website rev 9
Typo and new texts in the Handbook by Paul Issot
| author | Christophe Lincoln <pankso@slitaz.org> |
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| date | Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 (2008-03-30) |
| parents | 2023f069f700 |
| children | 750764d1b275 |
| files | en/about/index.html en/artwork/index.html en/devel/index.html en/doc/handbook/index.html en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html en/doc/handbook/packages.html en/doc/index.html en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html en/get/index.html en/index.html en/search.html en/sitemap.html |
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1.1 --- a/en/about/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 1.2 +++ b/en/about/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 1.3 @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ 1.4 burn to a cdrom and boot from. When the system is running you can eject the LiveCD 1.5 and use your CD drive for other tasks. The Live system provides a full-featured, 1.6 working graphical distro and lets you keep your data and personal settings on 1.7 -persistant media. The system can be extended with the Tazpkg package manager and 1.8 +persistent media. The system can be extended with the Tazpkg package manager and 1.9 security updates are provided for the cooking and stable versions. 1.10 </p> 1.11 <p> 1.12 @@ -89,6 +89,7 @@ 1.13 <li>Chat, mail and FTP clients.</li> 1.14 <li>SSH client and server powered by Dropbear.</li> 1.15 <li>Database engine with SQLite.</li> 1.16 + <li>Generate a LiveUSB device.</li> 1.17 <li>Tools to create, edit or burn CD or DVD images.</li> 1.18 <li>Elegent desktop with JWM running on the top of Xvesa (X server).</li> 1.19 <li>Home made graphical boxes to command line utilities.</li> 1.20 @@ -116,7 +117,7 @@ 1.21 <a href="http://kmandla.wordpress.com/2007/10/16/great-vengeance-and-furious-anger/" 1.22 >Great vengeance and furious anger</a>, see also published a day after : 1.23 <a href="http://kmandla.wordpress.com/2007/10/17/the-best-part-about-trying-new-distros/" 1.24 - >The best part about trying new distros</a>. Thanks a lot for representation 1.25 + >The best part about trying new distros</a>. Thanks a lot for support 1.26 and comments. 1.27 </p> 1.28 <p>
2.1 --- a/en/artwork/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 2.2 +++ b/en/artwork/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 2.3 @@ -71,9 +71,9 @@ 2.4 <p> 2.5 This section of the website is dedicated to art and graphics intended for the 2.6 SliTaz project. Images are free, and you can use them to make your own 2.7 -Wallpaper or display a logo on your site to popularize the project. The SliTaz 2.8 +wallpaper or display a logo on your site to help popularize the project. The SliTaz 2.9 logos and icons are available in many sizes and can be directly downloaded via 2.10 -the <a href="../../pics/artwork/">artwork</a> directory. You will also find, some 2.11 +the <a href="../../pics/artwork/">artwork</a> directory. You will also find here, some 2.12 <a href="screenshots.html">screenshots</a> made with mtPaint and 2.13 The Gimp. 2.14 </p> 2.15 @@ -82,30 +82,30 @@ 2.16 <h3>Artwork for SliTaz</h3> 2.17 <p> 2.18 As with many things SliTaz, graphics, logos, themes, and wallpapers are fully 2.19 -made by the community and developers. The project always likes to maintain 2.20 +constructed by the community and developers. The project always likes to maintain 2.21 elegant, sober, quality design. Making a logo, wallpaper or otherwise is a 2.22 good way to participate in the project without getting your hands dirty coding 2.23 -or document proofing xHTML. If you want to create for SliTaz, or you want to 2.24 +or document proofing xHTML. If you want to create artwork for SliTaz, or you want to 2.25 use some artwork online, it is highly recommended that you contact us first 2.26 -via the <a href="../mailing-list.html">Mailing List</a>. Be careful not to 2.27 +via the <a href="../mailing-list.html">Mailing List</a>. Try not to 2.28 send files that are too large. 2.29 </p> 2.30 <h4>Artwork LiveCD</h4> 2.31 <p> 2.32 To maintain the constraints of the LiveCD , the image should not exceed 200 2.33 -kilobytes, and you'll need two identical ones, different in size 1600x1200 2.34 -and 1280X1024. This is because the ratio of 3/4 is not supported by screens 2.35 +kilobytes, and you'll need two of them differing in size; 1600x1200 2.36 +and 1280x1024. This is because the ratio of 3/4 is not supported by screens 2.37 with a 1280 pixel width (it can result in image distortion and black borders). 2.38 -Finally each version offers a new theme / background which follow the same 2.39 +Finally each release version offers a new theme / background which follow the same 2.40 guidelines and it goes without saying that tools distributed with the system 2.41 -should be used. With a LiveCD you already have mtPaint, on an installed system 2.42 +should be used. With a LiveCD you already have mtPaint and on an installed system 2.43 you'll find Gimp on the mirror. Note that the free format PNG is privileged. 2.44 </p> 2.45 2.46 <h3><font color="#6c0023">RGB colors</font></h3> 2.47 <ul> 2.48 - <li>Beige-grey : <code>d4d191</code> et <code>bfb06b</code></li> 2.49 - <li>Bordeau : <code>6c0023</code> et <code>522222</code></li> 2.50 + <li>Beige : <code>d4d191</code> et <code>bfb06b</code></li> 2.51 + <li>Red : <code>6c0023</code> et <code>522222</code></li> 2.52 <li>Grey : <code>242424</code> et <code>222222</code></li> 2.53 <li>Orange : <code>df8f06</code></li> 2.54 <li>Yellow : <code>f0ba08</code></li>
3.1 --- a/en/devel/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 3.2 +++ b/en/devel/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 3.3 @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ 3.4 to join and contribute, from users, to hackers and developers there is always 3.5 something to do, ie. Proofreading or writing documentation, sending bugs or 3.6 patches to the Mailing list, gaining access to the wok and pushing some new 3.7 -packages or simply to help others on the list or forum. SliTaz has got Mercurial 3.8 +packages or simply to help others on the Mailing list or forum. SliTaz has got Mercurial 3.9 repositories hosted on a SliTaz system, developers can ask for a new repo if 3.10 needed and contributors have write access to correct typos, scripts, etc. 3.11 </p>
4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 4.3 @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ 4.4 and Window manager.</li> 4.5 <li><a href="gen-livecd.html">Generate a LiveCD flavor</a> - Generate your 4.6 own LiveCD flavor using Tazlito.</li> 4.7 - <li><a href="liveusb.html">LiveUSB media</a> - Creat a bootable USB media 4.8 + <li><a href="liveusb.html">LiveUSB media</a> - Create bootable USB media 4.9 using TazUSB.</li> 4.10 </ul> 4.11
5.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 5.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/liveusb.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 5.3 @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ 5.4 <pre># tazusb gen-liveusb /dev/sda1 5.5 </pre> 5.6 <p> 5.7 -And that's all you need to do, providing your computer bios supports it, you 5.8 +And that's all you need to do, providing your computer bios is supported, you 5.9 can now boot Slitaz from usb media. 5.10 </p> 5.11 <h4>Maintaining system settings</h4> 5.12 @@ -73,9 +73,8 @@ 5.13 <h4>Tazusb Manual</h4> 5.14 <p> 5.15 The official Tazusb manual can be found in SliTaz 5.16 -<a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html">Web site documenation</a>, 5.17 -it contains a lot more useful information. The manual is also installed on the 5.18 -core LiveCD and avalaible trow the documentation menu. 5.19 +<a href="http://www.slitaz.org/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html">Web site documentation</a>, 5.20 +it contains a lot more useful information. The manual is also available through the documentation menu on the core LiveCD. 5.21 </p> 5.22 5.23 <!-- End of content -->
6.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/packages.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 6.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/packages.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 6.3 @@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ 6.4 set by a Tazwok configuration file which can be located in 6.5 <code>/etc/tazwok.conf</code> or in the current directory, this is useful if you 6.6 want to work with multiple woks. Now, if the <code>slitaz-toolchain</code> is 6.7 -installed, you can start to create and build a package which doesn't need much 6.8 +installed, you can start to create and build a package which doesn't need many 6.9 dependencies. Small example: 6.10 </p> 6.11 <pre>
7.1 --- a/en/doc/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 7.2 +++ b/en/doc/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 7.3 @@ -79,9 +79,9 @@ 7.4 7.5 <h2><font color="#df8f06">Release Notes</font></h2> 7.6 <p> 7.7 -SliTaz Release Notes provide specifics informations about the stable version 7.8 -and give a few usefull tips to start using the system. On the core LiveCD, 7.9 -Releases Notes are installed and available throught the "Documentation" menu. 7.10 +SliTaz Release Notes provide detailed information about the stable version 7.11 +and give a few useful tips to help you start using the system. On the core LiveCD, 7.12 +Releases Notes are installed and available through the "Documentation" menu. 7.13 </p> 7.14 7.15 <p>
8.1 --- a/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 8.2 +++ b/en/doc/manuals/tazusb.en.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 8.3 @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ 8.4 <h2>COMMANDS</h2> 8.5 <h3><font color="#6c0023">usage</font></h3> 8.6 <p> 8.7 -The command 'usage' will display a short summary of all avalaible commands. 8.8 +The command 'usage' will display a short summary of all available commands. 8.9 </p> 8.10 <pre> 8.11 # tazusb usage 8.12 @@ -58,10 +58,10 @@ 8.13 8.14 <h3><font color="#6c0023">writefs</font></h3> 8.15 <p> 8.16 -The command 'writefs' will take the current memory resident filesystem and create a "rootfs.gz". If your flash drive is mounted as /home (as it should be), the new filesystem will be copied to the drive for you, otherwise it is left on the root of the drive. Your previous filesystem will be renamed to "previous.gz" and can be accessed on bootup by typing "previous" at the "boot:" prompt. All previous filesystems are renamed to rootfs.gz.unixtimestamp. These are not removed automaticaly, so you should periodically delete these to keep disk usage down. 8.17 +The command 'writefs' will take the current memory resident filesystem and create a "rootfs.gz". If your flash drive is mounted as /home (as it should be), the new filesystem will be copied to the drive for you, otherwise it is left on the root of the drive. Your previous filesystem will be renamed to "previous.gz" and can be accessed on bootup by typing "previous" at the "boot:" prompt. All previous filesystems are renamed to rootfs.gz.unixtimestamp. These are not removed automatically, so you should periodically delete these to keep disk usage down. 8.18 </p> 8.19 <p> 8.20 -Filesystem compression is supported in the form of lzma, gzip or none. Using no compression is very quick (under 5 seconds) and useful if you are experimenting with a lot of changes. By comparison, using lzma or gzip takes a few minutes but will dramatically reduce file size. This is recommended when commiting permanent changes to the filesystem. 8.21 +Filesystem compression is supported in the form of lzma, gzip or none. Using no compression is very quick (under 5 seconds) and useful if you are experimenting with a lot of changes. By comparison, using lzma or gzip takes a few minutes but will dramatically reduce file size. This is recommended when committing permanent changes to the filesystem. 8.22 </p> 8.23 <pre> 8.24 # tazusb writefs compression
9.1 --- a/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 9.2 +++ b/en/doc/releases/1.0/relnotes.en.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 9.3 @@ -245,7 +245,7 @@ 9.4 <li>Pascal Bellard</li> 9.5 <li>Eric Joseph-Alexandre</li> 9.6 <li>Julien Rabier</li> 9.7 - <li>Paul Issot</li> 9.8 + <li>Paul Issott</li> 9.9 <li>Andrew Miller</li> 9.10 <li>Serge Daigle</li> 9.11 <li>Gauthier Bar</li>
10.1 --- a/en/get/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 10.2 +++ b/en/get/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 10.3 @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ 10.4 <a name="tools"></a> 10.5 <h3>Utilities and tools</h3> 10.6 <p> 10.7 -Tazpkg (Package manager), Tazlito (SliTaz Live Tool), Tazwok (Source builder) 10.8 -and the SliTaz Tools tarballs can all be downloaded from the 10.9 +Tazpkg (Package manager), Tazlito (SliTaz Live Tool), Tazwok (Source builder), 10.10 +Tazusb (LiveUSB Tool) and the SliTaz Tools tarballs can all be downloaded from the 10.11 <a href="http://www.tuxfamily.org/">TuxFamily</a> mirror. Note that all the 10.12 utilities are installed by default on SliTaz and source code is commented 10.13 in English. Download sources by 10.14 @@ -99,9 +99,9 @@ 10.15 <a name="stable"></a> 10.16 <h2>LiveCD - Stable version</h2> 10.17 <p> 10.18 -SliTaz stable version provide a mature operationg system, widely tested by an 10.19 -active community. The core LiceCD give you a large selection of multi-usages 10.20 -packages carefully integrated, resulting in a coherent and robust system. 10.21 +SliTaz stable version provides a mature operating system, widely tested by an 10.22 +active community. The core LiveCD offers you a large selection of multi-use 10.23 +packages which are carefully integrated, resulting in a coherent and robust system. 10.24 Current 1.0 stable version released on the 22 March 2008. 10.25 </p> 10.26 10.27 @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ 10.28 <p> 10.29 SliTaz "Cooking" LiveCD is a constantly evolving version, fully usable, it allows 10.30 you to test the latest improvements and packages, ask for new features or report 10.31 -bugs to prepare for a stable version as possible. 10.32 +bugs to help us to prepare for the stable version. 10.33 </p> 10.34 10.35 <p class="get">
11.1 --- a/en/index.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 11.2 +++ b/en/index.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 11.3 @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ 11.4 free software. The goal of SliTaz is to have a GNU/Linux distro working in 11.5 memory (RAM). Installable to a hard disk, with good support for French language 11.6 oriented web, It offers high performance and PC recycling. SliTaz boots with 11.7 -Syslinux and provides more than 200 Linux commands, LightTPD web server, 11.8 +Syslinux and provides more than 200 Linux commands, the LightTPD web server, 11.9 SQLite database, rescue tools, IRC client, SSH client/server powered by 11.10 Dropbear, X window system, JWM (Joe's Window Manager), gFTP, Geany IDE, 11.11 Mozilla Firefox, Alsaplayer, Gparted, a sound file éditor and much more.
12.1 --- a/en/search.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 12.2 +++ b/en/search.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 12.3 @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ 12.4 <input type="hidden" name="cx" value="000868395082919927601:nddq7yjdcxg" /> 12.5 <input type="hidden" name="cof" value="FORID:0" /> 12.6 <input name="q" type="text" size="40" /> 12.7 - <input type="submit" name="sa" value="Recherche" /> 12.8 + <input type="submit" name="sa" value="Search" /> 12.9 <img 12.10 src="http://www.google.com/coop/images/google_custom_search_smnar.gif" 12.11 alt="Google Custom Search" />
13.1 --- a/en/sitemap.html Sat Mar 29 13:05:04 2008 +0100 13.2 +++ b/en/sitemap.html Sun Mar 30 18:25:11 2008 +0200 13.3 @@ -90,9 +90,9 @@ 13.4 <legend>Art & Developers corner</legend> 13.5 <ul> 13.6 <li><a href="artwork/">Artwork</a> - Art & Design.</li> 13.7 - <li><a href="artwork/screenshots.html">Screenshots.</a></li> 13.8 + <li><a href="artwork/screenshots.html">Screenshots.</a> - Screenshots.</li> 13.9 <li><a href="devel/">Developers corner</a> - Repos and general 13.10 - informations.</li> 13.11 + information.</li> 13.12 </ul> 13.13 </fieldset> 13.14 </div>