website rev 156

en: Tidy website grammar
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 (2008-09-09)
parents 1aee368acd7c
children 6437c01fcd2a
files en/doc/handbook/chroot-env.html en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html en/doc/handbook/network-config.html en/doc/handbook/network.html en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html en/doc/handbook/web-server.html en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.txt en/mailing-list.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/chroot-env.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/chroot-env.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@
     1.4   /# tazpkg get-install slitaz-toolchain
     1.5  </pre>
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -Once the environment is configured, you can compile applications from source to create packages, test scripts etc.
     1.8 +Once the environment is configured, you can compile applications from source to create packages, test scripts, etc.
     1.9  The <a href="../cookbook/">Cookbook</a> should help you out here:
    1.10  </p>
    1.11  <h4>Exit the environment</h4>
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/cmdline.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
     2.4  <a name="edit"></a>
     2.5  <h3><font color="#6c0023">Edit files</font></h3>
     2.6  <p>
     2.7 -Editing text files, scripts, configuration files etc, can be done easily using
     2.8 +Editing text files, scripts, configuration files, etc, can be done easily using
     2.9  the text editor GNU Nano in a console or graphical terminal.
    2.10  Example with a file bookmarks.html (&lt;Ctrl+X&gt; to quit
    2.11  and save):
     3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
     3.4  <p>
     3.5  To begin, first we must define where we are going to work by creating a directory and several sub directories
     3.6  to accomodate all the different files. The <em>hacking</em> of the ISO can be done from within a SliTaz system or any
     3.7 -other GNU/Linux distribution such as Debian, Fedora, PCLinuxOS etc. If you use SliTaz LiveCD mode
     3.8 +other GNU/Linux distribution such as Debian, Fedora, PCLinuxOS, etc. If you use SliTaz LiveCD mode
     3.9  (where you can remove the CD once SliTaz has launched in RAM and burn your new ISO), It's advisable to use
    3.10  USB media to carry on working, otherwise your work will be lost on shutdown. To begin you need to create a
    3.11  <em>hacking</em> directory that you can use inside <code>/home/slitaz</code> within the 
     4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/multimedia.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     4.3 @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
     4.4  <p>
     4.5  SliTaz LiveCD mode provides sound support, but no video player, however you can watch YouTube by installing 
     4.6  the <code>get-flash-plugin</code> package. To watch videos you can use Xine, it supports most formats such 
     4.7 -as avi, mov, mpeg etc, note Xine can also act as an audio player. At the sound level, you have a mixer 
     4.8 +as avi, mov, mpeg, etc. Note Xine can also act as an audio player. At the sound level, you have a mixer 
     4.9  (alsamixer) and audio player (alsaplayer), both installed by default on the standard LiveCD. SliTaz also
    4.10  provides tools to configure your sound card.
    4.11  </p>
     5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -163,7 +163,7 @@
     5.4  	<li>Enter your username, please note that this is the username with which you
     5.5  	    communicate with your ISP.</li>
     5.6  	<li>Internet interface, default is eth0 unless you have more than one,
     5.7 -	    in which case you will have eth1, eth2 etc. Usually the Enter key is 
     5.8 +	    in which case you will have eth1, eth2, etc. Usually the Enter key is 
     5.9  	    sufficient.</li>
    5.10  	<li>If you have a permanent ASDL link answer
    5.11  	    <strong>yes</strong>, otherwise answer <strong>no</strong> (default).</li>
     6.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     6.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     6.3 @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
     6.4  <p>The configuration files are stored in ~/.links, though it's not advisable
     6.5  to modify them. However, Links provides a configuration interface via
     6.6  the toolbar at the top, where you can configure the languages,
     6.7 -bookmarks etc. When you change options, you must save them via the menu
     6.8 +bookmarks, etc. When you change options, you must save them via the menu
     6.9  bar --&gt; Configuration --&gt; Save options.
    6.10  </p>
    6.11  
     7.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     7.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     7.3 @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
     7.4  <h3>Add commands to be executed at boot</h3>
     7.5  <p>
     7.6  During the boot process, various scripts are executed to configure services, such as the start of the 
     7.7 -web server, networking etc. On SliTaz there is a script <code>/etc/init.d/local.sh</code> which allows
     7.8 +web server, networking, etc. On SliTaz there is a script <code>/etc/init.d/local.sh</code> which allows
     7.9  you to add commands to be launched at system startup. You can also create new scripts in /etc/init.d,
    7.10  their links in /etc/rc.scripts for shell scripts and use /etc/rc.d for links to the startup script daemon in
    7.11  /etc/rcS.conf:
     8.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     8.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     8.3 @@ -46,7 +46,7 @@
     8.4  <p>
     8.5  This chapter describes the configuration and use of the LightTPD web server. It's a fast, secure, flexible HTTP 
     8.6  server, using a small memory footprint. It enables intelligent management of the cpu load and offers
     8.7 -FastCGI support, CGI, Auth, Output compression and the rewriting of URLs etc. LightTPD is a cheap way to host your 
     8.8 +FastCGI support, CGI, Auth, Output compression and the rewriting of URLs, etc. LightTPD is a cheap way to host your 
     8.9  own site on an old machine.
    8.10  </p>
    8.11  <p>
     9.1 --- a/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
     9.2 +++ b/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     9.3 @@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
     9.4  <p>
     9.5  SliTaz GNU/Linux is distributed as a bootable LiveCD allowing you to
     9.6  graphically install to the hard drive and retain the use of your previous 
     9.7 -system including all settings, applications, documents etc. 
     9.8 +system including all settings, applications, documents, etc. 
     9.9  </p>
    9.10  <p>
    9.11  The project distributes an ISO image called "core", which is the body of the 
    10.1 --- a/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.txt	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
    10.2 +++ b/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.txt	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
    10.3 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
    10.4  --------------
    10.5  SliTaz GNU/Linux is distributed as a bootable LiveCD allowing you to
    10.6  graphically install to the hard drive and retain the use of your previous 
    10.7 -system including all settings, applications, documents etc. 
    10.8 +system including all settings, applications, documents, etc. 
    10.9  
   10.10  The project distributes an ISO image called "core", which is the body of the 
   10.11  system, providing a selection of multi-use packages for surfing the web, 
    11.1 --- a/en/mailing-list.html	Tue Sep 09 09:59:51 2008 +0000
    11.2 +++ b/en/mailing-list.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
    11.3 @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
    11.4  in the Slitaz community.  The list is open to everyone, you are free to
    11.5  subscribe, unsubscribe  at any time.  It is a very effective means of
    11.6  collaboration, and is used to provide free technical support to users of
    11.7 -SliTaz. Developers, advanced users, proofreaders etc, use the same list to
    11.8 +SliTaz. Developers, advanced users, proofreaders, etc, use the same list to
    11.9  manage the development of the project.  Using the same list for support and
   11.10  development allows us to reach a wider audience, resulting in a faster, more
   11.11  accurate response. However, the members on the list are all volunteers and do