website rev 155
en: Tidy website grammar
author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 (2008-09-09) |
parents | 44c1d75f8630 |
children | 442ece8703dd |
files | en/devel/index.html en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html en/doc/handbook/graphics.html en/doc/handbook/livecd.html en/doc/handbook/network-config.html en/doc/handbook/office.html en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html en/doc/handbook/web-server.html en/index.html en/rss.xml |
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1.1 --- a/en/devel/index.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 1.2 +++ b/en/devel/index.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 1.3 @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ 1.4 </p> 1.5 1.6 <p> 1.7 -SliTaz is a tiny community and listens to it's users. There are several 1.8 +SliTaz is a tiny community and listens to its users. There are several 1.9 developers who are active on the <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">forum</a> 1.10 and the <a href="../mailing-list.html">Mailing List</a>. 1.11 </p>
2.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 2.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/wok-tools.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 2.3 @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ 2.4 <h3>Compile and generate packages</h3> 2.5 <p> 2.6 Configure, compile, strip.., The way SliTaz generates a package can be put into a single command. 2.7 -To avoid frustration, it is advisable to begin to build your package without changing it's receipt or seeking 2.8 +To avoid frustration, it is advisable to begin to build your package without changing its receipt or seeking 2.9 dependancies. M4 is an ideal candidate for your first <code>cook</code>: 2.10 </p> 2.11 <pre> # tazwok cook m4
3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 3.3 @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ 3.4 </pre> 3.5 <p> 3.6 The command <code>rm</code> has several options. To delete a directory and 3.7 -it's contents, we use the <code>-rf</code> option. 3.8 +its contents, we use the <code>-rf</code> option. 3.9 Example: 3.10 </p> 3.11 <pre>
4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/graphics.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 4.3 @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ 4.4 The GIMP (GNU Image Manipulation) is software that can manipulate images to a very high quality level. 4.5 It allows you to do what you would expect from an application that processes images, ie layers, filters, 4.6 support scripts adding functionality, etc. GIMP supports a large number of image formats such as: 4.7 -PNG, JPEG, XPM, PPM, TIFF, PostScript, PSD, it also offers it's own XCF format. To install GIMP: 4.8 +PNG, JPEG, XPM, PPM, TIFF, PostScript, PSD, it also offers its own XCF format. To install GIMP: 4.9 </p> 4.10 <pre> # tazpkg get-install gimp 4.11 </pre>
5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 5.3 @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ 5.4 <a name="sessions"></a> 5.5 <h3>Sessions - Login, passwords and X</h3> 5.6 <p> 5.7 -When the system has finished it's initialization, the screen is cleared and the 5.8 +When the system has finished its initialization, the screen is cleared and the 5.9 login prompt or the session manager Slim is displayed. Now you can choose to login 5.10 as <code>hacker</code> (without password) or as <code>root</code> administrator (password <code>root</code>). 5.11 Once logged into a session, you can use the many commands available in Busybox,
6.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 6.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 6.3 @@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ 6.4 /etc/firewall.conf. 6.5 </p> 6.6 <p> 6.7 -The default <em>firewall</em> script begins with it's own set options for the 6.8 +The default <em>firewall</em> script begins with its own set options for the 6.9 Kernel ie. ICMP redirects, source routing, logs for unresolved addresses and 6.10 spoof filters. The script then launches the rules defined in the 6.11 <code>iptables_rules()</code> function of the configuration file:
7.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/office.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 7.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/office.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 7.3 @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ 7.4 possibility of opening them directly in a web browser via a URL or a mail client using an email address. 7.5 Osmo also offers a calendar, a date calculator and the ability to take notes classified by day. If 7.6 you use USB media associated with the LiveCD, it will even retain your data for you. On an installed 7.7 -system, you can syncronize data with USB media by using Grsync. Osmo keeps it's data in the 7.8 +system, you can syncronize data with USB media by using Grsync. Osmo keeps its data in the 7.9 hidden folder <code>~/.osmo</code>. 7.10 </p> 7.11
8.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 8.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 8.3 @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ 8.4 <p> 8.5 Control and administer remotely with the Dropbear SSH secure server. Dropbear is a small SSH client/server 8.6 supporting SSH 2. It's compatible with OpenSSH and uses ~/.ssh/authorized_keys for the management of public keys. 8.7 -Dropbear also provides it's own version of <code>scp</code>, allowing you to copy files 8.8 +Dropbear also provides its own version of <code>scp</code>, allowing you to copy files 8.9 between machines in a secure manner. 8.10 </p> 8.11 <p>
9.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 9.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 9.3 @@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ 9.4 <p> 9.5 We will create a file with root priviledges and test the daemon 'crond' with a task performed every minute - 9.6 writing the date to a file /tmp/crond.test. It should be noted that the utility has an option 9.7 -<code>crontab</code> for editing cron file using 'vi', this is not provided by SliTaz. In it's place you can use 9.8 +<code>crontab</code> for editing cron file using 'vi', this is not provided by SliTaz. In its place you can use 9.9 GNU nano (<Ctrl+X> to save & exit): 9.10 </p> 9.11 <pre> # nano /var/spool/cron/crontabs/root
10.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 10.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 10.3 @@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ 10.4 Now you can configure the modules by specifying the debug level and method (<code>plain</code>) and the 10.5 path to the file containing a list of names using a protected password to access the directories. You must also 10.6 define the directories that require authorization. In this example we'll protect the <code>admin/</code> directory 10.7 -and authorize it's access to user hacker (<code>user=hacker</code>): 10.8 +and authorize its access to user hacker (<code>user=hacker</code>): 10.9 </p> 10.10 <pre class="script"># Authentication for protected directory. 10.11 auth.debug = 2
11.1 --- a/en/index.html Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 11.2 +++ b/en/index.html Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 11.3 @@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ 11.4 <li><strong>18 May 2008 - Cooking 20080518 and LinuxDays.ch</strong><br /> 11.5 SliTaz team is proud to announce the availability of a new Cooking 11.6 LiveCD ISO image providing huge changes from the stable release. 11.7 - SliTaz now uses Openbox as it's default Window Manager, desktop icons let 11.8 + SliTaz now uses Openbox as its default Window Manager, desktop icons let 11.9 you launch your favorite applications and manage files and dbus and hal 11.10 will automatically mount removable media such as USB keys or Hard disks. 11.11 Packages can now be managed through the graphical Packages Manager 11.12 @@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ 11.13 <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/#idx2">English forum</a> 11.14 providing help and support to users speaking English. Since the project 11.15 is French based, we get a lot of feedback and requests from the English 11.16 - speaking community that we want to honour. The forum has it's own domain 11.17 + speaking community that we want to honour. The forum has its own domain 11.18 <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">forum.slitaz.org</a>. The default 11.19 interface is in French but settings can be changed when you login with your 11.20 account. The crew is also working on the lack of English documentation. 11.21 @@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ 11.22 in March 2008, matching one year of the first SliTaz public release. This will 11.23 also give us time to bring you a rock solid stable version with all these new 11.24 features and more than 240 packages on the mirror. So, this new SliTaz 11.25 - release brings you Alsa with it's mixer, Alsaplayer, mpg123, Gcolor2, 11.26 + release brings you Alsa with its mixer, Alsaplayer, mpg123, Gcolor2, 11.27 pcmciautils, and a new Kernel. SliTaz also provides new options to use at 11.28 boot time and isapnptools for very old hardware like IBM GL300 6272/6282 or 11.29 P133/32M. All this new stuff fits in an ISO image of 22,4 Mb. The Simple
12.1 --- a/en/rss.xml Mon Sep 08 14:08:20 2008 +0000 12.2 +++ b/en/rss.xml Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000 12.3 @@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ 12.4 <description> 12.5 SliTaz team is proud to announce the availability of a new Cooking 12.6 LiveCD ISO image providing huge changes from the stable release. 12.7 - SliTaz now uses Openbox as it's default Window Manager, desktop icons let 12.8 + SliTaz now uses Openbox as its default Window Manager, desktop icons let 12.9 you launch your favorite applications and manage files and dbus and hal 12.10 will automatically mount removable media such as USB keys or Hard disks. 12.11 Packages can now be managed through the graphical Packages Manager