website rev 171

en: Updates and edits
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000 (2008-09-21)
parents 1e755b8125f0
children 0a622b3cbe2e
files en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html en/doc/handbook/packages.html en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html en/doc/handbook/utilities.html en/doc/index.html en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
     1.4  <p>
     1.5  The addition of various files and directories to the ISO image simply consists of copying data to
     1.6  the root of the cdrom (<code>rootcd/</code>) and generating a new image. The data may be classified
     1.7 -in one or two directories created in the root of the CD. Once the ISO image is burned to a CD-R/CD-RW
     1.8 +in one or two directories created in the root of the CD. Once the ISO image is burned to a CD-R/CD-RW,
     1.9  you can use SliTaz as before, mounted on <code>/media/cdrom</code> and navigate through your data using
    1.10  emelFM2, Clex or the command line. Your data will also be legible from all GNU/Linux systems, BSD or even
    1.11  ... Windows.
    1.12 @@ -154,7 +154,7 @@
    1.13  started by default after the (<code>timeout</code>) waiting time. <em>Timeout</em> is the 
    1.14  number of seconds to wait before booting the system, you can make it 0 to start booting 
    1.15  immediately or choose a waiting time as long as 80s. Finally the <code>prompt</code> can be
    1.16 -deactivated using the value <code>0</code>, F1, F2, F3 display help files and F4 displays a text file:
    1.17 +deactivated using the value <code>0</code>. F1, F2, F3 display help files and F4 displays a text file:
    1.18  </p>
    1.19  <pre class="script">display isolinux.msg
    1.20  default slitaz
    1.21 @@ -254,7 +254,7 @@
    1.22  <p>
    1.23  To keep things simple and to help you understand the principle, we are going to change a script file in
    1.24  order to execute some commands to be carried out automatically when the CD starts up. The target is
    1.25 -<code>etc/init.d/local.sh</code>, just open with your favorite text editor such as Geany:
    1.26 +<code>etc/init.d/local.sh</code> - just open with your favorite text editor such as Geany:
    1.27  </p>
    1.28  <pre> # geany etc/init.d/local.sh &amp;
    1.29  </pre>
    1.30 @@ -307,7 +307,7 @@
    1.31  <p>
    1.32  If you wish to test out a lot of new possibilities and generate a lot of ISO images, you may want to
    1.33  semi-automate the process via a simple SHell script. This tiny script can be created on the command line
    1.34 -or edited graphically, but don't forget to make it executable. You can create the script with <code>cat</code>,
    1.35 +or edited graphically, but don't forget to make it executable. You can create the script with <code>cat</code>;
    1.36  note that <code>EOF</code> signifies <em>End Of File</em>. To create the script <code>gen_hacked_iso.sh</code>
    1.37  using two variables to change the name of the ISO image and the path to the root directory of the cdrom:
    1.38  </p>
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/packages.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -146,7 +146,7 @@
     2.4  <p>
     2.5  When a new package tree and receipt has been created in the wok, you can edit the
     2.6  receipt with your favorite editor (Geany provides nicely colored code), modify
     2.7 -the rules functions, add dependencies to the <code>DEPENDS</code> variable 
     2.8 +the rules, functions, add dependencies to the <code>DEPENDS</code> variable 
     2.9  if needed and try a first cook:
    2.10  </p>
    2.11  <pre>
     3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -108,7 +108,7 @@
     3.4  </pre>
     3.5  <p>
     3.6  Note that the server supports the passing of various options when launched. To change the default values,
     3.7 -simple modify the daemons configuration file <code>/etc/daemons.conf</code>.
     3.8 +simply modify the daemons configuration file <code>/etc/daemons.conf</code>.
     3.9  </p>
    3.10  
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     4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/system-admin.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     4.3 @@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
     4.4  <p>
     4.5  To mount a cdrom or an USB media you should use mount points located in 
     4.6  <code>/media</code>. Note that for a cdrom, you just have to specify
     4.7 -the device path and for a flash key the mount point already exists:
     4.8 +the device path and for a flash key, the mount point already exists:
     4.9  </p>
    4.10  <pre>
    4.11   # mount /dev/cdrom
     5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/utilities.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/utilities.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -161,8 +161,9 @@
     5.4  <p>
     5.5  Xpad is a small application that can take quick notes via a 'sticky note' displayed on the desktop. Each
     5.6  consists of a note <em>pad</em> that you can hide and customise via a right click on the window in question.
     5.7 -Once launched you can close Xpad via the dock located on the window manager taskbar. The notes are stored in your directory
     5.8 -and are available at each session (if you use USB media with the LiveCD or on an installed system).
     5.9 +Once launched you can close Xpad via the dock located on the window manager taskbar. The notes are stored in 
    5.10 +your local directory and are available at each session (if you use USB media with the LiveCD or on an 
    5.11 +installed system).
    5.12  </p>
    5.13  
    5.14  <!-- End of content -->
     6.1 --- a/en/doc/index.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     6.2 +++ b/en/doc/index.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     6.3 @@ -77,10 +77,11 @@
     6.4  <ul>
     6.5  	<li><a href="handbook/">Handbook</a> - SliTaz Handbook. LiveCD usage,
     6.6  	package management, network or system administration
     6.7 -	and specific instructions. This book is a community effort to provide
     6.8 +	and specific instructions. This Handbook is a community effort to provide
     6.9  	high quality documentation for SliTaz users. It will help you get started
    6.10  	with SliTaz GNU/Linux and show you how to configure the system to your own
    6.11 -	needs and preferences.</li>
    6.12 +	needs and preferences. This is the documentation that we advise you to read, 
    6.13 +	learn and consult first.</li>
    6.14  	<li><a href="cookbook/">Cookbook</a> - SliTaz Cookbook. Information regarding the 
    6.15  	management, operation and development of the distribution. Instructions on how 
    6.16  	to use the wok and package receipts, descriptions of boot scripts and rootcd files,
     7.1 --- a/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     7.2 +++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazpkg.en.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     7.3 @@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
     7.4  </pre>
     7.5  <h3><font color="#6c0023">repack</font></h3>
     7.6  <p>
     7.7 -The 'repack' command allows us to recreate a package from
     7.8 +The 'repack' command allows you to recreate a package from
     7.9  the files on a system where it was previously installed.
    7.10  To repack a package:
    7.11  </p>
     8.1 --- a/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html	Fri Sep 19 20:54:02 2008 -0700
     8.2 +++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html	Sun Sep 21 20:44:16 2008 +0000
     8.3 @@ -123,6 +123,11 @@
     8.4  <pre> # tazusb clean
     8.5  </pre>
     8.6  
     8.7 +<h2>MAINTAINER</h2>
     8.8 +<p>
     8.9 +Eric Joseph-Alexandre &lt;erjo at slitaz.org&gt;
    8.10 +</p>
    8.11 +
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    8.13  </div>
    8.14  </body>