tiny-slitaz rev 17

Tiny edits
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100 (2016-07-21)
parents 080c97de1a5d
children b58beb683c22
files index.php step1.php step5.php
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     1.1 --- a/index.php	Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200
     1.2 +++ b/index.php	Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100
     1.3 @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@
     1.4  <h3>Tiny SliTaz goals</h3>
     1.5  
     1.6  <p>Useful software, expansible, easy to configure, runs fully in RAM, simple,
     1.7 -light and fast for minimum hardware resources: ie fits on one floppy disk (IDE
     1.8 +light and fast for minimum hardware resources, i.e. fits on one floppy disk (IDE
     1.9  disk optional), runs on a 386SX processor and needs as little memory as possible
    1.10  (currently 4MB with a 2.6.14 Kernel).
    1.11  <a href="http://doc.slitaz.org/en:guides:pxe#why-use-pxe-the-vnc-example">Example</a>
    1.12 @@ -83,7 +83,7 @@
    1.13  
    1.14  <p>Tiny SliTaz uses a Linux Kernel with an <a href="dist/rootfs.cpio"
    1.15  title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">embedded filesystem</a>. An extra initramfs
    1.16 -can also be loaded with the configuration and extra packages.</p>
    1.17 +can also be loaded with the configuration files and extra packages.</p>
    1.18  
    1.19  <p>The initramfs is based on <a href="http://uclibc.org/"
    1.20  title="Instead of glibc">uClibc</a> and busybox with its <a
     2.1 --- a/step1.php	Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200
     2.2 +++ b/step1.php	Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100
     2.3 @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@
     2.4  
     2.5  <p>The file <tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> in the initramfs holds all information
     2.6  to rebuild your Tiny SliTaz system. You should upload your
     2.7 -<tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> first if you want to upgrade your system only.</p>
     2.8 +<tt>/etc/packages.conf</tt> first if you only want to upgrade your system.</p>
     2.9  
    2.10  <form method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data" action="<?php echo $_SERVER["PHP_SELF"]; ?>">
    2.11  	Packages configuration:
    2.12 @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@
    2.13  
    2.14  <p id="kernel">You can upload a custom Kernel or use an official one. Your
    2.15  Kernel should have an embedded initramfs with busybox like <a
    2.16 -href="dist/rootfs.cpio" title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">this one</a>.</p>
    2.17 +href="dist/rootfs.cpio" title="See CONFIG_INITRAMFS_SOURCE">this</a>.</p>
    2.18  
    2.19  <div>
    2.20  	<form method="post" enctype="multipart/form-data" action="<?php echo $_SERVER["PHP_SELF"]; ?>">
     3.1 --- a/step5.php	Mon Jul 18 18:49:43 2016 +0200
     3.2 +++ b/step5.php	Thu Jul 21 19:50:35 2016 +0100
     3.3 @@ -22,10 +22,10 @@
     3.4  	<tr><td class="first">Bootable images:</td><td>
     3.5  
     3.6  <?php
     3.7 -      $title="Neither Windows nor emm386 support. Need a real mode DOS";
     3.8 +      $title="Neither Windows nor emm386 supported. Needs a real mode DOS";
     3.9        if ((filesize($_POST['tmp_dir']."rootfs.gz") + 
    3.10  	   filesize($_POST['tmp_dir']."fs/boot/bzImage")) <= 18*80*1024) {
    3.11 -	   $title .= ". Tip: can be splitted in several boot floppies too";
    3.12 +	   $title .= ". Tip: can be split in several boot floppies too";
    3.13  	    ?>
    3.14  		<input name="download" value="Floppy image" type="submit"
    3.15  		       title="You can use dd or rawrite to create the 1.44M floppy disk" />
    3.16 @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
    3.17  		<input name="download" value="DOS/EXE" type="submit"
    3.18  		       title="<?php echo $title; ?>" />
    3.19  <?php if (file_exists("/boot/isolinux/isolinux.bin")) {
    3.20 -	  $title="Can be burn on a CD-ROM or written on a USB Key / memory card";
    3.21 +	  $title="Can be burnt on to a CD-ROM or written on to a USB Key / memory card";
    3.22  	  if (file_exists("/usr/bin/iso2exe"))
    3.23  	  	$title .= ", or renamed with the .exe suffix and run with DOS or Windows";
    3.24  	   ?>
    3.25 @@ -87,8 +87,8 @@
    3.26  The kernel can be <a href="http://elinux.org/Linux_Tiny">tuned/patched</a> or
    3.27  you can use an earlier version.</p>
    3.28  
    3.29 -<p>You can test Tiny SliTaz without pre-historic hardware using qemu (need the
    3.30 -<tt>ne</tt> module):</p>
    3.31 +<p>You can test Tiny SliTaz without pre-historic hardware using qemu (needs the
    3.32 +<tt>net</tt> module):</p>
    3.33  
    3.34  <pre>
    3.35  qemu -cpu 486 -m 4 -net nic,model=ne2k_isa -net tap -fda slitaz.img