website rev 46

Minor amendments (en)
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000 (2008-05-14)
parents 3fbfd357859a
children fb63123c9a72
files en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html en/doc/index.html en/get/index.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Tue May 13 22:50:13 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/secure-server.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     1.4  Control and administer remotely with the Dropbear SSH secure server. Dropbear is a small SSH client/server
     1.5  supporting SSH 2, it's compatible with OpenSSH and uses ~/.ssh/authorized_keys for the management of public keys.
     1.6  Dropbear also provides it's own version of <code>scp</code>, allowing you to copy files
     1.7 -between remote machines in a secure manner.
     1.8 +between machines in a secure manner.
     1.9  </p>
    1.10  <p>
    1.11  Project website:
    1.12 @@ -53,10 +53,10 @@
    1.13  <p>
    1.14  The configuration files for the SSH client are located in the ~/.ssh directory of each user, this contains
    1.15  the authorized_keys and known_hosts files. The directory ~/.ssh and known_hosts file are automatically created
    1.16 -the first time you run the Dropbear server.
    1.17 +the first time you run the Dropbear client (dbclient).
    1.18  </p>
    1.19  <p>
    1.20 -To connect to a remote host using the user and machine name:
    1.21 +To connect to a remote host employing the user and machine name:
    1.22  </p>
    1.23  <pre> $ dbclient user@machine.org
    1.24  </pre>
    1.25 @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
    1.26  <a name="scp"></a>
    1.27  <h3>Transfer of remote files with scp</h3>
    1.28  <p>
    1.29 -To copy a file from your computer to another, scp can be utilized in the following way. To copy a file
    1.30 +To copy a file from one computer to another, scp can be utilized in the following ways. To copy a file
    1.31  named page.html to a remote directory of the user (don't forget the <code>:</code> after the machine name or 
    1.32  IP address):
    1.33  </p>
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/index.html	Tue May 13 22:50:13 2008 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/index.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -72,9 +72,8 @@
     2.4  	<li><a href="handbook/">Handbook</a> - SliTaz Handbook. LiveCD usage,
     2.5  	 package management, network or system administration
     2.6  	and specific instructions.</li>
     2.7 -	<li><a href="cookbook/">Cookbook</a> - SliTaz Cookbook contains the Tazwok manual and also
     2.8 -	provides instructions on how to use the wok and package
     2.9 -	receipts.</li>
    2.10 +	<li><a href="cookbook/">Cookbook</a> - SliTaz Cookbook. Tazwok manual and 
    2.11 +	instructions on how to use the wok and package receipts.</li>
    2.12  	<li><a href="manuals/tazusb.en.html">TazUSB manual</a> -  SliTaz LiveUSB
    2.13  	utility.</li>
    2.14  	<li>Users speaking English can get support and ask for new texts on the
     3.1 --- a/en/get/index.html	Tue May 13 22:50:13 2008 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/get/index.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -90,10 +90,10 @@
     3.4  <ul>
     3.5  	<li>France - Pimentvert mirror (100 Mps)
     3.6      <a href="http://mirror.pimentvert.com/slitaz/">HTTP</a>
     3.7 -	<li>France - TuxFamily mirror by
     3.8 +	<li>France - TuxFamily mirror 
     3.9  	<a href="http://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/">HTTP</a> or
    3.10  	<a href="ftp://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/">FTP</a></li>
    3.11 -	<li>USA - Miroir de Klhrevolution
    3.12 +	<li>USA - Klhrevolution mirror
    3.13  	<a href="http://www.tuxhelper.info/slitaz/">HTTP</a></li>
    3.14  </ul>
    3.15