slitaz-forge rev 541

arm: edit codex
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100 (2014-05-01)
parents 17d70cbe5f1b
children 87350a4baf3d
files arm/codex/index.html arm/codex/setup.html arm/codex/system.html arm/rpi/index.html
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     1.1 --- a/arm/codex/index.html	Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100
     1.2 +++ b/arm/codex/index.html	Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100
     1.3 @@ -42,8 +42,8 @@
     1.4  <h2>SliTaz Raspberry Pi book</h2>
     1.5  
     1.6  <p>
     1.7 -	<a href="pibook.html">Pibook</a> - A PocketBook dedicated to SliTaz 
     1.8 -	and the Raspberry Pi:
     1.9 +	<a href="pibook.html">Pibook</a> - A Pocket Book dedicated to SliTaz 
    1.10 +	and the Raspberry Pi
    1.11  </p>
    1.12  
    1.13  <!-- Close content -->
     2.1 --- a/arm/codex/setup.html	Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100
     2.2 +++ b/arm/codex/setup.html	Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100
     2.3 @@ -58,8 +58,8 @@
     2.4  </ul>
     2.5  
     2.6  <p>
     2.7 -	You can reach you server with the IP address of the machine or from
     2.8 -	the machine itself via the localhost URL (link below). And you you 
     2.9 +	You can reach your server with the IP address of the machine or from
    2.10 +	the machine itself via the localhost URL (link below). And you  
    2.11  	can have some stats and the server status by adding 'server-status'
    2.12  	to the server URL, example with the loopback IP address:
    2.13  </p>
    2.14 @@ -73,10 +73,10 @@
    2.15  
    2.16  <p>
    2.17  	This setup guide will use the small Busybox ftpd applet and inetd 
    2.18 -	daemon to run the FTP server only when needed. The setup use very
    2.19 -	small system resources and the server can handle undread of files.
    2.20 +	daemon to run the FTP server only when needed. The setup uses very
    2.21 +	little system resources and the server can handle hundreds of files.
    2.22  	The root directory is where the FTP files are or will be stored.
    2.23 -	Open inetd.conf with a textt editor:
    2.24 +	Open inetd.conf with a text editor:
    2.25  </p>
    2.26  
    2.27  <pre>
    2.28 @@ -93,7 +93,7 @@
    2.29  </pre>
    2.30  
    2.31  <p>
    2.32 -	We choosed to store FTP files in <b>/home/share/ftp</b>, but you are
    2.33 +	We chose to store FTP files in <b>/home/share/ftp</b>, but you are
    2.34  	free to use the folder you want. Now restart the inetd daemon to include
    2.35  	your new settings:
    2.36  </p>
    2.37 @@ -103,7 +103,7 @@
    2.38  </pre>
    2.39  
    2.40  <p>
    2.41 -	Finaly use a web browser to test the services. As usual, you must
    2.42 +	Finally use a web browser to test the services. As usual, you must
    2.43  	use the local IP address of the server or connect from localhost:
    2.44  </p>
    2.45  <pre class="box-share">
     3.1 --- a/arm/codex/system.html	Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100
     3.2 +++ b/arm/codex/system.html	Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100
     3.3 @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
     3.4  <p>
     3.5  	To use the interface, you must find the IP address of your device
     3.6  	and connect with the root user and password via the correct local IP.
     3.7 -	You can use ipinfo on on device to get the IP address:
     3.8 +	You can use ipinfo on the device to get the IP address:
     3.9  </p>
    3.10  <pre>
    3.11  $ ipinfo
    3.12 @@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
    3.13  </pre>
    3.14  <p>
    3.15  	The service is started by default to help new users. If you want to
    3.16 -	stop/start the web server manually from cmdline you can use the
    3.17 +	stop/start the web server manually from a cmdline you can use the
    3.18  	following commands and if you want to disable the service at boot
    3.19  	you must edit: <b>/etc/rcS.conf</b>. Start or stop the web server:
    3.20  </p>
    3.21 @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@
    3.22  # startd httpd
    3.23  </pre>
    3.24  <p>
    3.25 -	If you wich to run the service on an othe port, you can edit the web
    3.26 +	If you wish to run the service on another port, you can edit the web
    3.27  	server configuration file: <b>/etc/httpd.conf</b>
    3.28  </p>
    3.29  
     4.1 --- a/arm/rpi/index.html	Thu May 01 20:51:50 2014 +0100
     4.2 +++ b/arm/rpi/index.html	Thu May 01 21:39:11 2014 +0100
     4.3 @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
     4.4  	Official SliTaz GNU/Linux Raspberry Pi distribution, a small operating
     4.5  	system for a small computer! The goal is to provide a fast, minimal 
     4.6  	footprint and optimized distro for the Raspberry Pi. You can setup a
     4.7 -	wide range of system type, from servers to desktop and learning platform.
     4.8 +	wide range of system types, from servers to desktops and learning platforms.
     4.9  	Check out our <a href="../codex/pibook.html">PiBook</a> to get started 
    4.10  	with your Raspberry Pi and SliTaz.
    4.11  </p>
    4.12 @@ -90,11 +90,11 @@
    4.13  <p>
    4.14  	For now the only installation option is to have 3 partitions on the SD
    4.15  	card then run the install.sh script from a Linux system. In time we 
    4.16 -	will try to provide disk image for MS Windows and OSX users.
    4.17 +	will try to provide a disk image for MS Windows and OSX users.
    4.18  </p>
    4.19  
    4.20  <div class="box-rpi">
    4.21 -	Read out PiBook: 
    4.22 +	Read our PiBook: 
    4.23  	<a href="../codex/pibook.html#install">Installation instructions</a>
    4.24  </div>
    4.25  
    4.26 @@ -108,8 +108,8 @@
    4.27  </p>
    4.28  
    4.29  <p>
    4.30 -	Finally, you can also control a SliTaz Pi desktop graphicaly with a
    4.31 -	VNC viewer. Check out: 
    4.32 +	Finally, you can also control a SliTaz Pi desktop graphically with a
    4.33 +	VNC viewer. Check out the: 
    4.34  	<a href="../codex/pibook.html#remote">PiBook Remote control</a>
    4.35  	section for more information.
    4.36  </p>
    4.37 @@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
    4.38  <h2>TazBerry</h2>
    4.39  
    4.40  <p>
    4.41 -	TazBerry is a Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box.
    4.42 +	TazBerry is an Ncurses GUI to configure your SliTaz Raspberry Pi box.
    4.43  	It provides a simple menu and lets you edit files with your favorite
    4.44  	text editor. TazBerry can be started from the window manger menu or
    4.45  	from the cmdline with:
    4.46 @@ -138,8 +138,8 @@
    4.47  </p>
    4.48  
    4.49  <div class="box-rpi">
    4.50 -	<a href="../codex/pibook.html">PiBook</a> - Read out SliTaz
    4.51 -	Raspberry Pi PocketBook for suggested usage and setup guides.
    4.52 +	<a href="../codex/pibook.html">PiBook</a> - Read our SliTaz
    4.53 +	Raspberry Pi Pocket Book for suggested usage and setup guides.
    4.54  </div>
    4.55  
    4.56  <h2>Breakout boards</h2>