website diff en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html @ rev 156

en: Tidy website grammar
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000 (2008-09-09)
parents 945470ee2725
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Tue Aug 19 21:44:00 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Tue Sep 09 10:36:54 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
     1.4  <p>
     1.5  To begin, first we must define where we are going to work by creating a directory and several sub directories
     1.6  to accomodate all the different files. The <em>hacking</em> of the ISO can be done from within a SliTaz system or any
     1.7 -other GNU/Linux distribution such as Debian, Fedora, PCLinuxOS etc. If you use SliTaz LiveCD mode
     1.8 +other GNU/Linux distribution such as Debian, Fedora, PCLinuxOS, etc. If you use SliTaz LiveCD mode
     1.9  (where you can remove the CD once SliTaz has launched in RAM and burn your new ISO), It's advisable to use
    1.10  USB media to carry on working, otherwise your work will be lost on shutdown. To begin you need to create a
    1.11  <em>hacking</em> directory that you can use inside <code>/home/slitaz</code> within the