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| author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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| date | Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 (2011-01-07) |
| parents | f0add8cc8670 |
| children | c4bf65bc45d7 |
| files | en/about/index.html en/artwork/index.html en/artwork/screenshots.html en/doc/index.html en/get/index.html en/index.php en/mailing-list.html en/news/2007.html en/news/2008.html en/news/2009.html en/news/index.html en/packages/index.html en/template.html i18n.html index.php |
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1.1 --- a/en/about/index.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 1.2 +++ b/en/about/index.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 1.3 @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ 1.4 <div id="block_top"> 1.5 <h1>About us</h1> 1.6 <p> 1.7 - Small, fast, stable and easy to use! That all about SliTaz goals. 1.8 + Small, fast, stable and easy to use! That's all about SliTaz goals. 1.9 </p> 1.10 <ul> 1.11 <li><a href="#intro">Introduction</a></li>
2.1 --- a/en/artwork/index.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 2.2 +++ b/en/artwork/index.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 2.3 @@ -68,8 +68,8 @@ 2.4 <div id="block_top"> 2.5 <h1>Artwork</h1> 2.6 <p> 2.7 - Find, enjoy, comment and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 2.8 - <a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/image">Community Network</a>. You 2.9 + Find, enjoy, and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 2.10 + <a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/image">Community Network</a>. Your 2.11 work may be used on a Cooking release. 2.12 </p> 2.13 <ul>
3.1 --- a/en/artwork/screenshots.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 3.2 +++ b/en/artwork/screenshots.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 3.3 @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ 3.4 <p> 3.5 Pictures say more than a thousand words... Screenshots of 3.6 the latest Stable and Cooking versions. You may also want to 3.7 - find, comment and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 3.8 + find, comment on, and share SliTaz Artwork! Join us on the 3.9 <a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/image">Community Network</a>. 3.10 </p> 3.11 <!-- Top block end -->
4.1 --- a/en/doc/index.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 4.2 +++ b/en/doc/index.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 4.3 @@ -68,10 +68,10 @@ 4.4 <div id="block_top"> 4.5 <h1>English documentation</h1> 4.6 <p> 4.7 - Most of SliTaz documentation is avalaible on the community Wiki 4.8 + Most of the SliTaz documentation is available on the community Wiki 4.9 site. Manuals and a getting started guide is provided by each 4.10 - SliTaz LiveCD, installed in <code>/usr/share/doc/slitaz</code> 4.11 - and also available through the "Documentation" menu. 4.12 + SliTaz LiveCD (installed in <code>/usr/share/doc/slitaz</code> 4.13 + and also available through the "Documentation" menu). 4.14 </p> 4.15 <ul> 4.16 <li><a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:start">Community Wiki</a></li> 4.17 @@ -103,10 +103,10 @@ 4.18 4.19 <h2>Scratchbook</h2> 4.20 <p> 4.21 - Historicaly the Scratchbook was written when SliTaz was created and wasn't 4.22 - made to be updated. By the time some SliTaz fellows migrated the book the 4.23 - Wiki and have made some update: 4.24 - <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:scratchbook:start">Comunity Scratchbook</a> 4.25 + Historically, the Scratchbook was written when SliTaz was created and wasn't 4.26 + made to be updated. But over time, some SliTaz contributors migrated the book 4.27 + over to the Wiki and have made some updates: 4.28 + <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:scratchbook:start">Community Scratchbook</a> 4.29 </p> 4.30 <p> 4.31 SliTaz <a href="scratchbook/index.html">Original Scratchbook</a> -
5.1 --- a/en/get/index.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 5.2 +++ b/en/get/index.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 5.3 @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ 5.4 <div id="block_top"> 5.5 <h1>Get SliTaz</h1> 5.6 <p> 5.7 - Download the latest stable version for production purpose or 5.8 + Download the latest stable version for production purposes or 5.9 a solid desktop environment. Use the Cooking version to test 5.10 and help us improve the distribution. 5.11 </p>
6.1 --- a/en/index.php Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 6.2 +++ b/en/index.php Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 6.3 @@ -72,8 +72,8 @@ 6.4 <h1>Main page</h1> 6.5 <p> 6.6 SliTaz is a free operating system, working completely in RAM and 6.7 - booting from removable media such as a cdrom or USB key and can 6.8 - also. SliTaz is distributed as a LiveCD and weighs less than 30MB. 6.9 + booting from removable media such as a cdrom or USB key. SliTaz 6.10 + is distributed as a LiveCD and weighs less than 30MB. 6.11 The system is fast, stable and easy to use. SliTaz is intuitive, 6.12 providing a lightweight, elegant desktop, detailed documentation 6.13 and easy to use configuration tools. <a href="about/">More information...</a> 6.14 @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ 6.15 <a href="http://labs.slitaz.org/">laboratories</a>. Both are 6.16 available as a <a href="rss.xml">XML feed</a>. The project also 6.17 publishes a small monthly Newsletter. The website <a href="../">main page</a> 6.18 - will give you a nice overview of latest news, cooked packages, commits 6.19 + will give you a nice overview of the latest news, commits, cooked packages, 6.20 and Tweets. 6.21 </p> 6.22
7.1 --- a/en/mailing-list.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 7.2 +++ b/en/mailing-list.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 7.3 @@ -92,9 +92,8 @@ 7.4 <div id="block_top"> 7.5 <h1>Mailing list</h1> 7.6 <p> 7.7 - Support, developpement, SliTaz contributors discusions and 7.8 - announcement. All this is part of the mailing list - Join now 7.9 - to get help or involved into the project. 7.10 + SliTaz contributors discussions and announcements, support, development. 7.11 + All this is part of the mailing list - Join now to get help or involved in the project. 7.12 </p> 7.13 <ul> 7.14 <li><a href="mailing-list.html#about">About the list</a> - 7.15 @@ -217,6 +216,7 @@ 7.16 <li><a href="../netmap.php">Network Map</a></li> 7.17 <li>Page modified the 06 Jan 2011</li> 7.18 <li><a href="http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=referer"><img 7.19 + 7.20 src="../pics/website/xhtml10.png" alt="Valid XHTML 1.0" 7.21 title="Code validé XHTML 1.0" 7.22 style="width: 80px; height: 15px; vertical-align: middle;" /></a></li>
8.1 --- a/en/news/2007.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 8.2 +++ b/en/news/2007.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 8.3 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ 8.4 <h1>News archives</h1> 8.5 <p> 8.6 Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken 8.7 - due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its 8.8 + due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their 8.9 own domain). 8.10 </p> 8.11 <h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
9.1 --- a/en/news/2008.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 9.2 +++ b/en/news/2008.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 9.3 @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ 9.4 <h1>News archives</h1> 9.5 <p> 9.6 Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken 9.7 - due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its 9.8 + due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their 9.9 own domain). 9.10 </p> 9.11 <h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
10.1 --- a/en/news/2009.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 10.2 +++ b/en/news/2009.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 10.3 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ 10.4 <h1>News archives</h1> 10.5 <p> 10.6 Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken 10.7 - due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its 10.8 + due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their 10.9 own domain). 10.10 </p> 10.11 <h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
11.1 --- a/en/news/index.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 11.2 +++ b/en/news/index.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 11.3 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ 11.4 <h1>News archives</h1> 11.5 <p> 11.6 Website news archives by year. Note that some links may be broken 11.7 - due to website structure changes (mainly the doc who moved to its 11.8 + due to website structure changes (mainly the docs that moved to their 11.9 own domain). 11.10 </p> 11.11 <h3><img src="../../pics/website/news.png" alt="png" />News by year</h3>
12.1 --- a/en/packages/index.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 12.2 +++ b/en/packages/index.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 12.3 @@ -126,8 +126,8 @@ 12.4 12.5 <h2>Documentation</h2> 12.6 <p> 12.7 -The SliTaz project provide a large <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/">documentation</a> 12.8 -to let you learn install and manage packages on your SliTaz GNU/Linux distribution. 12.9 +The SliTaz project provides detailed <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/">documentation</a> 12.10 +to let you learn how to install and manage packages on your SliTaz GNU/Linux distribution. 12.11 The <a href="http://forum.slitaz.org/">support forum</a> members will help you 12.12 in case of trouble and is also the place to request a new package. 12.13 </p>
13.1 --- a/en/template.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 13.2 +++ b/en/template.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 13.3 @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ 13.4 <div id="block_top"> 13.5 <h1>Template</h1> 13.6 <p> 13.7 - Page introduction and/or table of content 13.8 + Page introduction and/or table of contents 13.9 </p> 13.10 <!-- Top block end --> 13.11 </div>
14.1 --- a/i18n.html Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 14.2 +++ b/i18n.html Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 14.3 @@ -53,14 +53,14 @@ 14.4 <p> 14.5 The main goal of SliTaz is to provide full support for a given 14.6 language, including the website, official Wiki documentation, 14.7 - a dedicated forum and all SliTaz related project such as the 14.8 + a dedicated forum and all SliTaz related projects such as the 14.9 LiveCD GUI builder. 14.10 </p> 14.11 <p> 14.12 - Traduction is a community effort and everyone can help. You 14.13 + Translation is a community effort and everyone can help. You're 14.14 welcome to join the team! You can find more pot files on 14.15 - <a href="http://hg.slitaz.org/">Hg</a>, just pick up one, 14.16 - translate it and sent it to the mailing list or upload it to 14.17 + <a href="http://hg.slitaz.org/">Hg</a>, just pick one up, 14.18 + translate it and send it to the mailing list or upload it onto the 14.19 SliTaz Community Network aka <a href="http://scn.slitaz.org/">SCN</a>. 14.20 </p> 14.21 <!-- Top block end -->
15.1 --- a/index.php Fri Jan 07 01:47:48 2011 +0100 15.2 +++ b/index.php Fri Jan 07 21:22:06 2011 +0000 15.3 @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ 15.4 <h2>About SliTaz</h2> 15.5 <p> 15.6 SliTaz is an open source and free operating system providing a fully featured 15.7 -desktop or server in less than 30 Mb. SliTaz is simple to use, fast and stable. 15.8 +desktop or server in less than 30 MB. SliTaz is simple to use, fast and stable. 15.9 We have an active community and <a href="netmap.php">network</a> to provide 15.10 help and get involved. 15.11 </p>