website rev 228

en: Edits and typos
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000 (2008-12-27)
parents 3291e51abf30
children 2019458eaac9
files en/doc/cookbook/index.html en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html en/doc/scratchbook/base-system.html en/doc/scratchbook/gtk-apps.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/index.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/index.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -51,8 +51,8 @@
     1.4  At the base of the Cookbook is the <a href="../scratchbook/">Scratchbook</a>, 
     1.5  this contains instructions to create your own LiveCD by describing the creation of the 
     1.6  first ever public version of SliTaz in March 2007. 
     1.7 -The Cookbook is modified by the SliTaz community and steadily improved, it provides technical 
     1.8 -instructions about the distribution useful to developers and advanced users.
     1.9 +The Cookbook is modified by the SliTaz community and steadily improved, it provides technical
    1.10 +instructions useful to developers and advanced users.
    1.11  </p>
    1.12  
    1.13  
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/gen-livecd.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
     2.4  <h4>Install Tazlito on another distribution</h4>
     2.5  <p>
     2.6  Tazlito does not generate dependencies for the LiveCD, but
     2.7 -it depends of Cdrkit to burn the image and Tazpkg to 
     2.8 +it depends on Cdrkit to burn the image and Tazpkg to 
     2.9  regenerate SliTaz packages you want installed. To retrieve 
    2.10  and install Tazlito, follow the instructions in the README
    2.11  file in <a href="http://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/sources/tazlito/"
     3.1 --- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-apps.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
     3.4  <a name="about"></a>
     3.5  <h3><font color="#6c0023">About</font></h3>
     3.6  <p>
     3.7 -This chaper describes the facilities libraries and basic text mode applications supplied with
     3.8 +This chaper describes the facilities libraries and basic console applications supplied with
     3.9  SliTaz.
    3.10  </p>
    3.11  <h4>Assign an environment variable ($fs)</h4>
    3.12 @@ -220,7 +220,7 @@
    3.13  <p>
    3.14  The user configuration files authorized_keys and known_hosts are in ~/.ssh. This directory and the 
    3.15  file known_hosts are created automatically the first time the user launches dbclient. The system 
    3.16 -configuration files for the Dropbear server are in /etc/Dropbear:
    3.17 +configuration files for the Dropbear server are in /etc/dropbear:
    3.18   </p>
    3.19  <pre> # mkdir $fs/etc/dropbear
    3.20  </pre>
     4.1 --- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-ncurses.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
     4.3 @@ -194,7 +194,7 @@
     4.4  <h4>locale</h4>
     4.5  <p>
     4.6  About the language, you can copy the .mo files created when installing nano from
     4.7 -/usr/share/locale/(fr,en,de,es,etc)/LC_MESSAGES to the rootfs. Example for the the French language:
     4.8 +/usr/share/locale/(fr,en,de,es,etc)/LC_MESSAGES to the rootfs. Example for the French language:
     4.9  </p>
    4.10  <pre> # cp -a _pkg/usr/share/locale/fr/LC_MESSAGES $fs/usr/share/locale/fr
    4.11  </pre>
     5.1 --- a/en/doc/scratchbook/base-system.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
     5.2 +++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/base-system.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -531,7 +531,7 @@
     5.4  <pre> # find . -print | cpio -o -H newc | gzip -9 &gt; ../rootfs.gz
     5.5  </pre>
     5.6  <p>
     5.7 -You should have a file rootfs.gz about 1 to 2MB in the working directory SliTaz.
     5.8 +You should have a file rootfs.gz about 1 to 2MB in the working directory SliTaz/.
     5.9  </p>
    5.10  <p>
    5.11  For a new image, when making changes in rootfs, simply copy the new rootfs.gz archive to rootcd/boot 
     6.1 --- a/en/doc/scratchbook/gtk-apps.html	Wed Dec 24 13:41:29 2008 +0000
     6.2 +++ b/en/doc/scratchbook/gtk-apps.html	Sat Dec 27 12:29:19 2008 +0000
     6.3 @@ -168,8 +168,9 @@
     6.4  <a name="emelfm2"></a>
     6.5  <h3><font color="#6c0023">emelfm2-0.3.5 - File Manager</font></h3>
     6.6  <p>
     6.7 -The emelFM2 application is a file manager providing lots of useful functions, such as mounting 
     6.8 -devices, a text viewer, opening a terminal in the current directory and so on.
     6.9 +The emelFM2 application is a file manager providing lots of useful functions, 
    6.10 +such as the mounting of devices, a text viewer, opening a terminal in the current 
    6.11 +directory and so on.
    6.12  </p>
    6.13  <p>
    6.14  Website: <a href="http://emelfm2.net/">http://emelfm2.net/</a>