website rev 47
Minor edits (en)
author | Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org> |
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date | Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 (2008-05-17) |
parents | 65881025ee62 |
children | 658fcc712636 |
files | en/doc/cookbook/index.html en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html en/doc/handbook/livecd.html en/doc/handbook/network-config.html en/get/index.html |
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1.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/index.html Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000 1.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/index.html Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 1.3 @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ 1.4 1.5 <ul> 1.6 <li><a href="wok-tools.html">Wok & Tools.</a> - SliTaz Developer Tools.</li> 1.7 - <li><a href="receipts.html">Receipts.</a> - Receipts for creating packages.</li> 1.8 + <li><a href="receipts.html">Receipts.</a> - Receipts for creating SliTaz packages.</li> 1.9 <li><a href="../manuals/tazwok.en.html">Tazwok manual.</a> - Manual for compiling & generating packages for SliTaz.</li> 1.10 </ul> 1.11
2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000 2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 2.3 @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@ 2.4 and creates a compressed file <code>rootfs.gz</code> in the preceding directory: 2.5 </p> 2.6 <pre> # find . -print | cpio -o -H newc | lzma e -si -so > ../rootfs.gz 2.7 - Ou avec gzip : 2.8 + Or with gzip: 2.9 # find . -print | cpio -o -H newc | gzip -9 > ../rootfs.gz 2.10 </pre> 2.11 <p>
3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000 3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 3.3 @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ 3.4 <li><a href="#modprobe">Option : modprobe=modules</a> - Load needed Kernel 3.5 modules.</li> 3.6 <li><a href="#laptop">Option : laptop</a> - Load ac and battery modules.</li> 3.7 - <li><a href="#prev">Option : previous</a> - Rollback to previous file system.</li> 3.8 + <li><a href="#prev">Option : previous</a> - Rollback to previous filesystem.</li> 3.9 <li><a href="#sessions">Sessions</a> - Logins, passwords and X.</li> 3.10 3.11 </ul> 3.12 @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ 3.13 <a name="prev"></a> 3.14 <h3>Option : previous</h3> 3.15 <p> 3.16 -Used by the Tazusb utility to rollback to a previous file system: 3.17 +Used by the Tazusb utility to rollback to a previous filesystem: 3.18 </p> 3.19 <pre> 3.20 slitaz previous
4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000 4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 4.3 @@ -232,14 +232,14 @@ 4.4 function named: <code>iptables_rules()</code>, this contains all of the iptables 4.5 commands to launch when the firewall starts. To delete a rule, It is advisable 4.6 to comment out the corresponding line with a <code>#</code>. It is not 4.7 -advisable to leave the function completely empty, if you want to disable 4.8 +advisable to leave the function completely empty, if you want to disable the 4.9 iptables rules just add "no" to the variable IPTABLES_RULES= in the 4.10 configuration file. 4.11 </p> 4.12 <p> 4.13 Here's an example of using iptables rules, it refuses all connections incoming 4.14 and outgoing, only allowing connections on the localhost, the local network, 4.15 -ports 80 and 22 used respectively by the web server HTTP and SSH secure server 4.16 +ports 80 and 22 respectively used by the web server HTTP and SSH secure server 4.17 and port 21 for FTP; so it's very restrictive. 4.18 </p> 4.19 <pre class="script">
5.1 --- a/en/get/index.html Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000 5.2 +++ b/en/get/index.html Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 5.3 @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ 5.4 <ul> 5.5 <li>France - Pimentvert mirror (100 Mps) 5.6 <a href="http://mirror.pimentvert.com/slitaz/">HTTP</a> 5.7 - <li>France - TuxFamily mirror 5.8 + <li>France - TuxFamily mirror by 5.9 <a href="http://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/">HTTP</a> or 5.10 <a href="ftp://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/">FTP</a></li> 5.11 <li>USA - Klhrevolution mirror