website rev 124

en: Tidy up Tazwok Manual & typos
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sat Jul 26 20:47:49 2008 +0000 (2008-07-26)
parents 219774292f8a
children 44b5f0933d18
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     1.4  To know the current system time, you can simply type <code>date</code>. On 
     1.5  SliTaz, the timezone configuration file is saved in <code>/etc/TZ</code>, you 
     1.6  can edit with your favorite text editor or simply <code>echo</code> the changes.
     1.7 -To see the available timezones, you can look in the
     1.8 +To view the available timezones, you can look in the
     1.9  <code>/usr/share/zoneinfo</code> directory.
    1.10  Here's an example using the timezone Europe/London:
    1.11  </p>
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     2.3 @@ -213,7 +213,7 @@
     2.4  <a name="openbox"></a>
     2.5  <h3>Openbox</h3>
     2.6  <p>
     2.7 -Openbox is a lightweight window manager than can be configured using the obconf 
     2.8 +Openbox is a lightweight window manager that can be configured using the obconf 
     2.9  utility. To install openbox:
    2.10  </p>
    2.11  <pre> # tazpkg get-install openbox
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     3.3 @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     3.4  <h2>DESCRIPTION</h2>
     3.5  <p>
     3.6  Tazwok is a command line tool to configure and compile a package from source. Tazwok can also create packages
     3.7 -ready to be used by Tazpkg - the SliTaz package manager. To work, Tazwok uses a directory containing
     3.8 +ready to be used by Tazpkg, the SliTaz package manager. To work, Tazwok uses a directory containing
     3.9  the receipt and the necessary information for the construction of the package. This receipt is also used by
    3.10  Tazpkg and consists of different variables and functions. Tazwok uses a configuration file (/etc/tazwok.conf)
    3.11  to find the path to the wok, the package sources, and generated .tazpkg packages. Tazwok can also generate
    3.12 @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
    3.13  <h2>COMMANDS</h2>
    3.14  <h3><font color="#6c0023">usage</font></h3>
    3.15  <p>
    3.16 -Usage displays a list of available commands with a short description in English:
    3.17 +Usage displays a summary of available commands with a short description in English:
    3.18  </p>
    3.19  <pre> # tazwok usage
    3.20  </pre>
    3.21 @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
    3.22  </pre>
    3.23  <h3><font color="#6c0023">list</font></h3>
    3.24  <p>
    3.25 -List allows you to list all the packages contained in the wok or list the default categories
    3.26 +List allows you to list all the packages contained in the wok or the default categories
    3.27  (you can create your own). It can also list packages by category:
    3.28  </p>
    3.29  <pre> # tazwok list
    3.30 @@ -79,13 +79,13 @@
    3.31  <h3><font color="#6c0023">info</font></h3>
    3.32  <p>
    3.33  This command provides information on the package - name, version, etc. Info on the basic package receipt
    3.34 -is the same displayed by Tazpkg and the installed packages:
    3.35 +is the same as displayed by Tazpkg and the installed packages:
    3.36  </p>
    3.37  <pre> # tazwok info package
    3.38  </pre>
    3.39  <h3><font color="#6c0023">check-log</font></h3>
    3.40  <p>
    3.41 -When compiling a binary source, Tazwok generates a few messages stored in the log file
    3.42 +When compiling a binary source, Tazwok generates a few messages stored in the file
    3.43  'process.log'. To view:
    3.44  </p>
    3.45  <pre> # tazwok check-log package
    3.46 @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@
    3.47  <p>
    3.48  This command uses the compilation rules (compile_rules) specified in the receipt for the package in
    3.49  question to compile the sources. Note compilation rules are not always necessary - packages 
    3.50 -generated by 'genpkg' and 'cook' can compile sources and generate the binary package.
    3.51 +generated by 'genpkg' and 'cook' can also compile sources and generate the binary package.
    3.52  Example:
    3.53  </p>
    3.54  <pre> # tazwok compile package
    3.55 @@ -139,7 +139,7 @@
    3.56  <p>
    3.57  The 'new-tree' command can create a new package in the wok and can be used interactively. It
    3.58  will create a directory of the package and a receipt that can then be edited with your favorite
    3.59 -text editor and can be configured using the '-interactive' option. For help you can look at existing 
    3.60 +text editor and can be configured using the '--interactive' option. For help you can look at existing 
    3.61  receipts or read the documentation in the Cookbook. Example: 
    3.62  </p>
    3.63  <pre> # tazwok new-tree package
    3.64 @@ -148,7 +148,7 @@
    3.65  <h3><font color="#6c0023">gen-list</font></h3>
    3.66  <p>
    3.67  The 'gen-list' command can generate a list of packages (packages.list), their md5 (packages.md5) and a list
    3.68 -of package options containing more information (packages.txt). The lists are created on the basis of packages
    3.69 +of package options containing information (packages.txt). The lists are created on the basis of packages
    3.70  contained in a directory. The list in text format is built using a receipt contained in a wok. The default
    3.71  packages directory is the one specified in the configuration file, you can also specify the directory on the
    3.72  command line. Examples: 
    3.73 @@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
    3.74  </pre>
    3.75  <h3><font color="#6c0023">gen-clean-wok and clean-wok</font></h3>
    3.76  <p>
    3.77 -The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or use a copy
    3.78 +The 'gen-clean-wok' command can create a new wok, this is useful to save a version of the wok, or to use a copy
    3.79  to test with another. Running 'clean-wok' will clean all packages in the current wok and delete any generated
    3.80  files. To create a clean wok or clean the current wok:
    3.81  </p>