<b>RAM need:</b>  "</label>
     3.8 +						<label>"<b>RAM needed:</b>  "</label>
     3.9  					</text>
    3.10  					<entry>
    3.11  						<default>128M</default>
    3.12 @@ -515,7 +515,7 @@
    3.13  	<text wrap="true" width-chars="25" use-markup="true">
    3.14  		<label>
    3.15  "
    3.16 -Build a low RAM version
    3.17 +Build a Low RAM version
    3.18  of a SliTaz ISO image.
    3.19  The root filesystem is
    3.20  compressed and slower.
    3.21 @@ -529,7 +529,7 @@
    3.22  			<variable>LORAM_RAM</variable>
    3.23  		</radiobutton>
    3.24  		<radiobutton>
    3.25 -			<label>The filesystem may be on CDROM.</label>
    3.26 +			<label>The filesystem may be on a CDROM.</label>
    3.27  			<variable>LORAM_CDROM</variable>
    3.28  		</radiobutton>
    3.29  		<radiobutton>
    3.30 @@ -552,7 +552,7 @@
    3.31  		</hbox>
    3.32  		<hbox>
    3.33  			<text use-markup="true">
    3.34 -				<label>"<b>ISO ouput:</b>"</label>
    3.35 +				<label>"<b>ISO output:</b>"</label>
    3.36  			</text>
    3.37  			<entry accept="filename">
    3.38  				<default>loram.iso</default>