website rev 258

en: Minor edits and typos
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sat Jan 24 18:44:13 2009 +0000 (2009-01-24)
parents b5594362914e
children d89426dcc181
files en/doc/handbook/security.html en/doc/handbook/web-server.html en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/security.html	Mon Jan 19 19:48:04 2009 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/security.html	Sat Jan 24 18:44:13 2009 +0000
     1.3 @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
     1.4  password and then crack the <em>root</em> password of the system administrator.
     1.5  </p>
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -A GNU/Linux system has secured at least two users, one to work and one to administer, configure
     1.8 +A GNU/Linux system has secured at least two users, one to work and another to administer, configure
     1.9  or update the system (<code>root</code>). It's also advisable to entrust the administration of the
    1.10  system to a person.
    1.11  </p>
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Mon Jan 19 19:48:04 2009 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/web-server.html	Sat Jan 24 18:44:13 2009 +0000
     2.3 @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
     2.4  LightTPD provides authentication modules that can for example, protect a directory. The server 
     2.5  offers several authentication methods, but we will begin by using the basic method without encrypting any
     2.6  passwords. In order to be able to use the module <code>mod_auth</code>, you must install the lighttpd-modules
     2.7 -package (<code>tazpkg get-install lighttpd-modules</code>), once installed <code>mod_auth</code>
     2.8 +package (<code>tazpkg get-install lighttpd-modules</code>). Once installed <code>mod_auth</code>
     2.9  must be added to the list of modules:
    2.10  </p>
    2.11  <pre class="script"># Modules to load.
     3.1 --- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html	Mon Jan 19 19:48:04 2009 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html	Sat Jan 24 18:44:13 2009 +0000
     3.3 @@ -211,7 +211,7 @@
     3.4          /lib/ld-linux.so.2 =&gt; /lib/ld-linux.so.2 (0x40000000)
     3.5  </pre>
     3.6  <p>
     3.7 -Copy the library libutil.so.1 to $fs/lib, is this is not already the case. Other libraries 
     3.8 +Copy the library libutil.so.1 to $fs/lib, if this is not already the case. Other libraries 
     3.9  should be present following the construction of the base system:
    3.10  </p>
    3.11  <pre> # cp -a /lib/libutil* $fs/lib
    3.12 @@ -290,7 +290,7 @@
    3.13  <p>
    3.14  The Lighttpd main configuration file is located at /etc/lighttpd and is called lighttpd.conf. 
    3.15  The configuration file SliTaz provides is self-explanatary, just browse. You can find other examples on the 
    3.16 -Lighttpd website and as well as a example configuration in /doc in the Lighttpd archive:
    3.17 +Lighttpd website and as well as an example configuration in /doc in the Lighttpd archive:
    3.18  </p>
    3.19  <pre> # cp -a ../slitaz-tools-1.1/etc/lighttpd $fs/etc
    3.20  </pre>
     4.1 --- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html	Mon Jan 19 19:48:04 2009 +0000
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html	Sat Jan 24 18:44:13 2009 +0000
     4.3 @@ -95,7 +95,7 @@
     4.4   # strip -v _pkg/usr/bin/*
     4.5  </pre>
     4.6  <p>
     4.7 -Copy the libcurses library and some applications in SliTaz. The reset utility is used at the end of 
     4.8 +Copy the libncurses library and some applications in SliTaz. The reset utility is used at the end of 
     4.9  the rcS initialization script to remove the Linux logo. If you wish, you can copy the associated utilities 
    4.10  (tic, tack, toe, etc), being careful not to delete the link to BusyBox:
    4.11  </p>
    4.12 @@ -216,7 +216,7 @@
    4.13  <p>
    4.14  retawq (<a href="http://retawq.sourceforge.net/">retawq.sourceforge.net</a>) 
    4.15  is a small text-only web browser. We only flag a few useful options when configuring, 
    4.16 -retawq needs terminfo files, libcurses libraries and libthread:
    4.17 +retawq needs terminfo files, libncurses libraries and libthread:
    4.18  </p>
    4.19  <pre> # wget http://switch.dl.sourceforge.net/sourceforge/retawq/retawq-0.2.6c.tar.gz
    4.20   # tar xzf retawq-0.2.6c.tar.gz