website rev 47

Minor edits (en)
author Paul Issott <paul@slitaz.org>
date Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000 (2008-05-17)
parents 65881025ee62
children 658fcc712636
files en/doc/cookbook/index.html en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html en/doc/handbook/livecd.html en/doc/handbook/network-config.html en/get/index.html
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     1.1 --- a/en/doc/cookbook/index.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     1.2 +++ b/en/doc/cookbook/index.html	Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000
     1.3 @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@
     1.4  
     1.5  <ul>
     1.6  	<li><a href="wok-tools.html">Wok &amp; Tools.</a> - SliTaz Developer Tools.</li>
     1.7 -	<li><a href="receipts.html">Receipts.</a> - Receipts for creating packages.</li>
     1.8 +	<li><a href="receipts.html">Receipts.</a> - Receipts for creating SliTaz packages.</li>
     1.9  	<li><a href="../manuals/tazwok.en.html">Tazwok manual.</a> - Manual for compiling &amp; generating packages for SliTaz.</li>
    1.10  </ul>
    1.11  
     2.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     2.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/hacking-livecd.html	Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000
     2.3 @@ -272,7 +272,7 @@
     2.4  and creates a compressed file <code>rootfs.gz</code> in the preceding directory:
     2.5  </p>
     2.6  <pre> # find . -print | cpio -o -H newc | lzma e -si -so &gt; ../rootfs.gz
     2.7 - Ou avec gzip :
     2.8 + Or with gzip:
     2.9   # find . -print | cpio -o -H newc | gzip -9 &gt; ../rootfs.gz
    2.10  </pre>
    2.11  <p>
     3.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     3.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/livecd.html	Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000
     3.3 @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@
     3.4  	<li><a href="#modprobe">Option : modprobe=modules</a> - Load needed Kernel
     3.5  	modules.</li>
     3.6  	<li><a href="#laptop">Option : laptop</a> - Load ac and battery modules.</li>
     3.7 -	<li><a href="#prev">Option : previous</a> - Rollback to previous file system.</li>
     3.8 +	<li><a href="#prev">Option : previous</a> - Rollback to previous filesystem.</li>
     3.9  	<li><a href="#sessions">Sessions</a> - Logins, passwords and X.</li>
    3.10  	
    3.11  </ul>
    3.12 @@ -201,7 +201,7 @@
    3.13  <a name="prev"></a>
    3.14  <h3>Option : previous</h3>
    3.15  <p>
    3.16 -Used by the Tazusb utility to rollback to a previous file system:
    3.17 +Used by the Tazusb utility to rollback to a previous filesystem:
    3.18  </p>
    3.19  <pre>
    3.20  slitaz previous
     4.1 --- a/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     4.2 +++ b/en/doc/handbook/network-config.html	Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000
     4.3 @@ -232,14 +232,14 @@
     4.4  function named: <code>iptables_rules()</code>, this contains all of the iptables
     4.5  commands to launch when the firewall starts. To delete a rule, It is advisable
     4.6  to comment out the corresponding line with a <code>#</code>. It is not 
     4.7 -advisable to leave the function completely empty, if you want to disable 
     4.8 +advisable to leave the function completely empty, if you want to disable the
     4.9  iptables rules just add "no" to the variable IPTABLES_RULES= in the 
    4.10  configuration file.
    4.11  </p>
    4.12  <p>
    4.13  Here's an example of using iptables rules, it refuses all connections incoming
    4.14  and outgoing, only allowing connections on the localhost, the local network, 
    4.15 -ports 80 and 22 used respectively by the web server HTTP and SSH secure server
    4.16 +ports 80 and 22 respectively used by the web server HTTP and SSH secure server
    4.17  and port 21 for FTP; so it's very restrictive.
    4.18  </p>
    4.19  <pre class="script">
     5.1 --- a/en/get/index.html	Wed May 14 17:34:15 2008 +0000
     5.2 +++ b/en/get/index.html	Sat May 17 11:19:39 2008 +0000
     5.3 @@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
     5.4  <ul>
     5.5  	<li>France - Pimentvert mirror (100 Mps)
     5.6      <a href="http://mirror.pimentvert.com/slitaz/">HTTP</a>
     5.7 -	<li>France - TuxFamily mirror 
     5.8 +	<li>France - TuxFamily mirror by
     5.9  	<a href="http://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/">HTTP</a> or
    5.10  	<a href="ftp://download.tuxfamily.org/slitaz/">FTP</a></li>
    5.11  	<li>USA - Klhrevolution mirror