slitaz-forge rev 541
arm: edit codex
author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 (2014-05-01) |
parents | 17d70cbe5f1b |
children | 87350a4baf3d |
files | arm/codex/index.html arm/codex/setup.html arm/codex/system.html arm/rpi/index.html |
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1.1 --- a/arm/codex/index.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 1.2 +++ b/arm/codex/index.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 1.3 @@ -42,8 +42,8 @@ 1.4 <h2>SliTaz Raspberry Pi book</h2> 1.5 1.6 <p> 1.7 - <a href="pibook.html">Pibook</a> - A PocketBook dedicated to SliTaz 1.8 - and the Raspberry Pi: 1.9 + <a href="pibook.html">Pibook</a> - A Pocket Book dedicated to SliTaz 1.10 + and the Raspberry Pi 1.11 </p> 1.12 1.13 <!-- Close content -->
2.1 --- a/arm/codex/setup.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 2.2 +++ b/arm/codex/setup.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 2.3 @@ -58,8 +58,8 @@ 2.4 </ul> 2.5 2.6 <p> 2.7 - You can reach you server with the IP address of the machine or from 2.8 - the machine itself via the localhost URL (link below). And you you 2.9 + You can reach your server with the IP address of the machine or from 2.10 + the machine itself via the localhost URL (link below). And you 2.11 can have some stats and the server status by adding 'server-status' 2.12 to the server URL, example with the loopback IP address: 2.13 </p> 2.14 @@ -73,10 +73,10 @@ 2.15 2.16 <p> 2.17 This setup guide will use the small Busybox ftpd applet and inetd 2.18 - daemon to run the FTP server only when needed. The setup use very 2.19 - small system resources and the server can handle undread of files. 2.20 + daemon to run the FTP server only when needed. The setup uses very 2.21 + little system resources and the server can handle hundreds of files. 2.22 The root directory is where the FTP files are or will be stored. 2.23 - Open inetd.conf with a textt editor: 2.24 + Open inetd.conf with a text editor: 2.25 </p> 2.26 2.27 <pre> 2.28 @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ 2.29 </pre> 2.30 2.31 <p> 2.32 - We choosed to store FTP files in <b>/home/share/ftp</b>, but you are 2.33 + We chose to store FTP files in <b>/home/share/ftp</b>, but you are 2.34 free to use the folder you want. Now restart the inetd daemon to include 2.35 your new settings: 2.36 </p> 2.37 @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ 2.38 </pre> 2.39 2.40 <p> 2.41 - Finaly use a web browser to test the services. As usual, you must 2.42 + Finally use a web browser to test the services. As usual, you must 2.43 use the local IP address of the server or connect from localhost: 2.44 </p> 2.45 <pre class="box-share">
3.1 --- a/arm/codex/system.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 3.2 +++ b/arm/codex/system.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 3.3 @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ 3.4 <p> 3.5 To use the interface, you must find the IP address of your device 3.6 and connect with the root user and password via the correct local IP. 3.7 - You can use ipinfo on on device to get the IP address: 3.8 + You can use ipinfo on the device to get the IP address: 3.9 </p> 3.10 <pre> 3.11 $ ipinfo 3.12 @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ 3.13 </pre> 3.14 <p> 3.15 The service is started by default to help new users. If you want to 3.16 - stop/start the web server manually from cmdline you can use the 3.17 + stop/start the web server manually from a cmdline you can use the 3.18 following commands and if you want to disable the service at boot 3.19 you must edit: <b>/etc/rcS.conf</b>. Start or stop the web server: 3.20 </p> 3.21 @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ 3.22 # startd httpd 3.23 </pre> 3.24 <p> 3.25 - If you wich to run the service on an othe port, you can edit the web 3.26 + If you wish to run the service on another port, you can edit the web 3.27 server configuration file: <b>/etc/httpd.conf</b> 3.28 </p> 3.29
4.1 --- a/arm/rpi/index.html Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100 4.2 +++ b/arm/rpi/index.html Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 4.3 @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ 4.4 Official SliTaz GNU/Linux Raspberry Pi distribution, a small operating 4.5 system for a small computer! The goal is to provide a fast, minimal 4.6 footprint and optimized distro for the Raspberry Pi. You can setup a 4.7 - wide range of system type, from servers to desktop and learning platform. 4.8 + wide range of system types, from servers to desktops and learning platforms. 4.9 Check out our <a href="../codex/pibook.html">PiBook</a> to get started 4.10 with your Raspberry Pi and SliTaz. 4.11 </p> 4.12 @@ -90,11 +90,11 @@ 4.13 <p> 4.14 For now the only installation option is to have 3 partitions on the SD 4.15 card then run the install.sh script from a Linux system. In time we 4.16 - will try to provide disk image for MS Windows and OSX users. 4.17 + will try to provide a disk image for MS Windows and OSX users. 4.18 </p> 4.19 4.20 <div class="box-rpi"> 4.21 - Read out PiBook: 4.22 + Read our PiBook: 4.23 <a href="../codex/pibook.html#install">Installation instructions</a> 4.24 </div> 4.25 4.26 @@ -108,8 +108,8 @@ 4.27 </p> 4.28 4.29 <p> 4.30 - Finally, you can also control a SliTaz Pi desktop graphicaly with a 4.31 - VNC viewer. Check out: 4.32 + Finally, you can also control a SliTaz Pi desktop graphically with a 4.33 + VNC viewer. Check out the: 4.34 <a href="../codex/pibook.html#remote">PiBook Remote control</a> 4.35 section for more information. 4.36 </p> 4.37 @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@ 4.38 <h2>TazBerry</h2> 4.39 4.40 <p> 4.41 - TazBerry is a Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box. 4.42 + TazBerry is an Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box. 4.43 It provides a simple menu and lets you edit files with your favorite 4.44 text editor. TazBerry can be started from the window manger menu or 4.45 from the cmdline with: 4.46 @@ -138,8 +138,8 @@ 4.47 </p> 4.48 4.49 <div class="box-rpi"> 4.50 - <a href="../codex/pibook.html">PiBook</a> - Read out SliTaz 4.51 - Raspberry Pi PocketBook for suggested usage and setup guides. 4.52 + <a href="../codex/pibook.html">PiBook</a> - Read our SliTaz 4.53 + Raspberry Pi Pocket Book for suggested usage and setup guides. 4.54 </div> 4.55 4.56 <h2>Breakout boards</h2>