website rev 12

Minor corrections
author Paul Issot <paul@slitaz.org>
date Tue Apr 01 23:40:14 2008 +0000 (2008-04-01)
parents 1fbc2595ebee
children 3b7f22d54c7d
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     1.1 --- a/en/artwork/index.html	Sun Mar 30 18:43:14 2008 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/en/artwork/index.html	Tue Apr 01 23:40:14 2008 +0000
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     1.4  </p>
     1.5  <h4>Artwork LiveCD</h4>
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -To maintain the constraints of the LiveCD , the image should not exceed 200 
     1.8 +To maintain the constraints of the LiveCD, the image should not exceed 200 
     1.9  kilobytes, and you'll need two of them differing in size; 1600x1200 
    1.10  and 1280x1024. This is because the ratio of 3/4 is not supported by screens 
    1.11  with a 1280 pixel width (it can result in image distortion and black borders).
     2.1 --- a/en/get/index.html	Sun Mar 30 18:43:14 2008 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/en/get/index.html	Tue Apr 01 23:40:14 2008 +0000
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     2.4  	the current stable version.</li>
     2.5      <li><a href="#cooking">LiveCD Cooking version </a> - Bootable ISO image of
     2.6  	the cooking version.</li>
     2.7 -    <li><a href="#tools">SliTaz Utilities and tools</a>.</li>
     2.8  </ul>
     2.9  
    2.10 -<h3>General informations</h3>
    2.11 +<h3>General information</h3>
    2.12  <p>
    2.13  This part of the site allows you to download a free copy of the SliTaz 
    2.14  GNU/Linux LiveCD or to get utilities and tools source code. To start using 
    2.15 @@ -101,7 +100,7 @@
    2.16  <p>
    2.17  SliTaz stable version provides a mature operating system, widely tested by an 
    2.18  active community. The core LiveCD offers you a large selection of multi-use
    2.19 -packages which are carefully integrated, resulting in a coherent and robust system.
    2.20 +packages carefully integrated into the distribution, thus resulting in a coherent and robust system.
    2.21  Current 1.0 stable version released on the 22 March 2008.
    2.22  </p>
    2.23  
     3.1 --- a/en/packages/index.html	Sun Mar 30 18:43:14 2008 +0200
     3.2 +++ b/en/packages/index.html	Tue Apr 01 23:40:14 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
     3.4  <h2><font color="#df8f06"># tazpkg get-install pkg</font></h2>
     3.5  
     3.6  <p>
     3.7 -This part of the site allows you to view or search for the software packages 
     3.8 +This part of the site allows you to view all of the software packages 
     3.9  available on the SliTaz mirror. The pages are automatically updated daily via 
    3.10  a cron job. All packages are installable via the package manager Tazpkg using 
    3.11  the command <code>tazpkg get-install pkgname</code>.