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author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Thu Feb 23 19:32:21 2012 +0000 (2012-02-23)
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     1.4  	<p>
     1.5  		The SliTaz contributor team is pleased to announce the immediate
     1.6  		availability of the first release candidate for SliTaz 4.0. SliTaz can
     1.7 -		boot in 10-12 second on fairly new hardware and with the new 4in1 ISO
     1.8 +		boot in 10-12 seconds on fairly new hardware and with the new 4in1 ISO
     1.9  		you can install a full SliTaz desktop with only 48MB of RAM. The 4in1
    1.10 -		ISO is able to auto detect the memory and boot SliTaz in text mode, in
    1.11 -		a minimal X environment or a full desktop.
    1.12 +		ISO is able to auto detect the memory and can boot SliTaz in text mode,
    1.13 +		a minimal X environment or a full graphical desktop.
    1.14  	</p>
    1.15  	<p>
    1.16 -		SliTaz 4.0 will have more than 3000 well tested packages in it's
    1.17 -		repository and the RC serie let us track last bugs. From our last Cooking
    1.18 -		release the packages have all been rebuilt twice to ensure build
    1.19 +		SliTaz 4.0 will have more than 3000 well tested packages in its
    1.20 +		repository and the RC series lets us track the latest bugs. From our last 
    1.21 +		Cooking release the packages have all been rebuilt twice to ensure build
    1.22  		quality.
    1.23  	</p>
    1.24  	<p>
    1.25 -		This RC1 ISO will prompt you with a new graphical menu, a graphical
    1.26 -		language and keyboard set up, a new desktop layout and artwork as well
    1.27 -		as a new command line installer and a CGI/web interface, accessible
    1.28 -		via TazPanel. You can download this new ISO from our mirror:
    1.29 +		This RC1 ISO will prompt you with a new graphical menu and a graphical
    1.30 +		language and keyboard set up. The ISO features a new desktop layout and 
    1.31 +		artwork as well as a new command line installer with a CGI/web interface 
    1.32 +		accessible via TazPanel. You can download this new ISO from our mirror:
    1.33  		<a href="http://mirror.slitaz.org/iso/cooking/slitaz-4.0-RC1.iso">SliTaz 4.0-RC1</a>
    1.34  	</p> 
    1.35  	</li>