tiny-slitaz rev 17
Tiny edits
author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100 (2016-07-21) |
parents | 080c97de1a5d |
children | b58beb683c22 |
files | index.php step1.php step5.php |
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1.1 --- a/index.php Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200 1.2 +++ b/index.php Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100 1.3 @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ 1.4 <h3>Tiny SliTaz goals</h3> 1.5 1.6 <p>Useful software, expansible, easy to configure, runs fully in RAM, simple, 1.7 -light and fast for minimum hardware resources: ie fits on one floppy disk (IDE 1.8 +light and fast for minimum hardware resources, i.e. fits on one floppy disk (IDE 1.9 disk optional), runs on a 386SX processor and needs as little memory as possible 1.10 (currently 4MB with a 2.6.14 Kernel). 1.11 <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:guides:pxe#why-use-pxe-the-vnc-example">Example</a> 1.12 @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@ 1.13 1.14 <p>Tiny SliTaz uses a Linux Kernel with an <a href="dist/rootfs.cpio" 1.15 title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">embedded filesystem</a>. An extra initramfs 1.16 -can also be loaded with the configuration and extra packages.</p> 1.17 +can also be loaded with the configuration files and extra packages.</p> 1.18 1.19 <p>The initramfs is based on <a href="http://uclibc.org/" 1.20 title="Instead of glibc">uClibc</a> and busybox with its <a
2.1 --- a/step1.php Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200 2.2 +++ b/step1.php Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100 2.3 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ 2.4 2.5 <p>The file <tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> in the initramfs holds all information 2.6 to rebuild your Tiny SliTaz system. You should upload your 2.7 -<tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> first if you want to upgrade your system only.</p> 2.8 +<tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> first if you only want to upgrade your system.</p> 2.9 2.10 <form method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data" action="<?php echo $_SERVER["PHP_SELF"]; ?>"> 2.11 Packages configuration: 2.12 @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ 2.13 2.14 <p id="kernel">You can upload a custom Kernel or use an official one. Your 2.15 Kernel should have an embedded initramfs with busybox like <a 2.16 -href="dist/rootfs.cpio" title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">this one</a>.</p> 2.17 +href="dist/rootfs.cpio" title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">this</a>.</p> 2.18 2.19 <div> 2.20 <form method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data" action="<?php echo $_SERVER["PHP_SELF"]; ?>">
3.1 --- a/step5.php Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200 3.2 +++ b/step5.php Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100 3.3 @@ -22,10 +22,10 @@ 3.4 <tr><td class="first">Bootable images:</td><td> 3.5 3.6 <?php 3.7 - $title="Neither Windows nor emm386 support. Need a real mode DOS"; 3.8 + $title="Neither Windows nor emm386 supported. Needs a real mode DOS"; 3.9 if ((filesize($_POST['tmp_dir']."rootfs.gz") + 3.10 filesize($_POST['tmp_dir']."fs/boot/bzImage")) <= 18*80*1024) { 3.11 - $title .= ". Tip: can be splitted in several boot floppies too"; 3.12 + $title .= ". Tip: can be split in several boot floppies too"; 3.13 ?> 3.14 <input name="download" value="Floppy image" type="submit" 3.15 title="You can use dd or rawrite to create the 1.44M floppy disk" /> 3.16 @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ 3.17 <input name="download" value="DOS/EXE" type="submit" 3.18 title="<?php echo $title; ?>" /> 3.19 <?php if (file_exists("/boot/isolinux/isolinux.bin")) { 3.20 - $title="Can be burn on a CD-ROM or written on a USB Key / memory card"; 3.21 + $title="Can be burnt on to a CD-ROM or written on to a USB Key / memory card"; 3.22 if (file_exists("/usr/bin/iso2exe")) 3.23 $title .= ", or renamed with the .exe suffix and run with DOS or Windows"; 3.24 ?> 3.25 @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@ 3.26 The kernel can be <a href="http://elinux.org/Linux_Tiny">tuned/patched</a> or 3.27 you can use an earlier version.</p> 3.28 3.29 -<p>You can test Tiny SliTaz without pre-historic hardware using qemu (need the 3.30 -<tt>ne</tt> module):</p> 3.31 +<p>You can test Tiny SliTaz without pre-historic hardware using qemu (needs the 3.32 +<tt>net</tt> module):</p> 3.33 3.34 <pre> 3.35 qemu -cpu 486 -m 4 -net nic,model=ne2k_isa -net tap -fda slitaz.img